On a trip to see Apple Bloom and the crusaders, Babs brings two young blank-flanks interested in joining the small club, but one seems to hang back from the excitement.
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Soprano Beat
In case you didn't know, I'm no longer interested in MLP and won't be writing more stories or continuing the ones I started. I'll come online to talk every once in a while, though. :P
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I like it alright so far! Apple Bloom is supportive and gentle to Sky, and even though she gets a little pushy about his social anxiety, she never turns herself into a "bloomin' ass", so to speak. . A lot of people see Apple Bloom as "oh, a child character!" and end up making her extremely hyper and oblivious. She was handled nicely here.
Time to ship Skybloom5766630 And I'm [technically] not even in high school yet!
I understand it being rushed in the beginning. I started writing the story back in August and I was extremely bad at figuring out how to start a story then. I've improved since, but not a whole lot. I'm glad you like my writing style and my characterization of Apple Bloom. Sky is fairly easy to write, for me at least, since he's basically an exaggerated version of my personality before my parents started with the whole divorce thing.
No shipping please! The story wasn't meant to ship!
5766683 Sorry about the joke. My mind just goes there. . .
5766691 It's fine. I ship mostly Teen Titans characters. (Robin with Raven, Beast Boy with Terra, and Kid Flash with Jinx mainly.)
This is really good.
I liked it...
Um....parentheses?
It's still good though...
It's all right.
Mistakes happen ;)
6172783 That's just a typo. I haven't edited this story in a while.