OMG...Deltora quest. this is awesome.

Interesting.... I read Quest Shadowlands and Dragons so.... favoriting....

Wow, I had forgotten about these books. Never expected to find something envolving them here. Now before I read this I need to re-read all the books.

>>477705477705 Really I never expected to find this many people who read them here.

You got yourself a favourite.

Its been years since i read those books and i don't remember anything past the first series.....stupid memory.....still, you make me wan't to read them all over again. Or, if the anime people have done the rest and MADMAN has dubbed them, watch them!

I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Keep the awesome coming!!

Honestly was not expecting this crossover.....like ever.

Consider it read.

>>492507492507 As much as I like the anime, I'd say read the books again.

>>492511492511 Which is exactly why I made it.

True, nothing like a good book.

>>493606493606 Wasn't there only a Deltora "Quest" anime? I did think it was well made though considering the plot.

>>496675496675 It was a faithful adaptation of the books, but in my opinion they could have made it a lot better.

ooh... right I forgot the Forest of Silence turned people into trees.

>>501912501912 Wrong location.

>>502377502377 Right it's been what 5 years since I last read any of them and the anime could've been a lot better. especially if they had continued it into the other books.

i don't know what to say...

I'm not good at nit picking....

Well for starters I think a cold opening would be better, with Applejack already searching for her hat. you could lay down her situation while that's underway.

The sequence of actions and movement within a setting should be fluid and seem natural. You have to think about how you would experience or see it as if you were there.

[

Lost in a strange land and hunted by hairless apes in dreads, Applejack searched for her favorite hat. It was slightly chilly and vicious gusts kept whipping small debris. This wasn't one of her best mornings.“Could this day get any worse?”

In immediate response, a pebble the size of a bit zoom up and hit her square between the eyes.  “Ah just had t’ ask...”

After taking a moment for the spots to disappear from her eyes, AJ went back to searching for her hat.

After a minute or so, she discovered it lodged between two stones sloping into a rocky outcropping. Braving the uneven terrain she carefully pulled it out and flipped it onto her head...

]

yeah....there you go.. you have to work movement and descriptions like that.

then again, that's my habitual writing style so it's not flawless in any way.

>>509591509591 I see what you mean.

Also, which character do you want to see next?

>>478137478137 I've seen the anime and read the books, now this? I'm excited.

>>509707509707 I say Rainbow Dash.

I think twilight was the best you could start of with. some kind of order of the scenes should be set up.

OH I remember tha masked ones! they were in dragons and they have those enchanted masks that don't come off it almost tore Lief's face off right?

they cut off fingers if you get it wrong right? or in this case horns...

>>515658515658 And then the toes.

Allow me to be second comment ( loses all royal formalness) THAT LINK WAS TOATLY AWESOME!!!

>>477705477705Puuufff i haven't read them.BUT I LOVE THIS STORY

I swear on the power of Sirius's sword to continue reading this amazing fanfic. I am glad you are a part of. My group.

>>520287520287 Don't worry, I won't be spoiling any major events.

Need more chapters now I know how prince sptada feels

that's all?

oooh gotta go to the mountains. Well I hope she has fun with the Dread Gnomes.

11 chapters and still one day one? I must really skimp out on details if I'm on my eleventh chapter and half way though.

Ooh maze of the beast I remember that.

Ah'm in yur story, readin' yur chapters.

Hm hm ,Deltora Quest seems like Eragon ,of course the story is totally different (lol even the map is somehow identical!)

>>544167544167 I hope you like it.

>>544172544172

If it involves mythical/legendary/epic creatures/places/fights  ,Sure i'll enjoy!

What just happened?

I used to read the Deltora Quest series way back when in like, 4th and 5th grade :P

Sweet!

>>548156548156: Right back at you.

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>>552132552132 Why so sad?

>>554077554077 I keep running out of chapters

>>554517554517 I try to make it daily, but complications keep arising.

I envy your writing speed.

>>560017560017 Speed is nothing, quality is all that matters.

>>560042560042 pff...well at the speed I put out work my quality doesn't make up for it.

>>560053560053 I'm trying to be supportive

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>>544167544167

I think Deltora quest came first...and its directed at younger readers.