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A Long time ago, But not so long it would seem,
was a place you have perhaps seen on TV.
The story you are about to be told,
depitcs what happens when 2 worlds unfold
Now, you've probably wondered where Nightmare Night comes from;
if you haven't! I'd say it's tim you begun!
Just in case anybody was wondering, we've had a MLP/TNBC crossover before -- and it's quite good.
Check it --> The Nightmare After Nightmare Night
>>472979 In the words of Pewdiepie: I DON'T CAAAARE! (Jk, I already read that one, very good story.)
>>472991 Ok, just finished reading the part you've uploaded. Pretty good so far, besides the few run on sentences, wrong parts of speech and a few of these: "branches snapped when no one stepping on them" (should be stepped). Otherwise, this is pretty good! I would like to be the proofreader guy, though, just to make things 'better' I suppose. May I? 
-Grey
Yeah. here's my take on that series:
#1: The plot was way too straightforward; it seemed like it was over in like twenty minutes even though it was actually about two hours (counting commercials of course)
#2: Very poorly written and repetitive. It got very old very fast.
#3: The only one that was even remotely entertaining, but it still lacked any real hook to it.
#4: What. The. F***. Was. That? For one thing, the plot was terrible, and for another thing, they just randomly decided to change the main character's name and expected nobody to notice it.
This isn't the first TNBC/MLP Crossover I've read... and the other one was impressive. I hate to say it, but you have quite a rival. On the other hand, the other story is done and relatively short, while yours is promising a lot more on the awesome scale.
I will await more with trepidation and more than a little interest. I bid thee good luck.
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I mean for future reference. Honestly, I'm writing right now, so I can't read this at this second, no matter how badly I want to. I'll tell you if I have to go G-Nazi after I read this~
I guess sleeping will have to wait. 
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