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Know your mare, know your mare, know your mare...
Worry didn't even begin to describe the frigid terror that was across the meek ponies body as the voice she remembered was followed by two new ones.
Fluttershy...
"Eep..."
...Let's be straight here...
"Wh-what?"
...I'm sorry for how harsh I was to you...
"Y-you are?"
Yes...
"Y-y-you're not trying to trick me... a-are you?"
I swear to Celestia...
"O-Oh... that's--"
So...
...I'll let my new friend do this for me while me and No-Beard here go get some pie...
I'm getting a blue berry one...
"....W-Who's your friend?"
Me...
"I-I'm not afraid..."
No...
Not yet...
Suddenly, the light flickered out and was replaced by a thick red spot light fixed on Fluttershy's position.
Fluttershy...
...Is oblivious to the truth...
"W-What truth?"
Glad you asked...
Rainbow Dash…
…Is embarrassed of her relationship with Fluttershy…
“Of course."
"She was probably under pressure... I know the feeling..."
Hmmm...
...Yes...
Fluttershy...
...Is afraid of the dark...
"A little... B-but--"
So you wouldn't mind if I turned out the light...?
"I--"
So are you lying...?
"No. I just--"
Ah...
So...
Fluttershy...
...Is the biggest liar in Equestria...
"No! Fine, turn out the light. I'll show you I'm not afraid."
...Gladly...
Just like that, the single red light narrowed away onto Fluttershy before finally disappearing altogether, leaving the mare alone in the dark with an echoing voice.
Fluttershy...
...puts on a brave face...
"I-I-I am brave."
Flu-Flu-Flu-Fluttershy...
...can't sh-sh-show her brave face through all her tears...
"I'm not crying, and stop making fun of me..."
Or what...?
You'll cry...?
"I'm not afraid... I'm not afraid... Rainbow Dash said you can't hurt me..."
Fluttershy...
...needs to cry to Rainbow Dash when things get to hard for her...
"Everypony needs somepony sometimes... I bet you need help yourself."
I'm here alone...
...And I'm already destroying you...
"Alone? But you told those two to leave."
Yes...
... Because I don't need help...
"Because you don't need it, or because you can't bring yourself to ask for it?"
It doesn't matter...
Fluttershy--
"It does matter. If you're alone, you can ask for help."
Silence yourself...
...This is the hour of the voice's revenge...
"Then shouldn't he be here?"
I see no difference...
...If you go out of here a broken mare, it won't make a difference who did it...
"But if it's his problem, why are you solving it?"
...Fluttershy--
"I don't want to be rude and interrupt, but it sorta sounds like you have your own problem here."
Fluttershy--
"If you have a problem, you should go at it head on."
SILENCE!
The room was once again lit up, only this time it wasn't from the lights or anything over head. Fluttershy's appearance flickered against the circle of sickly green fire around her.
I don't have a problem!
I...
Am...
Done.
You're done...
This isn't the show I agreed on you being a part of...
Now let this poor mare go...
...Fine...
The flickering fires died and the regular spot light remained.
Now go little one...
"Thank you very much..." Fluttershy gave a little bow before darting off.
From now on...
The little one is in charge of you...
...Very well...
...This stinks...
No disagreement here...
I mean...
What sort of pony eats an entire supply of pies...
I blame the economy...
What's an economy...?
Something run by a grim dictator...
Now eat your Riceicle...
Comments ( 39 )
Chrysalis
Pisqueak, during Pip chapter he was talk for himself and Underline Voice
Don't know
Author
Who was the pink voice? At first I thought it was Cadence but then I thought it might have been the author no one said he couldn't be there.
Chrysalis. The voice is Chrysalis. It was the green texting that gave it away
You failed again voice number 2, whoever you are you really suck at this don't you, oh well win for Fluttershy and me. ![]()
Yay Fluttershy won!!! Characters 2 voices:1 yes! Too bad I can't choose anymore. Oh well, it was still good. Green flame huh? Yet another thing added to the bio I'm putting together on the voices for possible identities. Twilight style.
and I'm keeping the call sign. I've become attached.
Victory is sweet...
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Queen Swiss Cheese Legs, Pip, and hmm, Cadance, or maybe Luna. I have no clue! XD
A new voice? Isn't this a little late to introduce her?
Well, my guess is Princess Celestia, but only because its color is light pink and she acts like she's in command. For all I know, she could be Cadance too, (though Cadance doesn't look like she's in command of anything, even if she's an alicorn. I mean, she was babysitting noname foals while the other alicorns were playing ball with Celestial bodies...)
Also, "I blame the economy" is my perfect answer from now on if anyone tries to accuse me with anything. ![]()
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, i wish this show could just be mean all the time, those times are when its beast
I am completely lost here, and have no idea who is who anymore. I give up, you win. xD
Hmmmm... Pink voice? I have no idea, but I know who ate all of the pies! Gosh dangit Soarin, the voices wanted some of those!
Everone says Chyrsalis but im going to troll you guys green flames it has to be Spike
Fluttershy chaps are the boring ones in this fic cause right after the first sentence you already know how it will end. *rolls eyes*
To quote RD: *Booooooooooring~*
WHO ARE YOU? Luna? Chrysalis. Pipsqueek... I'll just roll with it. I don't even f*ckin' know...
>frigid terror that was across the meek ponies body
*pony's
obviously italics is chrysalis, i had no idea before so doesnt bust any bubbles for me.
if their was any doubt whatsoever before that underline wasnt pip, it is gone, he can be nopony else.
as for bold, im still rooting for gilda
Trixie. Because she intervened when it got too far, and everyone knows that Trixie isn't evil. ![]()
my brain hurts with all the different voices now... the fuck is going on and why do more keep popping up?
the hell just happened there at the ending, and I'm not referring to the damn pie thing ![]()
After reading the first chapter with Fluttershy, I was exited to see another one with her, but now I'm not. I wanted to see the voices break her, like this
, but now I am disappoint. Don't worry, I don't have anything against this fic, or Fluttershy, but seeing the voices break down all their guests is just hilarious. keep up the good work. ![]()







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