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Darkness is the essence of hiding as well as the cloak of misdirection, that being Chrysalis's first choice of things to go. The stage was clearly shown with overhead lights shining down on a single glass saucer with tiny little dot lights giving off a dim ambient glow beneath it all from under glass tiles. Not a single look could be missed off of the fear, despair, worry, and pain of any soul that was foolish enough or cursed dearly enough to be cast on that center stage.
The unknown and the unpredictable was always the core ideal of any fine show, or at least that's what Discord had had in mind. With the aid of his little colt ally and the payroll on several strapping stallions, the entire stage -offset as well as on- had been outfitted with not only the strangest in the unknown, but also the calculated exact of each pony or creature that could possibly ever be on stage. Not an idea was spared in Discord's grand design as he planned out each and every things' perfect tool of destruction... But all in good fun.
That all left only Pip to his own devices. At first he pondered what could this set be missing? Was it this? No. Was it that? No. It was perfect... Or so it would appear at first glance. But as that little colt looked to the marveling stage, he developed an idea... Was it twisted? Maybe. Was it funny? More so. Would it be heartwarming? If done right, in so many ways...
Nice new place, huh?
Be silent you...
Why is she upset?
She's just mad we didn't move the set where she wanted it.
I simply don't understand what was so taboo about bringing the set into Canterlot...
Do you want this list? Pippy, give her the list.
One, YOU are banned from Canterlot until YOU are invited as a royal guest.
Two, HE is banned from Canterlot until I repair and repay the statue of him I broke.
Three, this show is technically illegal by the capital of Canterlot, it's only because of our boss that we can do this.
Four, we did a majority vote and it was two to one.
That in of itself is unfair since you and that thing are friends now.
Maybe...
But come on...
Think of it as a free vacation!
I fail to see the joy in this place...
Haywaii is a great place!
The surf...
The sand...
The stallions...
You know the ones he means...
Eh? Eh? Eh?
...I honestly believe I am growing ill of mind the more I sit here listening to you two...
Come on.
The sun...
The sea...
The saucy maidens...
You know the ones he means...
Eh? Eh? Eh?
Are you implying that I go for females?
Honestly, we're running a bet on if you're a boy or girl...
I'm a female!
Looks like you might win Pip.
Don't know... juries still out...
MAKERS! WHY!?
Comments ( 81 )
lol!!!!! poor chysalis....
This is amazing. Just this chapter gave me the biggest smile of today.
Chrysalis, I understand your suffering.
No I don't, I just find it absolutely hilarious about how you have to suffer with two of the biggest idiots in the kingdom :V (even though Pip and Discord aren't actually stupid, far from it, they just act like jokers).
>>857725 but thats the fun part besides I annoy myself besides do I even read my comments before I post nope and that is because Dodgson's here
Apparently Chrysalis was thought to be mono-gendered by our favorite knuckleheads. They must be even denser than I thought, since her name includes the word QUEEN.
I could see her as a goer of both genders. I think it is because of her hair style or something. It just screams "I am a bi-sexual!!!" I am not trying to be the one to judge on cover, it just seems that way.
After a marathon of reading chapters 1-50, I'd say I'm satisfied with what I've read thus far!
Consider this fic tracked. Maybe I'll look into your others stories ![]()
Haha well, I just read chapters 5-50 in one sitting here tonight (I read the first 4 this afternoon), and i really like what you have here, it is bucking hilarious. Some one should make a full comic of this, that would be awesome. Or even better, this deserves to be a youtube series me thinks, haha I'd do Discord's voice
My Queen! How dare they insult your gender! We will make them pay dearly! Heh, if overlord allows...
my only question: the comments that are both underlined and bold, are they a whole new character or are they Pip and Discord talking in unison? ![]()
Ladies, relax.
Chrysalis is a shape shifter.
Chrysalis can be any gender!
I almost enjoy the comments for Know Your Mare as much as I enjoy Know Your Mare itself.
Whenever I see that image I can't help but think that Luna's thinking: Oh god why is this happening? Horses of heaven save me before she does anything else.
I think it has something to do with the generally distraught facial expression...
>>867310 I blame Hasbro. They can almost never remain consistent. Out of all the episodes, in season 1 and 2, there is only 1 episode where there was no mistakes. Every other episode had mistakes all through them. The most common being Applejack's Running animation in season 1, It's was reused all the time, but in the animation she has no freckles. So, when they have her set to run, her freckles vanish. I believe from the MLP bloopers of season 1, her freckles vanish over 50 times in just the first season.
Anyways, I want to see wildfire as a guest!
Or Surprise! or Nyx! or Nightmare Moon!
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Honestly, I think Chrysalis's gender is interchangeable, being a changeling and all.
MY QUEEN'S GENDER IS FEMALE! HOW DARE YOU THINK OTHERWISE! NOW STOP WITH THE DEBATING! it makes me sad makes my head spin. ![]()
I love that it's in Haywaii! ![]()
If this fic doesn't get a TV Tropes page when it's done, I shall take the liberty of making one, it shall definitely be deserved!![]()
>>872721 You edited your comment
The content of the comment with the YouTube video:
>>872533 [img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png[/img][youtube=v30q6VkphbE]
I FREAKING HATE HAWAII STREYOTYPES!!!!!!!!!!
I HATE ALL THAT FAKE HAWAII BULL CRAP!!![]()
ESPECIALLY BECCAUSE I LIVE HERE
But keep up the good work
Technically as a Changeling, Chrysie is gender-neutral because she can be either. That means that just because she PREFERS a female form does not mean she IS female. So in conclusion, yes I am using her species to point out the fact that it's quite possible that the 'Queen' of the Changelings has more than ONE horn, and if she objects, I'll just bring up the fact that she can shape-shift to hide it.
Hey Discord, can I be on the show, I promise I won't grovel at your feet too much. DISCORD IS BEST VILLAIN EVER!!
>>871135 Technically as a Changeling, Chrysie is gender-neutral because she can be either. That means that just because she PREFERS a female form does not mean she IS female. So in conclusion, yes I am using her species to point out the fact that it's quite possible that the 'Queen' of the Changelings has more than ONE horn, and if she objects, I'll just bring up the fact that she can shape-shift to hide it.







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