OH GOD WHY

Look at that last word. It's RED

Oh snap, this is getting very interesting

Voices have a fight, bold gets kicked out. Calling it now.

>>669015669015 HAH! Brawl in the Family!

>>669018669018 A family feud?

poor octavia

>>669035669035 No, I meant the person's name. It's from a web comic I know ... But maybe it's also a feud between them

>>669069669069 Ohhhh. I rgeret nothing.

O-kay then. From this point on, never using italics again. I-voice at least felt bad for Fluttershy, who seemingly took the verbal assault as well as the grey earth-type. Octavia didn't deserve that. Hell, no-one deserved this slander save Gilda and Trixie.

I'm truly hoping it has a physical body. That much easier for its victims to gang up and beat the everloving sh outta it.

Great story by the way mate, even if I haven't got the first clue what "know your star" is!

The last part's in red... is old Voice getting sorrowful now?

I'm guessing one voice is Discorfd and the other is Chrysalis...

*hugs Octavia*

.....Prescott hates Octavia.....and he laughs at Octavia       ...Now you know...Richard Prescott...

Hah! Do Fancy Pants next, and have him not understand a thing because he's too good-natured and naive!

Or have the voices get into a shouting match with Iron Will!

Or maybe Hoity Toity outslanders them- I could see that happen!

This made my day.

Non-Boldface voice is so much more cruel.

Im starting to think that the alternate "Disembodied voice" just might be GLaDOS. Hmmmm...

Uh oh. Voice is just cruising unavoidably towards a pony beatdown.

I wish I had a more relevant image... but I lack art skills for that

Do Chrysalis next please. I'm going to beg now....PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Can somepony please beat up voice #2?

Voice 1 just wanted to do this in all the fun and games along with it, but voice 2 came along and decided to make everything about hurting ponies and making them feel horrible and sad, instead of just making them confused and slightly upset.

Btw my bets are on voice 1 being Discord and voice 2 being Chrysalis.

>>669394669394 Do you mind if I make a one-shot that kills the second voice? He's just cruel. The other is ok tho.

>>669507669507 Go ahead. But who said it was a he? The voices for now are to be ambiguous, but if you view it as a boy then it's a boy to you

Geez, that was rough. This second voice is good at what he does, too good. That actually hurt, no one was hit that hard. I can't wait to find out who the voices are. You will tell us who they are won't you?

>>669756669756 Maybe you already know

Ok, it IS regret. (I made a comment on the previous chapter)

That bold one might be taking this too far.

>>669756669756>>669985669985 I'll be having the second voice punished. The first one is just annoying. The second...

>>669549669549 Mind if I add a OC?

>>670011670011 Go right ahead . You have a creative liberty. Either way, I strongly believe in justice... which will occur later in the story.

>>670040670040 I can't wait. Just don't punish the bold one to much. I like him. He actually knows when it goes to far. I'll PM you the link once it's done.

Haha, the tale of the bold voice is a story in an of itself.  It's feeling bad about what italic voice is making it do.  And now it's either angry, or there is a new voice.

I feel sorry or the bold voice, really. xD

As for the red text in the end, it completely confused me. xD

I guess it's probably just the color choice for the site, but I want to be clear that the last line is in BROWN not RED . Just want that to be clear.

I dont know who the second voice is but, I dont like him!

>>670685670685 I'm writing a hate fic as you speak.

voice #2 is Chrysalis. wonder if bon bon is next?

This wasn't funny. This was sad.

BUT I LOVE IT.

You need to have Vinyl Scratch (AKA: DJ PWN3) do some major damage to the Voice (Italic Voice that is)

>>671680671680 Or is it?

Faaaaalling towaaard the skyyy

Just waiting for my...

Ride.

SUDDENLY EPIC RAP WHILE FALLING DOWN AN ORBITAL LASER STRIKED BUILDING.

--

I like this j/s c:

>>672743672743 Bravo! You got the joke. For that YOU can pick the next person.

I love that second voice! Can't help but feel sorry for those poor ponies. However, he is the antagonist, more than likely bound to lose in the end.

>>672759672759

Oh sweet! c:

How about Diamond Tiara for the next mare.

>>673236673236 You got it.

OMGOMGOMGOMG I'M LISTENING TO FALLING TOWARDS THE SKY AS I READ THIS!!! THAT'S FUCKING WIERD!!!!  I love that RVB reference!

No reference yo being Pinkie's sister? interesting.

>>669170669170

Look at my profile pic. Do you think I agree?

Now for reals,

Why would do that to Octavia...?

Surprised you didn't bring up the rumor about her being Pinkie Pie's sister, still it dosen't matter you're dead (fires shotgun but misses) DOH I MISSED!

Mr. Bold Voice i have new respect for you. don't let Italics push you around

italics voice run. and hide. i will dissect you. i will dissect your individual muscles, and cut around any vital organs. i will flay you alive, and rub salt into your bare flesh, and then put you in a tank of blood, to re-hydrate you and keep you alive.

and start it all over again

that was just cruel

...I feel bad for reading this. Octavia had a bad life starting off, and she finally turned it around.

This is crushing, man :c.

Poor octavia

>>669080669080

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png

>>672743672743 THANK YOU.

I was scrolling through the comments, getting steadily more irritated that no one had pointed out the reference. Faith in humanity restored, yada-yada, let's move on.

italics voice starts to sound a little like GLaDOS.

WUT IS HAPPENING~!

ouch

I'm not. Bravo to the new voice, Bravo!

Octi, you wanna hug? *hug*

That made me kinda sad

>>668993668993 I-iiii-i'm scared.

Hold me.

Dat voice having second thoughts?

NOPONY INSULTS VINYL SCRATCH AND OCTAVIA

Oh... poor Tavi.  :(

This one was just cruel.

Hey, you forgot the most important one!

Octavia...

... is in a closet relationship...

"Well, yes, this I can confess to."

Octavia...

... 'makes music' with Vinyl...

"Well, yes, I most certainly do and... wait..."

The  voices are discord an chrysalis:-)!

“She’s pitifully out of class as well.”

…stays friends with a slob of a DJ

what did they just say about my vinyl?

<--- does this look like an out of class slob to you?

also.....how dare you insult tavi as well voice....i may have more favour to vinyl but tavi is still high on my list of favourite bg ponies

this is mutiny mr voice, i'll see you swing from the highest yard-arm in titan docking port for this days work mate

*Hears clicking of something unbuckling*

Wait, what's that?

*turns on light*

*sees metal pointed bow spinning towards him*

OH SH-

Ah, now I don't feel so angry anymore

damn, dats a bitch move. hell that was just plain mean. Mr. Voice the hell man? Don't let Mean Voice do the work.

Octavia... Is a member of the Black Hoof cult...

(Ponified Black Hand from C&C 3: Kane's Wrath for those who didn't know)

Dude... that last one... too far.