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Interesting story here. ^^

Very cool story. Kinda weird.

4933278 I used to do candy-vore a lot back when I was MUCKing. Usually with people who weren't into that sort of thing. Everyone likes to eat candy! :scootangel:

“Nah,” I said, ruffling her mane. “I have it on good authority that dragons hate taffy.”

What could go wrong? Haha, no but really, this was a great fic. :heart:

Mmm, candy. :9

Lyra's character and voice -- the way she narrates -- is very entertaining. I like her!

That pony and her fetishes...

The first story of yours that entertained the hell out of me was "Spirit Tethers", I think. The second involved Spike and Lyra, but wasn't as funny. This one, however, has the best of both worlds: Lyra having thing for Spike, and Lyra being hilariously weird.

He’s scaly and warm, and it’s a really interesting combination, and I love the way the edge of my hooves catch on his scales as I rub them across his skin. I don’t just like him for his claws! Pretty much every part of him is just so different from a stallion. It’s fascinating.

Wish people would pick up on this view. I'd be shocked if Spike got through puberty and wasn't a filly magnet.

man lyra is lucky she did not die from that

Okay...
Okay...

This was ... I dunno ...
I only went What? every other paragraph and that's really everything I can say to that...

Imma read the sequels now...

:rainbowderp:

Odd. I have this as a thumbs down, but it's not bad, and I have no recollection of ever reading this before. Has this been edited since it was first posted?

7407377 I don't think so? I don't usually edit stories after posting them.

There’s also the fate-weaving enchantment Celestia put over the whole nation of Equestria that keeps ponies from actually dying from anything other than their pre-destined end, but I didn’t want to get into that because it’s not widely known. I only knew about it because of the ridiculous circumstances that kept me from being killed after Cadance tricked me and the other bridesmaids into jumping off a hundred-foot cliff. Besides, being eaten by dragons as a lesson to Fluttershy about being a coward might actually be Zecora’s destiny. It’s a bit callous, but sometimes ponies really do only exist to be an object lesson for others.

THIS. This is such a good paragraph. Don't apologize for the show's logic, just take it at face value! :rainbowlaugh: I'm quite enjoying reading about a Lyra who's casually dropping mindfucks all day.

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