WOOt GOOD CHAPTAH
A very good chapter sir. The Ending was emotional to me.
I really like how the stories evolving and becoming more intense as the storyline progresses. The novel is over the top and very creative. To some people like Hevia they see ponies are crazy but to true fans it pays homage to them. I can't wait to read more, keep up the good work. BTW cupcakes are tasty
*me at the edge of my seat after reading the cupcake part screaming* DON'T EAT THE CUPCAKE DON'T EAT THE CUPCAKE!
Make him turn back into the World Eater
>>533144533144 I agree
In due time...in due time.
Nice My Little Dashie reference. Also, FIRST
>can transform to anything
Uh... ok then.
Now that's just silly.
>can reach speed of light
Alright, I'm starting to get a little pissed here... Regardless, I'm still going to keep reading even though your character seems a bit... overpowered (understatement of the century). I hope you aren't offended by my musings; I just had to do it. Anywho, don't let lil' ol' me stop you from writing! Keep on truckin', friend-o!
God dammit, Inrei! Y U SO OVERPOWERED?!
YEHS WANTS MORE AWESOME GOOD STORY (BTW IM NOT YELLING WITH TXT THIS IS HOW I TYPE.)
YES YESSSSSSSSSS YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
That made me laugh
For realsies, bro! Why is he so overpowered!? Y'all seriously pushing it here bro, because this is fucking ridiculous. Don't take my opinion seriously (please), I don't want to persuade you to stop writing just because of one butthurt critic. Yes, I understand that as an author, you have every right to break every rule in the book (pardon the joke) but shit like this just pisses me off even further (my personal opinion). Keep doin' what yer doin', bro.
I understand your view point, but the reason why Inrei is overpowered is because he was never really human, he's a god.
*sigh* Alright, I've calmed down a bit but at least tone it down a little, k?
Ineri must always be the overpowered devourer of worlds
heck op or not means nothing along as story is still enjoyable it shoudn't matter......im tempted to draw a image of leviation wraped around the planet but im too lazy......but gods i have awesome picture in my head.....
Touchie chapter mate!
The cupcake chapter made me weirded out a bit, but anyways
Although I think that Discord disapproves of what u did there
I consider Discord a more crazy Tobuscus, so even if he did do something, I may find it funny lol.
Don't worry, I have the whole story planned, I just have to type it. Inrei will remain overpowered (comes with the god territory), but *spoiler* there will be others.
That chapter was... amazing.
WHY THE FUCK DOES THIS STORY ONLY HAVE 22 LIKES!!!!!!!!!!! IT DESERVES WAY MORE
>still pissed about overpowered oc
*sigh* Let's get this over with.
I'm not mad at you, just overpowered oc's.
*Emails story to chuck norris*
*Gets email back*:
Chuck Norris approves.
Dafuk? why is NO ONE commenting on this great story?????/ this must not go unpunishede!
As long people enjoy MLS, I'm content. And I'm glad readers like you appreciate my story to the point of wanting it to be better known. I think the reason it's as hidden as it is, is because when I started uploading the chapters, it was during my spring quarter of college; so the only time I could add parts 1-6 were at 2 and 3 in the morning, giving it less time to be read since most are normally asleep by then. Also because of the fact that I'm basically a new writer, people are probably not sure what to expect with My Little Sinner.
>>745599745599 Well I think your story is great! I even may think you could be n my top 3 . Im ok with the over pwered oc, The only thing i hate about over powered oc's Is that they use there poweres like every five seconds! But im glad your not doing that. So, keep it up!
Woa, Intense! o_o Next chapter gonna be interesting indeed! :)
WHAT?!?!?! ONLY 1 COMMENT???? THIS DESERVES MORE MORE!!!!!!
edit: dont stop writing bro, this story is amazing
But I will continue nonetheless. Keep doin' what you're doin', bro.
This guy is like the friggin Avatar, except add Mind bending or something.
I'm so sorry, but i'm gonna have to leave this story now. I just can't stand when people bring some 'ALL F'CKING POWERFUL BEING/ARMY/ETC THAT LIKE DESTROYS THE WORLD. I would've loved it if he just went leviathan and then had to do shit for the princesses or something to atone for his actions.
dammit this waas getting good
Woa! Intense. But... WHAT will happen? WHEN will it be? HOW will Inrie solve his life problems? WILL Rainbow Dash be involved? WHY am I asking YOU all these questions? o_O
Still pissed, still good.
Well if you were hoping for the next chapter, it just got uploaded.
Force answers force, war breeds war, and death only brings death. To break this vicious circle one must do more than just act without any thought or doubt..... is that a metro quote?
Metro 2033 does have that line, but this quote has been used in other books and movies. I rather like this quote because of its meaning (it's the reason why I used it.)
Such turn of events! I could see the battle myself!
I was actually reading the battle scene listening to this! Belive me, it's alot more epic! :)
I'm gonna just go over here and sit in the corner... nice work, man. You already know how I feel.
Interestingly enough, one of my friends showed me this before I wrote this chapter and it has been stuck in my head for a while.