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Know your mare, know your--
"Hold on a second, please," the mare in the center light called for attention, a less then joyful expression across her white face.
Yes...?
"Recently, I've had to talk a very delicate matter out with my sister and her two friends..."
Did you now...?
"I don't feel as if I need to explain it, I'm sure you are quite aware of what it is."
Do I...?
"Yes. I just thought you might want to know the awkward state my sister and I are currently in with each other."
An awkward state after that talk...?
Oh my...
"Pardon? Wait... NO--!"
Rarity...
...secretly wanted to have that talk with Sweetie Belle...
"I in no way said that. You are just twisting my words like a knife in the back of a friend."
Rarity...
...admits to being a back-stabber...
"I swear, that wasn't what I meant."
Rarity...
...is setting us up so well we may not even need to use the recordings...
"What record--"
Glad you asked...
"B-But I didn't--"
Scootaloo…
…dyes her coat and mane…
“This is natural. If anyone dyes their mane or coat it’s Sweetie Belle’s family.”
"Why that little..."
Do you dye your mane...?
"Of course not! My mane is completely nat--"
Drop it...
Dropping it...
With a little click, a flow of a liquid fell down Rarity and drenched her entire body, leaving her to quiver in a chill.
Hmmm...
Nope...
It's natural...
"Y-You dumped dye remover on me?!"
Just making sure...
...you look very pretty when you're wet though...
"Oh, why thank you."
Alright...
Enough of that...
...dry her off...
Another click echoed through the void to activate a jet powered fan to blow Rarity's entire body till she was completely dry.
There...
..no harm done...
Rarity...
...abuses Spike...
"Abuse Spikey-wikey? Never!"
Spike…
…cuts Rarity’s hoof nails…
“Only when she asks. I love helping her out.”
"That's not abuse. And he's a dear for doing it."
Wow...
You really are generous...
"I am told I embody it. That's why I have the element."
It's no wonder why Spike does what he does...
"Does--"
Spike…
…raids Rarity’s garbage…
“Who told?"
Creepy...
"A-Actually I find that somewhat endearing... in a way."
Rarity...
...raids Spike's garbage...
"Ewww, disgusting. I would never do anything so vile-- NO!"
Rarity...
...thinks Spike is disgusting and vile...
"I would never think for a moment that Spike is anything less than kind, cute, and charming!"
Ohhhhh...
Rarity...
...is in LOVE with Spike...
"Wha--! I never! Implying another pony's personal feelings? How low."
Say what you will...
...really...
...we'll have it on recording...
"...E-Excuse me?"
Oh yeah...
...I record everything that happens in here...
...So whatever you say about Spike or anypony will be on recording...
...So tell us how you really feel about him...
"Uh..."
Well...?
"I can't really--"
Amazing...
...you feel nothing for him...
...No hate...
...no love...
...he's nothing to you...
"I didn't say that!"
You didn't have to...
Your silence says it all...
"I-I care for Spike greatly..."
But not enough to accept his feelings...
...how...
...Heartless...
Rarity couldn't bring herself to say anything, her mind starting to cloud with the doubt she was feeling. And just like Twilight before, she fell down to her behind and just looked at the floor defeated.
Now you know...
Rarity...
...what a heartless sight...
Blank...
Will you do the honors...?
There's no honors in this...
Even so, the trap door swung open under Rarity to accept her into the depths bellow.
Comments ( 40 )
wow, you're on a roll now. keep owning the characters ![]()
BUT I STILL HATE WHAT YOU DID TO FLUTTERSHY ![]()
Seriouslly? I know this is sopost to be comady but.... this isn't something i laugh at.
In all respects yes its intresting but.....
Not fluttershy, please of all that is good not fluttershy.
And now you've gotten your style back unforunately for us, and I see you still haven't rescued Silver Spoon yet (Cocks shotgun) well I hope you know that you're digging yourself into an early grave by doing that. ![]()
With this story you Avatar (Discord) suits you well sir
Interesting story.... i am really courious about who is behind voices... and what they want. If this is some kind of prank, this is cruel one ![]()
Are the voices going to remember to clean out the room the trap door leads to?
NOOOOOOO!! Rarity has fallen!!! Erm-no matter uh- the voices will lose in the end!! (see my optimism?) characters 2 voices:2
Next battle....
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P.s for every loss an emotioncon representing the character will be changed to a negative one. If no negative one is found it is just removed.
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I feel like you are the Yagami to my L. This is going to keep me up all night, and the best part is tomorrow I have to wear a fedora and a slightly rumpled suit. Were I drinking age, I'm sure I'd be drinking to help this along. Damn.
oh lastly, this chapter, the Italics is super Cunning...Its makes me mad, and delighted at the same time...
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Gotta admit , I have not laughed in the last six .... I am to upset with Twi's ...sigh you know what ,forget it nopony gives a flyingfeather about what I say....![]()
Not hating I am just giving my opinion.
I'm getting very suspecious about that trap door...
And I am VERY sure that the second voise is Chyrsalis.
It's a show that's destroying the feelings of the victim, and then a trap door to no one knows where? Aand, Changelings feed off emotions.
Heh, this is starting to feel like the web serise RedVsBlue. Started out as a handful of installments made just for shits and giggles, but then after mending together some lol only parts, it made a very deep and relatively seamless story.
im just waiting for one of the bad***es to come back and once there in the light go "Buck it, you all suck, im outta here.
COME ON RAINBOW DASH!







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