• Published 1st Sep 2014
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The Dawn of Zane - LoganvllachANDGodmod3



Icy Wind is a special unicorn from Canterlot who is mentored by Princess Luna, one day a train crash happens when Icy is waiting for a study partner to arrive, and that's when everything goes out of order.

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Jacob

Show yourself you coward!" shouted Jacob, he was a crystal pegasus, he had a psychosis, his own alter ego haunted him, his alter ego which Jacob had

named Zane. The average day stood upon Zane messing with Jacob's head, but this day was different, for earlier this day, Zane had obtained its own

body, it had disappeared and had drove Jacob crazy.

Our story transitions to the Everfree Forest, where a lone Zebra treks through the morning dew on a cold day, he approaches the path to ponyville,

carrying a saddl bag with him. A large shatter was heard coming from ponyville, where a train had crashed, the conductor called the police and they

came as quickly as possible, many ponies were rushed to the emergency room, as the zebra sat and watched from afar.

Jacob woke up in the emergency room, his hooves cold, and head wrapped in bandages, he shook his body parts slowly to make sure he hadnt broken

anything, to notice that one of his wings..was wiped clean off his back..He screamed in shock, as the nurse came down. "Whats wrong?!" She asked,

Doctors ran up to the room. "No, Not now, Don't snap Jacob...Don't.." He thought to himself, as his eye began to twitch. "My Wing! It's gone!

AHAHAHAHAHAH!" He laughed psychotically, as he felt a sharp pain, as if he had been jabbed by a needle, as he slowly fell asleep... Other hospital

ponies woke up moving frantically. A peach pony and grey pony walked by the hospital as the peach one said "Whats goin' on daddy?" the grey one

replied with "How would I know?" and the peach one shrugged. Jacob thought comatose "What is my family thinking? This must be the talk of

equestria..I wonder if they know if I made it to canterlot to meet my partner."

Our story transitions back to Icy Wind in canterlot waiting for a train to arrive.

A royal guard arrives "I've just recieved word that there was a train crash, were going to need to call off the study for now." As he began to walk

away another royal guard came and whispered something in his ear. The first guard nodded and corrected his statement "I've just recieved word that

Princess Luna would like you to head to ponyville, we will be sent with you for the trip, as the rail system is currently closed, you should go tell

your family.

I nodded and headed to my family, as they had a look of disappointment "Icy, dear, weve heard.."
Mom I'm so sorry..I had no idea."
My dad pat my back, as he looked at me and spoke "Son, there comes a time in every colts life when they must grow up and leave the nest, youll have

lots of adventures I'm sure, just be sure to stay in contact with us, alright?"

I nodded as they put my saddle bags on me and I ran out the door, the guards and I exited the gate and began to make way to ponyville, and our story

begins to unfold.
"Interesting..The blue unicorn is heading to ponyville? This should be fun.." as the Zebra disappeared into the night...