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    Overlord-Flinx's Stories (33)

    • Luna makes toast.
      One average morning, one average princess, one average kitchen, and one average bag of whole wheat bread slices... No one could mess this up.

      1,215 words · 1,119 views · 189 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Morning Mi'Armadura
      The morning after the most memorable night of your life should always be used for reflection.
      1,089 words · 2,750 views · 203 likes · 3 dislikes
    • "Where's that Fan Fiction?!" and "Pip's First Story."
      A fan fiction written by a young colt? That's not news. Everyone writes fan fictions. It's no big deal. Really. No one is interested at all... Where did he put it?
      1,720 words · 476 views · 79 likes · 0 dislikes
    • They Grow Up...
      ...But that doesn't mean we can't meddle. If for their best interest, we should step it. Always.
      15,545 words · 3,439 views · 378 likes · 10 dislikes
    • Former Edicit
      2,581 words · 1,327 views · 100 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Birds and the Changelings
      1,939 words · 3,695 views · 289 likes · 10 dislikes
    • Cutie Mark Crusaders Equal Opportunity Employers.
      1,153 words · 608 views · 87 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Know your Mare
      50,266 words · 15,149 views · 1,722 likes · 110 dislikes
    • Discordia: Turn on the Lights.
      3,449 words · 416 views · 49 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Clop on the Ground
      4,275 words · 2,548 views · 267 likes · 12 dislikes
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    Know your mare, know your mare, know your mare...

    Worry didn't even begin to describe the frigid terror that was across the meek ponies body as the voice she remembered was followed by two new ones.

    Fluttershy...

    "Eep..."

    ...Let's be straight here...

    "Wh-what?"

    ...I'm sorry for how harsh I was to you...

    "Y-you are?"

    Yes...

    "Y-y-you're not trying to trick me... a-are you?"

    I swear to Celestia...

    "O-Oh... that's--"

    So...

    ...I'll let my new friend do this for me while me and No-Beard here go get some pie...

    I'm getting a blue berry one...

    "....W-Who's your friend?"

    Me...

    "I-I'm not afraid..."

    No...

    Not yet...

    Suddenly, the light flickered out and was replaced by a thick red spot light fixed on Fluttershy's position.

    Fluttershy...

    ...Is oblivious to the truth...

    "W-What truth?"

    Glad you asked...

    Rainbow Dash…

    …Is embarrassed of her relationship with Fluttershy…

    “Of course."

    "She was probably under pressure... I know the feeling..."

    Hmmm...

    ...Yes...

    Fluttershy...

    ...Is afraid of the dark...

    "A little... B-but--"

    So you wouldn't mind if I turned out the light...?

    "I--"

    So are you lying...?

    "No. I just--"

    Ah...

    So...

    Fluttershy...

    ...Is the biggest liar in Equestria...

    "No! Fine, turn out the light. I'll show you I'm not afraid."

    ...Gladly...

    Just like that, the single red light narrowed away onto Fluttershy before finally disappearing altogether, leaving the mare alone in the dark with an echoing voice.

    Fluttershy...

    ...puts on a brave face...

    "I-I-I am brave."

    Flu-Flu-Flu-Fluttershy...

    ...can't sh-sh-show her brave face through all her tears...

    "I'm not crying, and stop making fun of me..."

    Or what...?

    You'll cry...?

    "I'm not afraid... I'm not afraid... Rainbow Dash said you can't hurt me..."

    Fluttershy...

    ...needs to cry to Rainbow Dash when things get to hard for her...

    "Everypony needs somepony sometimes... I bet you need help yourself."

    I'm here alone...

    ...And I'm already destroying you...

    "Alone? But you told those two to leave."

    Yes...

    ... Because I don't need help...

    "Because you don't need it, or because you can't bring yourself to ask for it?"

    It doesn't matter...

    Fluttershy--

    "It does matter. If you're alone, you can ask for help."

    Silence yourself...

    ...This is the hour of the voice's revenge...

    "Then shouldn't he be here?"

    I see no difference...

    ...If you go out of here a broken mare, it won't make a difference who did it...

    "But if it's his problem, why are you solving it?"

    ...Fluttershy--

    "I don't want to be rude and interrupt, but it sorta sounds like you have your own problem here."

    Fluttershy--

    "If you have a problem, you should go at it head on."

    SILENCE!

    The room was once again lit up, only this time it wasn't from the lights or anything over head. Fluttershy's appearance flickered against the circle of sickly green fire around her.

    I don't have a problem!

    I...

    Am...

    Done.

    You're done...

    This isn't the show I agreed on you being a part of...

    Now let this poor mare go...

    ...Fine...

    The flickering fires died and the regular spot light remained.

    Now go little one...

    "Thank you very much..." Fluttershy gave a little bow before darting off.

    From now on...

    The little one is in charge of you...

    ...Very well...


    ...This stinks...

    No disagreement here...

    I mean...

    What sort of pony eats an entire supply of pies...

    I blame the economy...

    What's an economy...?

    Something run by a grim dictator...

