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Joined April 2012
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    Overlord-Flinx's Stories (33)

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    Know your mare, know your mare, know your mare…

    Normally the pegasus would wear her usual Wonderbolts attire, but letting her full body show for sometime seemed fitting for this more casual happening…

    Spitfire…

    …is a closet Trixie fan…

    “Meh, she’s alright. I wouldn’t go as far as to say I’m a fan, but I’d be lying if I said I’ve never been to a show.”

    Spitfire…

    …is too cool for school…

    “Completely. I’m hot stuff, and that’s not just a pun on the name.”

    Spitfire…

    …admitted to have never gone to school…

    “Uhh, no. No I didn’t say that… at all.”

    Spitfire…

    …had an affair with Fancypants…

    “Woah! Where’s that one coming from? I’ve never met the guy. And I’m not a cheap floozy that just—no!”

    Spitfire…

    …doesn’t give Soarin’ any…

    “We-We’re not like that! He’s just my partner.”

    Yeah…

    …partner…

    “I mean-NO- I don’t mean like that!”

    Oh…

    …one of many partners…

    “Hey! No! I’m not—It’s not like—It’s…” her face burning a deep red and chest puffing in anxiety, Spitfire searched around her for a second before bursting out to the side of the dark and away from the light in a blur.

    I guess now you know…

    Spitfire…

    …I…

    …Guess…

    Comments ( 34 )

    #1 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Does the voice sound remorseful or is just me?

    #2 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I lol'd. Oh and why are some words in bold but some are not?

    #3 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>663777 Different voices. In the chapter "voice..." another voice was added in. A more ruthless one. The bold is the voice we've had since the start, and the italics are the new one; and when they're used together it means they're both speaking.

    #4 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>663787 Oh I get it. Thanks for the explanation :twilightsmile:

    #5 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    .........:rainbowlaugh: Poor Spitfire.

    #6 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Hmm..... Seems like our voice is becoming a little hesitant.

    #7 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Soarin’ has got to be the next one....

    #8 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Poor spitfire...

    #10 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Need some Octavia.

    #11 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Pre-reading: hmm... looks like all the chapters are roughly 200 words. *looks at list carefully* oh, wait, Derpy's has 400 words. Well, yea, I see how much you can make fun of her :derpytongue2: She's every troll's dream.

    #12 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Chrysalis must be next.

    #13 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I think I know where this is going.

    #14 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Sounds like the voice is missing his solo partnership and not really liking how vicious Chrysalis is.

    #15 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Vinyl Scratch and Octavia one of these days please! :pinkiehappy:

    #16 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>665577 Be careful for what you wish for... :trixieshiftleft:

    #17 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>665637

    :rainbowderp: :rainbowhuh: Ooooooooh? I sense something interesting coming in the future. :moustache:

    #18 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>665662 The next person is getting it harder then Fluttershy got it... And something worse.

    #19 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh:This has been fantastic! I do hope this continues.

    #20 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>666344 I try to keep one up each day.

    #21 · 54w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Man, these ponies have some REALLY thin skin.

    #22 · 54w, 5d ago · · ·
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    this is too good :rainbowlaugh:

    #23 · 54w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>668771 It's just picking at the right topic to the right pony.

    #24 · 54w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Is that regret I hear? :applejackunsure:

    #25 · 53w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #26 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Just wait till Spitfire tells Soarin and the other Wonderbolts you're as good as dead. :rainbowlaugh:

    #27 · 49w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #28 · 48w, 3d ago · · ·
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    the voice...

    something is happening to the voice...

    :trixieshiftright:

    #29 · 45w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I like this new voice buddy. He can make a good show

    #30 · 31w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I like SpitFire

    #31 · 25w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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    Spitfire…

    …doesn’t give Soarin’ any…

    :rainbowlaugh: I think I awoke the people in China with that one. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #32 · 22w, 2h ago · 1 · ·
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    the second voice is taking over:twilightoops:

    BOOM PLOT TWIST!!!!

    #33 · 6w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I got a complaint from my neighbors, apparently there is such as thing as laughing too loud

    #34 · 5w, 2d ago · 1 · ·
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    Okay, you need to get Sheldon Cooper, The Doctor, Dr. House, Jack Sparrow, and Tony Stark up in this bitch.

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