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  • T Northern Lights

    Through a groundbreaking discovery in Canterlot, Tyler is tossed into the world of Equestria. Can "he" return to Earth?
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  • E Mischief Makers

    What happens when the main six play a game with two mischievous mares?
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  • E Rhyming Revolution

    Zecora wakes up one morning to find that everypony is speaking in rhyme
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  • E Winter Solstice Celebration

    What's the best thing to do when there's nothing else? Throw a party, of course.
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  • 8w, 2d
    New Chapter Up

    Because of Knighty's recent post about the update system being buggy, I decided to make this blog-post to inform you all about the new chapter of Northern Lights. So... go read it if you'd like. If not, that's OK.

    On the plus side, this one didn't take me three months to make.

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  • 13w, 5d

    Northern Lights made it into the feature box with the release of chapter nine.... I... wow. I don't even know what to say. I never thought that a story of mine would make it to the box since Morphing is Magic — and that was a collaboration with Tricondon... wow... does this mean I'm going to have more pressure on me to keep the story "good?"

    Sorry if you were expecting something more in this blog... I'm just in so much shock I don't know what to say...

    14 comments · 106 views
  • 13w, 6d
    Status Update... Some... Number...

    Hello all my loyal subjects. I have some good news; chapter nine of Northern Lights is officially written. Once I get a look over from my faithful editor NaughSaught, it'll be ready for publication. At present it's just over 6200 words, but I expect that number to change once the editing process is complete.

    Once again, I want to apologize for making you all wait. I've been going through a lot of emotional trouble in real life, but I'm still trying to commit at least ten minutes each night to writing. Most of the times I only got maybe a paragraph done, and other days I had to edit what I had because I couldn't think of how to write out my thoughts.

    With that said, expect the next chapter up within the next few days. Unless of course I cannot find NaughtSaught, in witch case I might have to spend a few weeks looking for a new editor.

    2 comments · 90 views
  • 15w, 4d
    Greetings from Canada. Part Four: Images.

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  • 15w, 5d
    Greetings from Baltimore. Part Three: The One-Hundredth Blog Post!

    You know, there's something fitting about my one-hundredth blog post being about the last day of Bronycon 2014. Or at least it seems it to me.

    Today my sister slept in, so I went to the con alone. First thing I did was pick up several commissions I'd ordered yesterday. I think they turned out wonderful, but as I said yesterday, I can't show them to you until I get back to Canada tomorrow.

    After I got my pictures and did a little more shopping, including purchasing a ponified version of Wizardmon from Digimon. I made my way to a panel about writing adventure fanfiction. It was a very informative panel, with veteran fanfiction writers giving their advice on how to write good characters, action scenes, and proper pacing. Sadly I don't know their names or the stories they've written, but the information was worth listening to. What's more, I got into a conversation with some fellow listeners about fanfictions, and what we think makes good and bad ones.

    After that, I made my way to a panel about psychological disorders and how to understand them. This was a rather fascinating panel, and really helped me learn more about disorders like Post Dramatic Stress Disorder, and Narcissistic Personality Disorder. Hopefully this'll help me with Northern Lights, and writing any future characters with mental issues. When it was over, I had a small talk to the guy running it about the affects of isolation, and then spoke with a girl who was giving away free hugs.

    By this point my sister had woken up and met up with me. Together we headed to the Bronies React panel, where ACRacebest and his friends showed premiers of his new videos and answered some fan questions. It was fun enough, but it was more of a time waster until the closing ceremonies, where the newest of all brony games was being created — waiting in line.

    The closing ceremonies themselves weren't as memorable as last years, but it was still neat. You think the con is pretty packed when you see all the patrons walking around, but when they're put into a single room, the size and scope becomes more central. From what the people in charge said, over ninety six-thousand people attended this year's Bronycon; which is almost a thousand more then last year. Sadly, most of the guests of honor had left by this time, so the most exciting part of the closing ceremony was when the staff fired t-shirts into the crowd. Sadly, I didn't get any.

    So, in the end, this Bronycon was a blast. While the closing ceremony was better last year, the panels were fun and informative, and I loved talking to people about the show and the fandom. I love the art pieces I bought, and I'm really looking forward to showing you the commissions I got (especially you, Tri). If I had one regret it's that I didn't get to go with anyone I know. I didn't meet anyone I know from FIMFiction, and with the exception of a few talks in-between panels it was just me and my sister. Still, it was an informative and fun trip, and I hope to be able to make it again next year.

    Tomorrow I begin the long drive home... and no, I am not counting the American Flags this time. You guys already smothered me in your stars and stripes on the way down, what more do you want?!

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  • ...

While welcoming some new ponies to Ponyville, the main six and spike are challenged to a scavenger hunt. They all accept, but who said it had to take place in town, or even Equestria? As soon as the sealing words were said, they were whisped away, to a land of seven tribes and a great evil. A land once known as the Land of Dragons.

