The Dawn of Zane

by LoganvllachANDGodmod3

Hooded Pony Unmasked

We gasped as the moment went solemn and silent, as if the world itself had just witnessed the birth of a star...

"H-He's.." stumbled Glistening Spark
My horn began to glow as Glistening looked up at me, a single snowflake fell, followd by several others soon after, soon, I had created a snowfall,

"The skies, they're crying for the loss of not only a friend, but a hero..." I spoke softly.
"But he can't be gone! He just can't!" sobbed Glistening, "I know, it's hard..when a friend dies.." I spoke as the snow began to intensify, "We've

taken care of Zane, and now we can be sure that he's the one that caused this.." I said, "H-*sniff* How can you be sure?" asked Glistening as a

rippling portal showed up in the center of the platform "Thats why, he was throwing in helpless ponies, but for what cause? Because he's only evil,

he's entirely constructed of Jacob's evil, and thats why Jacob was so good." I replied, "Now, we best head through this portal, before it closes." I

added, as Glistening nodded and we headed through the portal... When we reached the other side we were in a black room, seeminly empty other than the

slight smell of lingering pony flesh, it was dark and quiet, we walked around for a bit and began hearing machines pumping we walked toward the sound

and it wasn't long before we heard a sudden **SHING** And a thump behind us, we turned around frightened, to see nothing but the shine of the door

behind us, steaming different colors, shimmering off of metal..
As we began to back away two pegasus ponies came behind us and held us in place, "Let us go!" shouted Glistening Spark "Yeah, whats the big idea?

What is this place? Who are you?" I added,
Two yellow eyes opened infront of us as we heard a voice...
"Fret not boys, I only want to ask you questions..I am Zeere, the pony who currently runs this place, now I don't want to answer your questions yet,

so why not answer myne?" he spoke solemnly.."First, why are you here? And how did you get here?" he asked, "We came here through a portal" I said,

"Really? Hmm...Who are you?" he asked hastily, "We're-" I was interrupted by Glistening "Glistening Spark, professional tinkerer and Icy Wind,

Princess Luna's student!" He shouted while struggling, the pegasus holding him got a better grip before Zeere glared at them and they dropped us,

"This is the Rainbow Factory, in Cloudsdale...However, I can't allow you into the main corrido-" before he could finish I immediately ran out the

door behind us, and what I saw scarred me for eternity, Pegasus ponies being torn apart and put into machines that blended up a rainbow extract

(This'll definitely give me a grimdark rating XD) I gasped as Zeere grabbed me and covered my mouth followed by putting a knife next to my neck, in

the light from the reflection of his knife I could see...He was the hooded pony...