It's been ten years since Apple Bloom left Ponyville. Five since the love of her life left her. After Spike betrayed her, Apple Bloom hoped to never lay eyes on the dragon again. Then a bunch of old bones showed up on her ranch in Appleloosa. Suddenly her former lover was back in her life in a big way - to investigate a decades old crime. Acting as interim marshal Spike has a job to do and this time he isn't walking away. Because now Apple Bloom's life is on the line as the unsuspecting target of a killer who still walks the canyon. Spike will do whatever it takes to keep Apple Bloom close... even if it means risking his own heart for a second chance for both of them.
Ooh, crime drama! And Spike!
fascinating!
i like the prologue, original
write a longer version of the prologue,
thats some good sad fic material
i like it. faved. wanna see more of this.
Wow, so many nice comments! Thank you all! Chapter 2 is almost done, but actually it's probably short enough to be combined with Chapter 1, we'll see!
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Thank you! I'm busy working on Chapter 2 right now, but I'll try to add more action-y stuff like the prequel later. Be prepared for a good swathe of drama before we get there though!
Pretty good
I'm liking the look of this. I've got to say though, it's prologue not prolougue. I almost skipped over this one completely, since I usually avoid things with any mistakes in the title.
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Whoops, didn't even notice! Is there a way to change it or would I need to re-upload it?
466665 You can go back and edit the title itself directly, last I remembered.
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Hehe thanks, I figured it out.
Great chapter. Kind of reminds me of a episode of Walker, Texas Ranger. Eagerly awaiting more.
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Ah, I haven't seen that show in so long, despite Chuck Norris' internet popularity. Maybe I'm subliminally influenced by memories from my youth hehehe.
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quite possibly. hell i still know the entire song. this is still a good read nonetheless.
Uhmm...hi there...Uhmm...can I ask you well...uhmmm....when is the next chapter coming out ??
Wild West romance.
It's that kind of romance that begins as utter hatred and blossoms into true love overnight after a stiff drink at the Appleloosa saloon.
It's also my favorite kind of romance.
Can't wait for the next chapter, my friend. I'm thoroughly enjoying this one.
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Can I ask when's the next chapter will come out ?
476806 Pleas when is an update for this coming out? I have been waiting since April. This was the second fic I ever read so I'm kind of attached to it. Please can we have an ETA.
476806 Please update
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W-what ???
930873 This isn't flimsy fact, this is cold hard SPECULATION!!! He hasn't been seen online since this 476806, and that was just over 3 months ago.
I too... truly wish for an update. Yet I fear for the worst.
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So....safe to say that this is now dead? Crap.
I got to get up and be one of the ones to beg for a update for this great story. I know it has been a while but i wouldn't feel right if i didn't plead to have this story continue. I've ready many over my time on here but this is one of the few that has really caught my eye that i know would become a favorite. If there is anything I can do to give you a hand to keep pumping them out just let me know. This is too good of a start to just let it die.