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    Darkness is the essence of hiding as well as the cloak of misdirection, that being Chrysalis's first choice of things to go. The stage was clearly shown with overhead lights shining down on a single glass saucer with tiny little dot lights giving off a dim ambient glow beneath it all from under glass tiles. Not a single look could be missed off of the fear, despair, worry, and pain of any soul that was foolish enough or cursed dearly enough to be cast on that center stage.

    The unknown and the unpredictable was always the core ideal of any fine show, or at least that's what Discord had had in mind. With the aid of his little colt ally and the payroll on several strapping stallions, the entire stage -offset as well as on- had been outfitted with not only the strangest in the unknown, but also the calculated exact of each pony or creature that could possibly ever be on stage. Not an idea was spared in Discord's grand design as he planned out each and every things' perfect tool of destruction... But all in good fun.

    That all left only Pip to his own devices. At first he pondered what could this set be missing? Was it this? No. Was it that? No. It was perfect... Or so it would appear at first glance. But as that little colt looked to the marveling stage, he developed an idea... Was it twisted? Maybe. Was it funny? More so. Would it be heartwarming? If done right, in so many ways...


    Nice new place, huh?

    Be silent you...

    Why is she upset?

    She's just mad we didn't move the set where she wanted it.

    I simply don't understand what was so taboo about bringing the set into Canterlot...

    Do you want this list? Pippy, give her the list.

    One, YOU are banned from Canterlot until YOU are invited as a royal guest.

    Two, HE is banned from Canterlot until I repair and repay the statue of him I broke.

    Three, this show is technically illegal by the capital of Canterlot, it's only because of our boss that we can do this.

    Four, we did a majority vote and it was two to one.

    That in of itself is unfair since you and that thing are friends now.

    Maybe...

    But come on...

    Think of it as a free vacation!

    I fail to see the joy in this place...

    Haywaii is a great place!

    The surf...

    The sand...

    The stallions...

    You know the ones he means...

    Eh? Eh? Eh?

    ...I honestly believe I am growing ill of mind the more I sit here listening to you two...

    Come on.

    The sun...

    The sea...

    The saucy maidens...

    You know the ones he means...

    Eh? Eh? Eh?

    Are you implying that I go for females?

    Honestly, we're running a bet on if you're a boy or girl...

    I'm a female!

    Looks like you might win Pip.

    Don't know... juries still out...

    MAKERS! WHY!?

    Comments ( 81 )

    #1 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Aloha! Welcome to Haywaii!

    #2 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #3 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh:

    #4 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Why does Pip know what a saucy maiden is? :facehoof: Perverted little kid.

    #5 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    OH BOY I WONDER WHO GONNA SUFFER NEXT!!!

    but for now moustache :moustache: :moustache:

    #6 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Lol, a bet? She's called QUEEN Crysalis!

    #7 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856072 Short for Drag Queen Chrysalis?

    #8 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856079

    Someone get a drawfriend on this stat!

    #9 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #10 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856079 absolutely. thats why he took the place of Cadence, he wanted to wear the pretty dress.

    #11 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856040

    Well he is a pirate all pirates know what a saucy maiden is. Just be glad he didn't call then Wenches they don't like being called that.

    #12 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Chrysalis' a boy!

    #13 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856040 He probably thought of Luna when he said that

    #14 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856121 Congratulations, you win the prize.

    #15 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856241

    I do? Oh goodie what I win?

    #16 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Bwahaha!!:rainbowlaugh:

    #17 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Well now we know where we can get our lie dector. :rainbowlaugh:

    #19 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856271 The choice of who's next.

    #20 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856490

    Wooow! really?

    #21 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Heh, I loved this chapter, it was glorious!

    #22 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856503 Yeah, just send it to me in a letter of what you want.

    #24 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Season Two! :pinkiehappy:

    And it looks like this is going to be guuuuuuuud!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiesmile:

    #25 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh:let the madness begin!:rainbowlaugh:

    #26 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856557

    :rainbowlaugh: Ohmygosh this is going to be a hard choice for me.

    #27 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Yay you went with the beach idea! Now let's get some pies ready

    #28 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh yes....there will be saucy maidens:trollestia:

    #30 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is amazing. Just this chapter gave me the biggest smile of today.

    Chrysalis, I understand your suffering.

    No I don't, I just find it absolutely hilarious about how you have to suffer with two of the biggest idiots in the kingdom :V (even though Pip and Discord aren't actually stupid, far from it, they just act like jokers).

    #31 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>857286 Yes, and?

    #32 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>857349 ...Meh.

    #33 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>857383 Let me let you in on a little secret... For Know Your Mare, I don't write at my top game. I write this to pass my time... It's nothing special, just a way to make people smile.

    #35 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>857412 I did... it serves as a joke since Discord said it wrong, Pip corrected him, then Discord corrected himself.

    #36 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :facehoof: stupid comments

    #37 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>857648 No offence, but your comments aren't a whirlwind either.

    #38 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>857673 and..... I can still complain unless I am told otherwise I will complain if I feel like it

    #39 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>857714 I didn't say otherwise, I'm only saying if you're going to complain, don't be the exact same thing you're complaining about.

    #40 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>857412

    Hey check it out guys, that's the pre-celestia Incestia!

    I got all her albums. Even the smutty ones that ain't no good.

    #41 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>857412

    Hey check it out guys, that's the pre-celestia Incestia!

    I got all her albums. Even the smutty ones that ain't no good.

    #42 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>857725 but thats the fun part besides I annoy myself besides do I even read my comments before I post nope and that is because Dodgson's here

    #43 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Wohoo beach! :rainbowdetermined2:

    #44 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Apparently Chrysalis was thought to be mono-gendered by our favorite knuckleheads. They must be even denser than I thought, since her name includes the word QUEEN.

