Before Equestria there was the Empire, ruled by a King and Queen who loved their ponies with all their hearts. The Crystal Heart was the Highest Law in the entire Kingdom, able to denounce any King or Queen and instate a new Prince or Princess who was more worthy of the throne. Very few ponies know the story behind the origins of the heart and, until Prince Sombra stumbles on a old fairytale, no one thinks it is really alive.
Unfortunately She was.
Silken Blade has slept for hundreds of years in her crystal prison, waiting for when somepony would free her and let her fly among the Stars again. Her Curse: She is bound to her Savior til their death.
Chapters (8)
New Sombra Story.............i.ytimg.com/vi/P3ALwKeSEYs/maxresdefault.jpg YESSSSSSSSSSSS
5816346 There can never be enough Sombra.
5816350 another Sombra fan
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5816363 He had so much potential!
How could I not love him!?! His back story is lacking though.
5816373 very true
I hope he makes a comeback in season 5
5816442 hope yes hope
SOMBRA NEEDS TO BE IN SEASON FIVE QUICK PROTESST UNTILL IT HAPPENS
5816459 I'm on it
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Hmm, I like this new pegasus. I feel like watching her and Sombra will be most entertaining.
Please continue.
5823042 *starts writing next chapter* I CAN'T STOP!
5823659
I want more too.
5823842 on it
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5823867 Omg that seems like a terrifying combination
5823867 ok loving it but my only issue don't....I repeat DONT turn her into a Mary Sue but YEAHHHHHH SOMBRA WOOOOH
I'm sooo confused......backstorys will clear it all up
5827674 Everything is relevant
Mind walking for the win. This will be a good way to progress in many directions. Looking forward to more.
5830952 Well my Four day weekend is almost up and I probably won't have as much time to write but I'll try to update as often as possible!
Moarrrrr
Starswirl ehhhh
hopefully you do this right and not fall on your face but still love da story
I note that the fifth friend doesn't merit mention here. That mentions only four which I assume are Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Applejack.
5857660 That took me a moment. I didn't even realize I forgot to mention her.
Moarrrrrrrrrrrr
please
5875437 Seconded.
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5875476 I'm on it! I've already started the next Chapter.
5875497
I think you dropped a sentence or a paragraph there.
5875517 New Chapter's up!
5917343 I just now saw it I never got any notification so its been a week and I could've read this sooner
5917343 I don't think anyone saw it
I think you may have started to be inconsistent in coloring each tale:
This for example:
-Appears as if it should be red. The colored text is very enjoyable but when it is inconsistent it becomes confusing.
A little confusing, especially the way the colors are used in this chapter and some paragraphs seem to blend together.
But perhaps I'm just overfond of using the enter key in my stories. Will continue reading.
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Still lots of confusing color usage and paragraphs blending together. A tip for transitioning to flashbacks, different narrators ,etc. in chapters would be to use that line divider I've seen utilized here a couple times or some sort of '...'
Such as:
(Sorry, I'm just so fond of the enter key.)
*Do you mean 'mithril'? From Lord of The Rings/The Hobbit/Insert More Middle-earth related Tolkien Works?
thousand?
This makes it sound like she wants to go shopping at a store called Quill & Parchment with those capital letters.
I'm.
Could you explain a little more about Solaria, Selene, Celestia, and Luna in this world? I'm trying to draw the lines to connect them here and all I can guess is that the first two are the parents of the latter. I understand that they (Sombra and Silk) are from the past but why are the referring to Solaris in present tense? Is he still around? Blah blah blah?
Just a minor spelling error.
I think there should be an apostrophe there. This line was very funny and gave me the impression
SombraThis Sombra hates repair bills and taxes. The fact that he more then likely came before indoor plumbing also supports my claim.This is too beautiful....
Whoa! Whoa! Whoa, there Honestverse Sombra you almost sounded like Iceverse Sombra for a moment.
So this guy is still alive? Intrigued.
But where is the pink one*? Shouldn't she at least be mentioned? I can't recall if she was.
*If you get that reference from the Iceverse give yourself a cookie.
So the Honestverse has its own pink one?
She what?
"Please sir, can I have some more?"
Twibra?
Why is this story in the Twibra community? It doesn't seem to have any Twibra...
I don't think that's what happened.. I think someone found a way to turn the hoofmaiden who wore the armor into the crystal heart. Sombra freed her from her current state as the crystal heart that is why she serves him. I think.
So Sombra and Starswirl are the baddies in this fic...
Because she was made into the crystal heart!
Three journeys...
One World...
One Story
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