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    Within the single spotlight that haunted the minds of many ponies before it, Twilight Sparkle was once more under it. Her face was covered with the sickened expression of her times before a she waited for those mocking voices to return.

    Know your mare, know your mare, know your mare...

    Twilight Sparkle...

    ...Finished top of her class in Magic School...

    "Well... Yes actually. I finished with a 4.1 grade point average. Not many ponies take note of that. So... Thank... you?"

    Twilight Sparkle...

    ...raises Spike, cares for her library, keeps up with public affairs, and still has time to stay in contact with her teacher...

    "It gets grating at times, so I have to skip on a few things--"

    Twilight Sparkle...

    ...Never skips important matters...

    ...She knows where her priorities...

    "Th-Thank you. I do actually try to keep on track as well as keep everything in order."

    Twilight Sparkle...

    ...has all the colts lining down the block...

    ...Just to watch what she got...

    "Heh, well I can't say that they do..."

    We can. Because we're disembodied voices...

    ...Twilightlicious...

    "Ah, very clever."

    Not as clever as you...

    ...Clever girl...

    For once, Twilight smiled under that lone spotlight as the voices continued.

    Now you really know...

    ...Twilight Sparkle...

    "For once, I might have to agree with your assumption," Twilight gave a pleased nod before bowing out, only to stop and gave a look back. "But before I go... Who designed that trap door?"

    Me...

    "Huh... You've gotta tell me how it works when you get a chance."

    I'll send my blueprints...

    "Excellent!" the sound of the mare's trots out into the darkness echoed for a little before finally dying out.

    Hello boys...

    Hey Queeny!

    What did I miss...?

    Twilight.

    Really? We had her on again...?

    Special occasion...

    Very well... Did you stick it to her as well this time?

    Oh we stuck it to her good...

    Real good...

    So good she won't be walking right for days...

    We're talking limp and bowlegged...

    Very well done...

    ...I'm proud of you two...

    Yes...

    ...We are too...

    Comments ( 35 )

    #1 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Alright listen up!

    Yeah, listen up!

    Someone has made a video dedicated to how awesome we are!

    Really awesome video too!

    So go watch it.

    We're watching it now!

    The best thing EVER!

    GO!

    #2 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    that was clever... very clever :trixieshiftright:

    #3 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    interesting....

    #4 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #5 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I read the chapter title and got very angry.  Do you want to know why?  Because you put the image of Twilight in a leisure suit in my head.  And I could not find such an image online to satisfy myself.  (I'm definitely not an artist so I can't make one of my own.) :flutterrage:

    Then I read the chapter.  That made me happy, because I love Twilight Sparkle.  At last she gets some nice things said about her, rather than getting torn to shreds a third time. :twilightsmile:

    So overall, you're a little bit positive, I guess? :derpyderp2:  But if you find me a picture of Twilight in a leisure suit (or something close), you will skyrocket to super positive, with warm fuzzies included. :heart:

    #6 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>848424  BEST. THING. EVER!!!

    Lol inb4 EQD? hahaha

    #7 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    =3

    #8 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>848549 GASP! I'll fix it right away! Thank you.

    #9 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :facehoof:

    #10 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    how do they even  now of   twilightlicious!!!

    I lol'ed at that part:rainbowlaugh:

    #11 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    ...this started off cute and funny, then rapidly spiralled downhill. o.O

    #12 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>848424 first you where featured, now you have an animated cartoon dedecated to your work.......

    i hope you realise that the next stage is us worshiping you as a god?:twilightsmile::trollestia:

    #13 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Discord and Discorded!Pipsqueak being nice?!  A Twilightlicious reference?!  AN ANIMATION?! :pinkiegasp:

    THIS IS AWESOME! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    >>849144 No, the next stage is TV Tropes!

    #14 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>849386 And the stage after that is getting a wikia which is unlikely.:fluttercry:

    #15 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Looks like Discord and Pip have struck out again, better luck next time boys! :twilightsmile:

    #16 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Looks like Discord and Pip have struck out again, better luck next time boys! :twilightsmile:

    #17 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Ha! That's pretty funny. You're a funny man, Overlord-Flinx.

    I'll kill you last.

    #18 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>849780 Other fanfics have gotten a Wikia?  I just thought that was for shows and stuff...

    I'm hoping for at least one of my fics to eventually get TV Tropes levels...

    #19 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>849925 tis the dream of all (fanfic) writers to reach TV Tropes and doesn't Fallout Equestria have a Wiki?

    #20 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>849969 I've never real FO:E, but it has a Wiki?!  Dang...

    #21 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>850001 It is small for a wiki with only 500 odd pages but it is the bigest AU in this fannon.

    #22 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    lol! :twilightsmile:

    #23 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    No zecora? Oh well.

    #24 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I cant believe how much I love this.....:rainbowkiss:

    #25 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    An animation, and a great chapter, with a reference of Twilightlicious? Amazing!

    #26 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #27 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Well I know I'm proud of those two :pinkiehappy:

    #28 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    .....What did i just read? Is this another fic? Is this the Know your Mare fic of another universe or something and it got mixed up in ours cause of some multiverse accident? :rainbowhuh:

    Well, i take any nice word i can read about Twi- doh! :twilightoops:

    *runs away before the voices can get him*

    #29 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Well I just read 48 chapters in 1 sitting....:rainbowkiss: awesome

    #30 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>849064So I wasn't the only one?:trixieshiftright:

    #31 · 46w, 1d ago · 1 · ·
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    The animation was amazing!!! :pinkiegasp:

    #32 · 46w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>848424 Make sure you fix your grammar before any more of those are made

    #33 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    You know, this was funny when it was just one disembodied voice doing the jokes. After these other two appeared things just, got dull. It was more funny when it began because it reminded me of the "Know your Stars" part of All That. This, this just doesn't feel like that anymore. Now all of a sudden you're having the voices be nice all of a sudden, it's not funny anymore. And why do you use the same mares as before? I'm sorry, it's just, not funny anymore.

    #34 · 45w, 3d ago · · ·
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    You know how dirty it sounds when they refer to how they sticked it to her?

    #35 · 43w, 6d ago · 5 · ·
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    I hear the voices...

    :pinkiecrazy:

    and they're...

    actually quite nice~!

    :twilightsmile:

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