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    Star Gazer: pony, pegasus, stalion... um, wait, mare... That's where things get tricky. All Star wants to do is travel around the world. Too bad bears, crazy families, insane dinners, chaotic weddings, and pompous princes stand in her, er, his way. There's also the whole gender flipping thing.

    Somewhat of a sequel to Cloudy Stars. Some parts of the story will take place before Cloudy Stars and some will take place after. Either way, Star certainly is in for quite a few weird days.

    First Published
    20th Apr 2012
    Last Modified
    8th Sep 2012

    Comments ( 42 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh dear lord.

    Poor bastard...

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 4d ago · · ·
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    You know, this reminds me so much of an old show I used to watch called Monster by Mistake.

    Also, awesome to see a follow up to Cloudy Stars.:pinkiehappy: Your awesome!

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Is this what I think it is?  A (sortof) SEQUEL?! YES YES YES!!! :yay:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Only tags are Blueblood and OC.

    Dear Celestia.

    After reading the chapter, my suspicions have been confirmed.

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>479061

    Oh but I want to keep the others a surprise :derpytongue2:

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    (Well, on chapter 2 anyway :pinkiesmile:)

    I can't wait to see Blueblood (and Star) squirm.

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Well Star looks like she/he is in for one hell of a time.

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I await the inevitable.

    #9 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 2d ago · · ·
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    That teaser.

    I just... what.

    Either there's another pony named Star or Cloudy, it's a dream sequence. or there are some serious shenanigans going on there.

    #10 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Okay, so... what hell is with the teaser.

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Dat Teaser.  This is going to be AWESOME! :rainbowkiss:

    #12 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    And this is why I LOVE gb stories!:heart::pinkiehappy::heart::pinkiehappy:

    #13 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    loving every single solitary second of this!:rainbowkiss::heart::pinkiehappy::heart:

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 8h ago · · ·
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    AWE. SOME.

    Seriously. This will be amazing. Great chapter, by the way! :twilightsmile:

    #15 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 7h ago · · ·
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    Seriously. Dat teaser.

    Great chapter, by the way! :twilightsmile:

    #16 · Chapter 4 · 59w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This is getting really good now. I like how you included the wedding but didn't make it the focus. This copy of Cloudy is odd, but still enjoyable.

    Also will Fancypants be making any more appearances?

    #17 · Chapter 4 · 59w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh, of course it would be a Changeling. I don't know how I missed that.

    #18 · Chapter 4 · 59w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Cool.

    #19 · Chapter 4 · 57w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Lol. Just... Lol.

    #20 · Chapter 5 · 57w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #21 · Chapter 5 · 57w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hah, a changeling ambassador. Changelings would be the greatest spies ever.

    #22 · Chapter 5 · 57w, 2d ago · · ·
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    LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

    wait that wasn't funny...

    #23 · Chapter 5 · 57w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Aww, how nice. This was well worth the wait.:pinkiehappy:

    #24 · Chapter 5 · 46w, 9h ago · · ·
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    I was wondering if you were going to be releasing a new chapter any time soon, or whether or not you've abandoned this venture. This is a particularly fun tale that I would hate to see join the ranks of countless other unfinished stories.:fluttercry:

    #25 · Chapter 5 · 46w, 8h ago · · ·
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    >>1005138

    I'm having a little writer's block on this and some of my other fics.

    #26 · Chapter 6 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I was so confused for the first few paragraphs.

    #27 · Chapter 6 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This was a nice change of pace, but I want more Switchy-Gazer!

    Switchy-Gazer is best pony.

    #28 · Chapter 6 · 45w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1013911  What he said times infinite.

    #29 · Chapter 7 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Awesome.

    Fantastic.

    #30 · Chapter 7 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    “They leg eggs.”

    Either that's a weird typo, or you used a really bad Dutch-/Germanism.

    Either way, you should correct it.

    Also, not trying to troll here, but I've got a genuine question regarding the gender change.

    What would happen if female!Star was having sex with a stallion and then sneezed?

    Not trying to sound weird, but just genuinely curious.

    #31 · Chapter 7 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1225728

    Go take it up with the Ranma 1/2 fanbase

    #32 · Chapter 7 · 40w, 5d ago · · ·
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    We need the next one now!

    Very good chapter too!

    #33 · Chapter 7 · 40w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh god this is going to be amazing.

    Update fasterrrrrrr.

    #34 · Chapter 8 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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    The Elder Scrolls 6: Skyrim 2

    #35 · Chapter 8 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Noooo Dream!:fluttercry:

    #36 · Chapter 8 · 40w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Dragons have claws, not talons. Talons are for birds.

    #37 · Chapter 8 · 29w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Why this cancelled? :fluttercry:

    #38 · Chapter 6 · 23w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Ok, this chapter was oddly placed in the story, but still worth a quick read. Personally I think this should have been at the end or the beginning of the fic, but what do I know?:rainbowwild:

    #39 · Chapter 7 · 23w, 5d ago · · ·
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    After last chapter it's really nice to get back into the narrative. I'm really interested in what'll happen during this undercover stuff now, especially how the amulet is messing with Star's 'abilities.':raritywink:

    #40 · Chapter 8 · 23w, 5d ago · · ·
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    As a fan of transformation stories I liked all the little bits and details of Star going over herself as a dragon. The little twist with Dream leads to a few fun possibilities, and I do look forward to seeing the actual migration.

    However, I do need to call you out on the whole 'Ponies don't cross their arms' thing. In the show ponies have crossed their forelegs when sitting down or flying. Rainbow Dash is the best example of this.

    Also I see you have cancelled the story, this saddens me but it is your decision in the end.:pinkiesad2:

    #41 · Chapter 8 · 5w, 2d ago · · ·
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    FMP

    I need moar Gazing at the Sky.

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