NOTE: My Little Pony is property of Hasbro and everything else belongs to Emily Rodda. If you have not read the Deltora books, don't worry this won't contain any major spoilers. This will include elements form all the books, including the companion ones.

If you have any criticism or ways I can improve, please tell me.

First Published
20th Apr 2012
Last Modified
2nd Jul 2012

OMG...Deltora quest. this is awesome.

Interesting.... I read Quest Shadowlands and Dragons so.... favoriting....

Wow, I had forgotten about these books. Never expected to find something envolving them here. Now before I read this I need to re-read all the books.

>>477705 Really I never expected to find this many people who read them here.:twilightsheepish:

You got yourself a favourite:pinkiehappy:.

Its been years since i read those books and i don't remember anything past the first series.....stupid memory.....still, you make me wan't to read them all over again. Or, if the anime people have done the rest and MADMAN has dubbed them, watch them:pinkiehappy:!

I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Keep the awesome coming!!

Honestly was not expecting this ever.

Consider it read.

>>492507 As much as I like the anime, I'd say read the books again.:twilightsmile:

>>492511 Which is exactly why I made it.:pinkiehappy:

True, nothing like a good book.

>>493606 Wasn't there only a Deltora "Quest" anime? I did think it was well made though considering the plot.

>>496675 It was a faithful adaptation of the books, but in my opinion they could have made it a lot better.

#11 · 134w, 2d ago · · · The Spring ·

ooh... right I forgot the Forest of Silence turned people into trees.

#12 · 134w, 1d ago · · · The Spring ·

>>501912 Wrong location.:fluttershysad:

#13 · 134w, 1d ago · · · The Spring ·

>>502377 Right it's been what 5 years since I last read any of them and the anime could've been a lot better. especially if they had continued it into the other books.

i don't know what to say...

I'm not good at nit picking....

Well for starters I think a cold opening would be better, with Applejack already searching for her hat. you could lay down her situation while that's underway.

The sequence of actions and movement within a setting should be fluid and seem natural. You have to think about how you would experience or see it as if you were there.


Lost in a strange land and hunted by hairless apes in dreads, Applejack searched for her favorite hat. It was slightly chilly and vicious gusts kept whipping small debris. This wasn't one of her best mornings.“Could this day get any worse?”

In immediate response, a pebble the size of a bit zoom up and hit her square between the eyes.  “Ah just had t’ ask...”

After taking a moment for the spots to disappear from her eyes, AJ went back to searching for her hat.

After a minute or so, she discovered it lodged between two stones sloping into a rocky outcropping. Braving the uneven terrain she carefully pulled it out and flipped it onto her head...


yeah....there you go.. you have to work movement and descriptions like that.

then again, that's my habitual writing style so it's not flawless in any way.

>>509591 I see what you mean.

Also, which character do you want to see next?

>>478137 I've seen the anime and read the books, now this? I'm excited.

>>509707 I say Rainbow Dash.

I think twilight was the best you could start of with. some kind of order of the scenes should be set up.

#19 · 133w, 6d ago · · · Captive ·

OH I remember tha masked ones! they were in dragons and they have those enchanted masks that don't come off it almost tore Lief's face off right?

they cut off fingers if you get it wrong right? or in this case horns...

>>515658 And then the toes.

Allow me to be second comment ( loses all royal formalness) THAT LINK WAS TOATLY AWESOME!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

>>477705Puuufff i haven't read them.BUT I LOVE THIS STORY:rainbowkiss:

I swear on the power of Sirius's sword to continue reading this amazing fanfic. I am glad you are a part of. My group.:pinkiehappy:

>>520287 Don't worry, I won't be spoiling any major events.

#26 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Broom ·

Need more chapters now I know how prince sptada feels

#27 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Kindness ·

:fluttercry: that's all?:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

#28 · 133w, 5d ago · · · Kindness ·

oooh gotta go to the mountains. Well I hope she has fun with the Dread Gnomes.

11 chapters and still one day one? I must really skimp out on details if I'm on my eleventh chapter and half way though.

Ooh maze of the beast I remember that.

Ah'm in yur story, readin' yur chapters.

Hm hm ,Deltora Quest seems like Eragon ,of course the story is totally different (lol even the map is somehow identical!)

>>544167 I hope you like it.:pinkiehappy:


If it involves mythical/legendary/epic creatures/places/fights  ,Sure i'll enjoy!

#36 · 133w, 4h ago · · · Escape ·

What just happened?

I used to read the Deltora Quest series way back when in like, 4th and 5th grade :P

>>548156: Right back at you.:moustache:

>>554077 I keep running out of chapters:fluttercry:

>>554517 I try to make it daily, but complications keep arising.:applecry:

I envy your writing speed.

>>560017 Speed is nothing, quality is all that matters.

>>560042 pff...well at the speed I put out work my quality doesn't make up for it.


I think Deltora quest came first...and its directed at younger readers.

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