Yay!! You get 5 moustaches

NOOOOOOOOO!!! You may have felled Twilight, but I still have far more characters at my disposal!!! YOU.....WILL.....FALL!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder if you can handle two characters at once!! MUHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

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You shall lose...

>>707802707802 Oh right... those two... Don't worry... We won't put them a part...

I AM TWILIGHT SPARKLE!  SLUM LORD OF EQUESTRIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!  She will use The Great And Powerful Trixie's magic combined with her own to destroy everyone who DOESN'T have a hobo living on their lawn.

Meeeeeeeeean.

>>707820707820 you under estimate their power. Ones strengths makes up for the others weakness. >=) couples like them have been facing harassment from your kind before. That gives them experience and resolve. Also strength!! You will fail. Vinyl won't let octy face you alone. You forget you failed with her!!!

You are doomed....

where does the trap door lead to? is it just a room with all of the ponies just waiting there or does it kick 'em out somewhere?

Okay this chapter made me laugh so much more than all the others, your power of twisting words is increasing.

Bwhahhaha! Me thinks Twilight doth protest too much!

Poor Twilight, well played voices, well played indeed

Aww...  That's a bummer for twilight...

Now we have to find someone awesome to beat the three slanderers up....  Can we send in Chuck Norris?

>>707861707861 We shall see...

I haven't reviewed these in a while...

Anyway, even though the evidence points away from it I still believe that the italicized voice is pip.

Lastly, this was just plain mean... I loved it!

>>707802707802 do I hear a bass cannon charging?

>>708073708073 No ... That's in Buckflankia

the only one i can guess is Queen Chrysalis wanting revenge, but damn we went from lighthearted jibes to full on mental assassination, at least the first voice has been showing signs of sympathy... can't wait to see where this goes

>>708073708073 welcome to the soon be winning side!!! Another to the cause!!

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Twilight is my favorite pony, but this beyond hilarious

>>708124708124 BY THE POWER OF FREYJA! WE WILL PREVAIL!

>>707889707889

THE CROCODILE PIT! OR THE MOON!

Okay...

That was hilarious. Why do you keep walking into these, Twilight?

You're the evilest bastard alive and yet you are one of the best writers to put down characters I applaud you all the moustaches!!!!

>>708234708234 I'm told I'm a great voicer for characters. However, at the same time I must put my feelings aside for the sake of the story... Even if it means hurting my favourite pony

>>708250708250 Which pony is your favorite?

>>708166708166 YEA!! SOON MORE WILL JOIN THE CAUSE!! IT IS ONLY A MATTER OF TIME.....

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>>708397708397 For public interest, I think it's best I don't say

>>708437708437 Alright alright, stop with that talk.

>>708437708437 Infidel! You are finished!

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>>708479708479 okay I'll tone it down.

But your still going to lose this round....

>>708480708480 I think not!! The disembodied voice has become corrupt by the two new ones. If bold don't do something big soon.. He might be overwhelmed!! (besides its all in good friendly competition.)

>>708502708502 You realize I'm still running this show, right? How this happens is up to me

That was..........AWESOME. The voices really have it together, I hope this signals an end to the internal bickering and can begin the verbal assaults

>>708527708527 yup. I'm just saying my predictions based off my observations and analyzing. I'm a writer too. also I enjoy these chapters. And a bit of exaggerations may have been thrown in my comments for effect. Like I said, it's all in good fun. I do not mean any harm, and I still reconized you as the author, me the reader.

I enjoy the little "Me and the characters vs you and the voices" thing. Sorry if I got carried away though.

>>708563708563 It's fine, it's fine. Either way, I may put two chapters up tomorrow because I'm working on another short story.

>>708575708575 that's cool. I'm working on a fic of my own. I'll be sure to read it. I'm watching you :

>>708591708591 Sure I love to write large complicated stories with a real point, but sadly those stories don't sell as well... So until I've gathered enough watchers, I stick to using the right lures; Simple, funny, hard hitting, questionable stories that make little sense.

>>708600708600 lol. I've thought once or twice about making a short story. had some pretty good ideas too.

>>708614708614 The problem for me is that I have too many ideas... And I'm sure only half of them are good enough. IE this one and my next one... Once I figure out an important piece for it...

>>708621708621 have you tried doing an R and R( Recollection an Reflection)? It is good for getting out all your ideas and sorting the goods, from the bads.

Well, boldy-pants-text-colt/stallion/filly/mare seems to have gotten over whatever it was that was making him feel bad before.  Or he/she is somepony who doesn't like Twilight.

So this story just took a turn for the spooky, wonder what'll happen...

This chapter made me cry.    Why were you so mean to Twilight?  Now she needs a hug.  Maybe I can give it to her...

But still.  Bad author.

>>709238709238 Why blame me? I hate being rude to such wonderful characters... Granted a little less for certain characters, but I'm civil enough to put that aside. Either way, not a single character gets special treatment. And from this point on the hits will be harder until something derails the voices.

You wound me Twilight Sparkle...

"If only I could."

Twilight deserved it...

Now THAT was a chapter.

... Fluttershy? TEAR THEM A NEW ONE!

...that explains the mysterious fire in the Everfree Forest last night, poor Twilight had to blow off some steam before she did something she's regret.  That, or she was coming up with ideas of what to do to these voices when she finds the bodies that they belong to.

>>708437708437 What the buck is Luna doing in that picture?

>>710107710107 she was in round one.

And part of my arsenal of characters. >=)

>>710107710107 an what she is doing, I haven't the slightest clue. Luna what are you doing there?

I am doing the traditional royal Canterlot battle pose. Is it not obvious?

Welp, there's your answer.

>>710159710159 I....I don't even.....

>>709238709238 don't worry I'm on an mission to defeat the voices! (even though I really can't do much except come up with ideas for characters to throw at them in different combos. Even then I'm not the author, so my ideas don't decide which characters are next.)

But I will succeed. I'm certain!!