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After many months of pain and clinginess Apple Jack and Spike finally have kids. A beatiful daughter and a handsome son. But when Celestia finds out could it be the end for them? And possibly Equestria?

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i like the new the names of Apple Jack and Spike kids and please let this story have a happy ending that is when this story is complete

Each time you wright a story it gets better in writing

Lu and Lue? Yeah, nicknames could be better, names too...

Oh boy soring you think that it was Spike and Dash
On it was Spike and Apllejack

5038169 it's going to have a sad ending with a happy twist.

5039825 GoldenApple's nickname is Lu later in the story Applelues nickname will be jack.

5040844 can you tell me what kind of sad ending and ok

5041898 you'll have to wait and see I don't want to spoil it.

5041914 i just don't want a sading where Apple Jack and Spike died or GoldenApple and AppleLue parents to get a divorced and by the way i just edit this comment

5041947 sorry I didn't replay when mutilply people comment on my stories it goes into one big thing so then I don't see all of them. Like I said I'm not going to ruin but I'll tell you some thing Golden Apple Finds the love of her life, and Apple Lue does too. When times get tuff they live through it. and tey both become closer as a family even if they don't have a very big one since granny is dead, Big Mac is with Cheerliee, and AppleBloom is traveling the world with snails.( yes I ship AppleBloom and Snails deal with it.)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

5045714 I know right it's like the love story I want but can't have. I love how you can put your crush like this in a story. I have to say though still a better love story than Twilight.

5045769 One of these days the author of that book is gonna try and get bronies back for that

Please finish this! This is so epic!

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