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AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!
You, my friend, are GOLDEN!
Yay, another story you, and it has Shining and Cadence, sweet!
Awesome! I just love how both Shining and Cadence act in this weird situation. Shining is damn lucky indeed.
I wonder how ponies shave. There's fur under hair and they risk shaving off too much...
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Also, do royals pay bills themselves?
Must... Prevent....
Like dislike boundary... From... Equalizing!
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furries?
Lol, dude, hello. I don't know what to say. My mind isn't in the right place so I can't give critique even if I wanted to... sorry.
Your "Nature Calls" scatfic was the first scatfic I ever read, and it was what gave me the fetish! My dick was diamonds! DIAMONDS! Literal biggest whyboner of my life and it was great. Oh my gosh. I read it so many times and it was what made me start saving fics I like to my HD just in case, and it opened so many doors for me when it comes to fetish stuff too, so to speak. It's really funny. Before my fetishes were like, really tame. Worst was being attracted to cartoon horses, really. Now it's just... lol.
Basically, I'm a huge fan! As awkward as it is. Also if it's not awkward enough I'm gonna make it awkward because I'm SUPER into hardcore stuff too, but you're not. Also you're okay with humanized scat stuffs, but I'm not. But for the interests we share here I agree 110% and want to indulge in everything you produce! Keep on keeping on, if you want to, I mean. Because it's great and I love it.
But about the actual fic of yours I'm commenting on, I dunno what you were going for with these characters and the way you wrote the fic, but I found essentially all the non-scat sections quite jarring. I don't know if that word is too severe for what it is I'm trying to describe, but I felt like there was a certain disconnect between what you were telling and what I gleaned. I blame this on my propensity to second person fics... I guess I don't really know anything else. I wanted sympathy, but I didn't really receive enough. I actually read somewhere once that the standard human is born with the capacity to gain a photographic memory, but that that capacity is usually lost when the person learns how to read... I didn't understand how that could be true for so long, but then I studied writing a bit. Not formally though.
In my understanding of it, what happens is that even though humans ascribe meaning to the written word, it's difficult to distinctly rouse very specific emotion in subjects by simply dropping any given word, or even certain clusters or sequences of words. Before you learn how to read your mind sorts data by correlating anything you wanted to comprehend to your subconscious as best as it can. When you learn how to read, things are reduced to words, which are in themselves much less overwhelming than the raw understanding of any given thing your subconscious provides naturally, which is inherently given form by emotion. When you see danger, you feel anxious or scared and vulnerable. You feel these things, which is how you recognize danger. Your idea of danger is emotion. Your idea of danger was born from your understanding and perception of so many different things. When someone simply says something is "dangerous" though, there is no inherent sympathy there. Yes, in concept the word "danger" is meant to reflect our instinctual understanding of danger, but in practice it doesn't really! It's just a word, and we have to learn that people want it to mean whatever. The more you reduce your understanding of things to words, the less you guarantee your sympathy with anything and everything, and the less memory you may have!
When you write about scat it is SO GOOD! You worship everything, and just the way I like it! You rationalize the properties of everything you must to make any scene, you recognize the linear nature of literature on at least some level and are masterful at knowing what to give attention at when. You truly put to paper what it means to be and live, and it's as if my emotion actually exists in your head and you're the most benevolent god for granting me the pleasure of being able to experience my everything in the universe you've created for me, but with the other stuff, at least in this fic, that level of sympathy is not there for me... I want you to write for me what everything is, and what my mind should correlate it to. I want my eyes and my mind to exist in your Equestria, truly. I just... do it like you do the scat, right??
. You established stuff, yeah, but where's the whimsy and the tantalizing prose and blatant, brilliant abuse of my feels I come to you for? I don't know how you could change it, really, since only second person is like 100% perception on the world maybe, but I felt like the everything before the naughty stuff was poor... also I didn't really give the sex a fair shake, admittedly, because ironically enough for reasons I still don't know I find stallion cum kind of gross in my scat fics. But I mean, SA was breeding his wife. Where's the lust and the heat and the breathing and the contact; the descriptions of the viscosity of his cum and how it did whatever, I guess... like I said my mind was kind of out of it because, ew, stallion cum near my scat. Get it away!
Sorry if this comment is awful. People almost always hate when I express myself. In any case though, I'm one guy here in the shadows, enjoying your stuff! Also just between you and me, creating a separate account to post your scatfics was likely a wise, albeit pessimistic choice. People suck man. I mean you're still getting dislikes just for the subject matter and it's not even like you're horrifying any userbase that expects something otherwise from you! No words you can utter will change the mind of these people... they went out of their way to dislike the content you make on multiple levels. Godspeed in anything you seek to accomplish.
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Wow, thanks for the evaluation! It's a little lengthy and therefore hard to follow, but from what I was able to interpret, the nutshell of it is that you've really liked my stories more than you expected up until this point, but that this story wasn't very good.
And you're right: this story is something I've wanted to do for a while, but was written while I was under pressure of knowing I had other school assignments waiting for my attention. The whole time I was writing this, I thought to myself "I shouldn't be doing this, I need to be studying, as soon as I get done with this I'm gonna need to haul ass and study". So, let that be a lesson for me I guess; don't write unless focus can be 100% devoted to the task.
With that said, I DO plan on writing more stories later on, but with my other account needing updates, school duties and other commitments IRL, it's going to be a while before I can reach that "time to sit down and write something fun" state of mind. I know it's frustrating for people who want to read more, but I think it would be better to wait a while and produce something worth reading, instead of rushing something like this out just for the sake of having something to read.
Thank you very much for the passionate critique and sharing your feelings on the matter, it means the world to me.
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Don't worry about anything! Do what you must, and merely commenting was no problem.
I didn't mean to say the story at large wasn't very good... I mean, I read it for [reasons], and that was great. But like, the rest of the fanfic wasn't something I would write home about, so to speak.
So, yes yes yes... I am monitoring your work. I look forward to anything more you wish to produce!
Here for the what lthe fuck value, did not dissapoint
10/10, would read again
Another well-written scat fic, if you can even call it scat. Nice depiction of a husband and wife being turned on by each other by even something that would normally be disgusting. Cadance was well-written, I can definitely imagine the Princess of Love being into ALL types of love. XD
Not bad. Great scene-setting and pacing, though personalities seem skewed just a little bit around the time Candace notices Shining's erection. After the basic fetishy-part though. Still, fantastic work!
Scat's not really my cup of tea, but I did like the concept of a lady letting ladylike behavior go out the window. Upvote from me for the romantic and comedic aspects of the story.
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Thanks very much. Glad to see that this and some of my other stories eventually get the upvotes they deserve after the obligatory "downvote on principle" BS upon first publication.
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I don't kinkshame, hun. Your stories are well-written.
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Liked the story. Got an idea for you, would be interesting to see another story or chapter where Cadance gets the idea to ride him reverse-cowgirl and gives shining a surprise by relieving herself on him mid sex. Just an idea though, so make of it what you will.
Not a fan of scat, but that depiction of Shining using the bathroom was very interesting.
Pretty well-written story too.