all i have to say is...

the story is good

not in the grammar and spelling department though

it is a pree good idea

however, the grammar is bad, and the punctuation is pree bad as well

i would run it through a proofreader first before posting if i were you

one that is good in the English department

like really good

Hey the next chapters will be longer than the others so enjoy

Hey, If youread this it would be much appreciated if you coment and/or like/dislike the story so I can help fix my other stories

Thanx and keep readin'

Put some DisLestia up in this story bro. Discord x Celestia fan here. But yea pretty good but try making the stories a bit longer or combining two chapters into one. Just my opinion.

>>10558651055865. Thanx. For commenting by the way, and i couldnt put dilestia in there. It didnt fit tthe story line well, but anyhoof.  I thought about doing that, but i didnt no where to combine the chapters and. I thoughtt about adding more, but never got around to it... rhanx for the advice..

Awwww plz

>>10589811058981 ha, by the way, cool profile photo

Thanks yours is awesome as well.

Thanks yours is awesome as well.

>>10734991073499 thanx, maybe you could join ma group if you want