    Now eat your Riceicle...

    Comments ( 39 )

    #1 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>712881 Oh I did. And I would gladly put money that I know you're wrong.

    #2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Chrysalis, Pisqueak, Fancypants, and... Celestia? Hmm.  Maybe Fleur de lis.

    #3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Chrysalis

    Pisqueak, during Pip chapter he was talk for himself and Underline Voice

    Don't know

    Author

    #4 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Riceicles? Can I have one?

    #5 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>713075 I actually like riceicles... It's not as bad as you'd think :ajsmug:

    #6 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well I know two of the voices now, but that first voice is a mystery.....

    #7 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Who was the pink voice? At first I thought it was Cadence but then I thought it might have been the author no one said he couldn't be there.

    #8 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>713161 No body knows... except me :trixieshiftright:

    #9 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Chrysalis.  The voice is Chrysalis.  It was the green texting that gave it away

    #10 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    You failed again voice number 2, whoever you are you really suck at this don't you, oh well win for Fluttershy and me. :yay:

    #11 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Yay Fluttershy won!!! Characters 2 voices:1 yes! Too bad I can't choose anymore. Oh well, it was still good. Green flame huh? Yet another thing added to the bio I'm putting together on the voices for possible identities. Twilight style.:twilightsmile: and I'm keeping the call sign. I've become attached.

    Victory is sweet...

    :pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::ajsmug::rainbowdetermined2::raritywink::scootangel::yay::trollestia::moustache::facehoof:

    #12 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Crysilis.

    #13 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Queen Swiss Cheese Legs, Pip, and hmm, Cadance, or maybe Luna. I have no clue! XD

    #14 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    You so of  a :flutterrage:

    how could you do that to fluttershy in the beginning?!

    #16 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    A new voice? Isn't this a little late to introduce her?

    Well, my guess is Princess Celestia, but only because its color is light pink and she acts like she's in command. For all I know, she could be Cadance too, (though Cadance doesn't look like she's in command of anything, even if she's an alicorn. I mean, she was babysitting noname foals while the other alicorns were playing ball with Celestial bodies...)

    Also, "I blame the economy" is my perfect answer from now on if anyone tries to accuse me with anything. :trollestia:

    #17 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, i wish this show could just be mean all the time, those times are when its beast

    #18 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I am completely lost here, and have no idea who is who anymore. I give up, you win. xD

    #19 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Wot jus happen :rainbowhuh:

    #20 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hmmmm... Pink voice? I have no idea, but I know who ate all of the pies! Gosh dangit Soarin, the voices wanted some of those!

    #21 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>716275 Unlike the other voices, the pink voice is very unimportant. It doesn't do anything too bad to the story, just a little add on to keep the order.

    #22 · 53w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>712962

    I 1000 percent agree

    now just watch there be a Chyrsalis Chapter with the Italics voice. and us all be wrong

    #23 · 53w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Everone says Chyrsalis but im going to troll you guys green flames it has to be Spike

    #24 · 52w, 11h ago · · ·
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    All these voices... ahghhrhg

    #25 · 51w, 21h ago · · ·
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    I'm thinking... Discord, Chyrsalis, and Twist :twistnerd:

    #26 · 50w, 19h ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy chaps are the boring ones in this fic cause right after the first sentence you already know how it will end. *rolls eyes*

    To quote RD: *Booooooooooring~*

    #27 · 50w, 11h ago · · ·
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    WHO ARE YOU? Luna? Chrysalis. Pipsqueek... I'll just roll with it. I don't even f*ckin' know...

    #29 · 49w, 1d ago · · ·
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    obviously italics is chrysalis, i had no idea before so doesnt bust any bubbles for me.

    if their was any doubt whatsoever before that underline wasnt pip, it is gone, he can be nopony else.

    as for bold, im still rooting for gilda

    #30 · 48w, 4d ago · · ·
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    who was teh pink voice?

    :pinkiegasp:

    #31 · 47w, 6d ago · 2 · ·
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    I am so confused...

    #32 · 46w, 15h ago · · ·
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    The green fire kinda gave it away...I think...

    #33 · 25w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>934722 <---- This.

    #34 · 16w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #35 · 16w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Trixie. Because she intervened when it got too far, and everyone knows that Trixie isn't evil. :trixieshiftright:

    #36 · 15w, 5d ago · 3 · ·
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    my brain hurts with all the different voices now... the fuck is going on and why do more keep popping up?

    #37 · 7w, 18h ago · · ·
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    the hell just happened there at the ending, and I'm not referring to the damn pie thing :rainbowhuh:

    #38 · 5w, 4d ago · · ·
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    How many voices is it now? :twilightsmile:

    #39 · 1w, 5d ago · · ·
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    After reading the first chapter with Fluttershy, I was exited to see another one with her, but now I'm not. I wanted to see the voices break her, like this :fluttercry:, but now I am disappoint. Don't worry, I don't have anything against this fic, or Fluttershy, but seeing the voices break down all their guests is just hilarious. keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

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