    #45 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>858542 So does Oliver Queen, and he's as many as they come.

    #46 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I could see her as a goer of both genders. I think it is because of her hair style or something. It just screams "I am a bi-sexual!!!" I am not trying to be the one to judge on cover, it just seems that way.

    #48 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    OH! THIS IS GONNA BE GOOOOooooooDAAHHHHH! :pinkiehappy:

    #49 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>859499 It's fine, it was an easy joke to miss.

    #50 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    After a marathon of reading chapters 1-50, I'd say I'm satisfied with what I've read thus far!

    Consider this fic tracked. Maybe I'll look into your others stories :twilightsmile:

    #51 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Haha well, I just read chapters 5-50 in one sitting here tonight (I read the first 4 this afternoon), and i really like what you have here, it is bucking hilarious. Some one should make a full comic of this, that would be awesome. Or even better, this deserves to be a youtube series me thinks, haha I'd do Discord's voice :rainbowkiss:

    #52 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    My Queen! How dare they insult your gender! We will make them pay dearly! Heh, if overlord allows...

    #53 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Maidens of saucyness, yyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssssssssssssss

    #54 · 46w, 11h ago · · ·
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    my only question: the comments that are both underlined and bold, are they a whole new character or are they Pip and Discord talking in unison? :rainbowhuh:

    #55 · 46w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>863132 Talking together.

    #56 · 46w, 10h ago · · ·
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    >>863168

    damn, i wish I'd asked that about two dozen chapters ago, now i have to go reread the whole thing

    Oh the Humani- *jumps right back to Ch1 and gleefully rereads* :twilightsheepish:

    #57 · 46w, 5h ago · · ·
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    Ladies, relax.

    Chrysalis is a shape shifter.

    Chrysalis can be any gender!

    I almost enjoy the comments for Know Your Mare as much as I enjoy Know Your Mare itself.

    >>857412

    Whenever I see that image I can't help but think that Luna's thinking: Oh god why is this happening? Horses of heaven save me before she does anything else.

    I think it has something to do with the generally distraught facial expression...

    #58 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>856779 why is Luna purple?

    #59 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>857399 and boy have you!:derpytongue2::yay::twilightsmile::raritystarry::twistnerd::scootangel::rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::heart:

    #60 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>867310 I blame Hasbro. They can almost never remain consistent. Out of all the episodes, in season 1 and 2, there is only 1 episode where there was no mistakes. Every other episode had mistakes all through them. The most common being Applejack's Running animation in season 1, It's was reused all the time, but in the animation she has no freckles. So, when they have her set to run, her freckles vanish. I believe from the MLP bloopers of season 1, her freckles vanish over 50 times in just the first season.

    Anyways, I want to see wildfire as a guest! :rainbowkiss: Or Surprise! or Nyx! or Nightmare Moon! :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss:

    #62 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>867878 umm...yes it is. believe me, I know purple. It's my second favorite color.

    #63 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>856389 I'm with Simba and Nala on this one.

    #64 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>868396 Twilight Sparkle is purple. Luna is blue.

    #65 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Honestly, I think Chrysalis's gender is interchangeable, being a changeling and all.

    #66 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    MY QUEEN'S GENDER IS FEMALE! HOW DARE YOU THINK OTHERWISE! NOW STOP WITH THE DEBATING! it makes me sad makes my head spin. :derpytongue2:

    #67 · 45w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>870686 I know that. what I'm saying is that the picture of Luna in the comments is Purple not Blue!

    #68 · 45w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>871381 It's blue

    #69 · 45w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I love that it's in Haywaii! :rainbowlaugh:

    If this fic doesn't get a TV Tropes page when it's done, I shall take the liberty of making one, it shall definitely be deserved!:pinkiehappy:

    #70 · 45w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>872338.....you're right. my computer was screwed up for a bit and it made Luna look purple. Sorry:fluttershysad:

    #72 · 45w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>872553 I have no idea what you're talking about:trollestia:

    also. how do you post clips?

    #73 · 45w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>872721 You edited your comment

    The content of the comment with the YouTube video:

    >>872533 [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png[/img]

    [youtube=v30q6VkphbE]

    #74 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Chysalis: I'm a queen!

    Discord: yeah I bet you are

    #75 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I FREAKING HATE HAWAII STREYOTYPES!!!!!!!!!! :flutterrage:

    I HATE ALL THAT FAKE HAWAII BULL CRAP!!:flutterrage:

    ESPECIALLY BECCAUSE I LIVE HERE

    But keep up the good work

    #76 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>885735 Grammar apparently took the day off.

    #77 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>887325 Ay. U nevr wen hurd of moke guys born in waimanalo who speak pigin 100% uv da time?

    #78 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>856040

    That fact he's even here is well..........

    He's really mature?:unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::scootangel::scootangel:

    #79 · 39w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Technically as a Changeling, Chrysie is gender-neutral because she can be either. That means that just because she PREFERS a female form does not mean she IS female. So in conclusion, yes I am using her species to point out the fact that it's quite possible that the 'Queen' of the Changelings has more than ONE horn,  and if she objects, I'll just bring up the fact that she can shape-shift to hide it.

    Hey Discord, can I be on the show, I promise I won't grovel at your feet too much. DISCORD IS BEST VILLAIN EVER!!

    #80 · 39w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>871135 Technically as a Changeling, Chrysie is gender-neutral because she can be either. That means that just because she PREFERS a female form does not mean she IS female. So in conclusion, yes I am using her species to point out the fact that it's quite possible that the 'Queen' of the Changelings has more than ONE horn,  and if she objects, I'll just bring up the fact that she can shape-shift to hide it.

    #81 · 39w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>856104 Will do, for money.

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