The Dawn of Zane

by LoganvllachANDGodmod3

Push Forward

Suzie sat at home worried, ponyville was seemingly normal, and wasnt very affected by the incident, a peach mare and grey stallion walked by "Hey

daddy, I wonder what's outside of Equestria.." said the curious peach mare, the grey stallion replied with "I dunno Lucy, Dragon territory?"
She shrugged and they walked along. Meanwhile Suzie was worrying her flank off, she began pacing, when she finally told herself that she was going to

just forget about it and play some video games, and she did so. Meanwhile, our heroes find the shortcut, and walk down it, it leads underground, and

back up into a canyon, they finally make their way to the canyon, which had water along it, appropriately, Zane rose out of the water and looked at

us floating like a puppet. He began to speak "You boys..I've got you this far, however, it's time to turn back, this isn't my plan.." Jacob replied

with "What plan?!" Zane replied annoyed "Why are you so stupid? You created me, you clearly arent that bright, so it's obviously something

generically malicious..oh wait...never mind I'm my own thing now.." he knocked me aside as Glistening and Jacob ran infront of me to defend me.
"Why'd you do that to him?!" hollared Glistening, Jacob replied "Don't reason with it, it's all my evil thoughts." My horn was glowing as the wind

intensified "R-Run." I spoke. A twister started to occur as I got up and ran into the hole behind us, Zane looked around frantically as he was swept

up by the twister. "Nice goin' Icy" said Glistening "Hehe, Thanks.." I replied, Jacob disappointed corrected us "You fools.." "Hm?" we replied, He

continued "We couldve imprisoned him inside me, we didn't need your help, you just made it more difficult now!" We continued arguing as I saw the

hooded stallion again, I pointed at him, "THERE!" I shouted, he disappeared just before they could look "Your crazy! Thats just a cliff!" said

Glistening, Jacob grumbled at Glistenings comment and Glistening embaressed fake laughed "Hehe.." I suddenly had an idea "Wait, we don't need to

swim, just prepare to be cold.." I closed my eyes and focused my magic, as the water froze over, ice flowed down from the waterfalls and along the

valley river as I opened my eyes, "Well, let's go!" I trotted across the ice happily, as they followed astonished.

On the other side we found a swamp as I was nearly out of magic and couldn't freeze the swamp water, I groaned "Snakes AND water?! COME..ON!"
Jacob rolled his eyes and said "Oh please, you went through the literal snake forest, this is nothing"
"But it has water t-" I was interrupted by a letter coming down from the sky, it hit my head and I opened it with my magic and read it...