Sorry to say but this is my last update... for about a week unless my other stories get a little more attention (my me and others). Yeah, it's selfish to say that, but I just want to get them all alive. So I hope you enjoy yourselves, and don't stop yourselves from reading my other stories. Who knows, maybe a little more spark to my engine will get all my stories and this one too to jump to a whole new life.

Ok wow that was pretty good except that I really couldn't get everything. But you have me wondering here the other two are so this is an awesome charpter.

Edit: I can't believe that your postponing this! You're at the top of your game getting this story featured over and over again because everyone loves it. But, I guess I'll take a look at you other stories if it makes this go faster.

>>764367764367 hmm I check it out wait or have i already read that hmmm i'll check there are way too many people in the blackwing/rust/severalotherpeople universe (sorry forgot the name)

I STILL haven't figured out what a Riceicle is..

>>764431764431 You wanna know?

'Bout time our fair Doctor got some attention.

Allons-y with your other fics so we can return for our next weekly installment!

Poor doctor. Even when he is a pony he cant be ginger.

>>764446764446 Yes. Yes I do.

Meh the doctors was okay, but I expected much more out of you! Great chapter all the same....

>>764431764431 its a yummy cerial

another epic chapter

didnt quite get the pair thing though.....

>>764503764503 It's a Popsicle... made out of frozen rice.

>>764506764506 He'll have a round 2 (and three if we have time) like everyone else, but honestly I barely know anything about Doctor Who except what scraps of clips and stories from Linkara could piece together for me. I can do everyone else just fine because I know them, but I don't know Doctor Whooves.

>>764514764514 I don't know, I thought Doctor Who hates pears .

>>764520764520 you could always make the obvious joke about his age :P

hes about 900 i think

>>764520764520 Well watch some episodes then! It is an amazing show it is my favorite! Almost as much as MLP!

>>764538764538 Yeah, I want to watch it but I always find myself writing or learning about something I can fix into a story... As you can assume I don't do much else except write. But hey, do what you're good at.

My sentiments exactly! Do what you love and the money will come! I do art as a thing I love and writing comes second to music. I jump around alot so it is hard to keep up....

>>764575764575 Heh... who said it was the voice from the show?

Yeah, the pears thing comes from Human Nature / The Family of Blood. Anyway, since this seems to be 10, you should say something about how he loves to use guns (10 hates guns with an unhealthy passion)

Pipsqueak gets the win, because of how brave and nice that was.

--- You know what. Im done. Im tired of this, nobrony even pays any attention to these anymore, so what am i fighting for? nothing. Im just a rambling madman in the coner everybody ignores because it would be awkward to talkt to him. People used to like me!! Someone always responded to my comments. I guess it is just getting old. Yup. this is it. This is Captain Literal, and i'm sighning off. Now this is usually the part where i post a clever picture that is related to the chapter. but whats the point? no point at all. so bye guys.

-WHAT THE BUCK DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING?!?!

I'm giving up there's no point anymore.

-Oh no you don't!! This isn't you captain!! You can't just give up.

I can and I am.

-Ill be damned if i let you go through with this. Just think, what would Rainbow Dash do?

She would..

-NOT GIVE UP!!

But everyone loved her, I'm just a random guy on the internet. not the best flier in Equestria

-I wish I had hands so I could knock some sense into you!! Your not just some random guy on the internet, You are Captain Literal. A writer, damned good one too, who prides himself on being different!!

I guess... I guess your... Right!! I AM CAPTAIN LITERAL

-THATS MY BOY!! NOW WHAT ARE GOING TO DO?

MAKE CLEVER RANDOM COMMENTS!!!

-IM PROUD OF YOU

THANKS. TIME TO STAY STRONG.

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>>764520764520 Again, I'll help with Hooves.

what does Doctor Whooves have against Ponyville?

REPO YO TARDIS BITCH

This was..OK.... You, could have done a lot more like rant about his past, (he hates that), or how all he does is bring hell to wherever he goes. There's just so much to work with. He's 900 years old, killed millions, committed genocide, made people into weapons, ruined lives, and so much more. This chapter disappointed me. (none-the-less it was still good, but short.)  5/10 Could have been epic if done right.

The doctor finally gets his turn and he wins but only as a result of Discord and Pip deciding not to show up, watch out Doctor Whooves or else you fall into the same trap as Pinkie Pie and Cadence.

>>764431764431 It is probably vanilla icecream bar with rice toppings on it. Or something like that.

>>765530765530 Thus is the reason why I never wanted to do the Doctor, someone would be upset that I didn't do it justice. I keep saying I don't know anything about him, so I can't think up jokes. This chapter worked out for me because I decided to be light hearted and nice so I wouldn't have to bring up something sad or harsh like you said, and so I could stick to the few things I do know.

Being the Doctor Who fan that I am, I have a suggestion for when he gets another chapter: mention the Weeping Angels.  They're these creatures that take the form of angel statues and freeze into stone when no one is looking at them, and if they touch you you get zapped back into the past.

They're from the episode Blink, which was the first episode I ever saw.

>>766697766697 Atleast, you gave it a good shot. Though, if you have not seen doctor who yet, I strongly recommend it. (It's my favorite show I've seen so, far)

Haha i love it XD all of it XD

>>768254768254 These aren't roasts...

'scuse me Mr. Overlord. Just wanna I love you for this

It's amazing

No! I love your story. Please don't end it.

>>775405775405 It's not over, just going on a little break so I can do other stories.

>>764431764431 I think its a popsicle made out of rice pudding? Oh i dont know either

Riceicles

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>>764526764526 Actually, that isn't canon; it was part of a filler scene that was fast-forwarded through in the show. A lot of fans know about it though. And also, his name is The Doctor; Doctor Who is just the name of the show, as well as something many people ask him.

And good job on this scene; not bad for someone who isn't a fan. I laughed.

I loved the pear part!

"And five, very important five, DON'T LET ME EAT PEARS! I HATE PEARS!"

I KNEW Discord was in on this! Of course, now I'm wondering if that voice has ALWAYS been him. All those Know Your Star skits . . . we never see him, even when they go to his recording room. Am I right? Anywho, I'm somewhat surprised the Doctor didn't say something akin to THIS at the end.

lol, caught him on pears and took his Tardis, well played Pip, well played

I was sad there was no Derpy jokes, but the TARDIS part more than made up for it.