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theNDinspector


I may be a kid at heart, but I enjoy every minute of it. And since you're here, I imagine you do too.

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This story is a sequel to Scoot Camp


Her Great-Grandfather was a Wonderbolt. Her Grandfather was a Wonderbolt. Her Father was a Wonerbolt.

Lavender could also be a Wonderbolt, but she doesn't want to. With such a legacy behind her, however, can she really disappoint her family by not becoming one of Equestria's elite flyers?

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 14 )

He might have to brush his teeth first though, Lavendar HATES germs XD.

So happy you are making this story :raritywink:

I'm personally not into this story much, but I'll read it anyways cause I like the Scoot Camp universe being expanded [I think I just like the Scootaloo aspect side of things]. As for the story I'm hoping that you can give us some more information on her childhood, but I if i guess right then this sentence here

How does she not realize that her whole world will be turned upside down just a few months later

. I like what you've done what you've done with her habit of cleaning and how she does it to get rid of stress and it's not a strange obsession [I guess it kinda is still but oh well]. I think how you complicated things even more with her father is good and maybe make it even more complicated. I reckon this could be done by having some sort of wonderbolt trainee competition and her dad encourages her to go and she goes to not let him down and then I guess whatever happens would happen. Also one more thing is this going to be a long story or a short one? Anyways It's a good story over all and I would check for spelling and grammar errors, but I didn't see any when I was reading and I'm too lazy too look for them anyways. So hope this one goes well for you!

5206670 It's okay if your not that into it. We all have our opinions. I wanted to write this story because I actually found Lavender's character very interesting and wished to explore it more. There will be a few scenes of her childhood. It also won't be very long--obviously not as long as Scoot Camp was--but still pretty descent in length like some of my other multi-chapter stories that are complete. I anticipate only a few more chapters will be required for this piece overall.

Yay for Woona! :scootangel:

Well, I haven't read this yet and already I see a huge problem; plight. And not flight. :facehoof:

Sad :fluttercry:

But good!

5260645 Well, I recommend that you read the prequel story first if you haven't already. It's mainly to understand some of the context of what this character is going through. And yes, the similarity of the word "plight" to "flight" was intentional in the way that I used it.

I do not like this.

I. Love. This.

I like how you went more n depth about Lavender, what really pushed her, and a bit from her past. I found the last chapter's ending adorable with her wanting to go into cleaning, and her father being an awkward turtle about it.
:heart:

5388058 Well thank you very much. I really appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

The idea to do a spin off for one of the characters in these stories might have been a little out of left field, but you pulled it off very well and this has been nothing but enjoyable.

6261626 :twilightsmile: Thanks. The way I wrote Lavender in Scoot Camp was just so fascinating to me that I had to explore it a little more. Yeah, it's definitely not one of my more popular or best read fics--and I never really expected it to be--but I still enjoyed writing it nonetheless.

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