With Aries, Sub Zero, Digger, Black, Swift Wing and Master Neutral separated it is up to each pony to find what they are truly missing to come together and fight the slowly invading evil in which could destroy Equestria as they know it. Will these strangers come together and find the one thing they never thought they would need or will the plan fall apart and would Equestria fall to it's knees?
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Great so far
Looking forward to chapter 2
Y NO EARTH PONIES
4919625 I'm not actually sure,there just isn't any in the group. Well I have one but I used Aries instead.
GREAT OPENER, CANT WAIT TO SEE WHATS IN STORE~!
4920500 Thank you ^-^
4919863
THE RACES IN YOUR GROUP IS NOT BALANCED. HNNNNNNG.
4922456 Ahhh...I know. Well there is one Earth Pony. The thing is the group is real so it was just a little side project for me including my friends I met on youtube.
4922621
Wait there's an earth pony in it? WHO ARE THEY? LET ME BE THEIR FRIEND!
4928276 It may already be obvious but you'll just have to wait
4928283
hi
Well, there were some instance where your sentences could and should have been split into smaller sections, commas inserted, and in one place it should be '...would hold no...' Other than that interesting start.
4954305 Thank you for the pointer.