I HAVE IDEA! its DISCORD! What do I win?

Ah another HiE. Its always cool to read these. No matter what people say no two HIE fics are the same, they all have differences in character and plot. A damn good start to a good story.

Definitely needs some editing.   Tons of misspellings, grammar errors, verb tense issues, awkward phrasing, etc.   That distracts from enjoying it, but aside from that I would say pony characterization was fairly well done and the premise could be interesting.  

Only thing is that I don't currently see the reasons why he would want to stay in Equestria.  Seems a bit lonely to be the sole human there.

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Yeah this is my first attempt at a fic of any sort. For the editting ill be going over it all in due time. And for as why he would stay, well its only chapter one. More to come.

MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!

This isn't getting NEAR the attention it deserves.

Interesting...

ooooh this is interesting

this totally deserves more attention then its getting.

Putting aside the few grammatical errors, this story is quite good, the concept of a week to decide in which world the main character wants to live is interesting, this is really not getting near the attention it deserves, as someone already pointed out

I'm really looking forward for the next chapter

i know right, im loving this.

DWAAA

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Hmmmm, for some reason, I am imagining Mister as the Millenium Earl fro D-Gray Man lol, but good story nonetheless.

That's so adorable

D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW has been achieved. have a moustache

That is just so cute

Keep the chapters coming

Well that was short but interesting celestia + discord I'm guessing

Bravo, bravo. Hmm, I always wondered, why is it 'bravo', or 'brava'? Who came up with the words to accompany applause anyway?

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good job sir.

Loved it

It was good while it lasted

Great fic, I really like it

Good luck with your future and current stories

A heartwarming story. Exactly what I was looking for. Bravo sir. You are a better author than I. I will have my eye on you

Awesome story I liked it alot

YOU BROKE DA RULEZ SAM

YOU ARE WALKING SHIRTLESS

adorable  THAT WAS SO AWSOME

i loved it. you did a terrible terrific job

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Great story! it was well done. the way you wrote this is fantastic it could be made a series because of the way you wrote it. i hope you do another story like this one.

Well done good sir.

Rule two: You cannot wear plaid. EVER.

I love rule two.

Lol, "Run for it!"

She kissed him on ze cheek... I see where this is going

I have a feeling somepony is going to ignore that it's meant for Luna

I want a hug from Woona...

Darn i thought it was discord too

Very well done best i've read of all the fanfics i have read so far