Scootaloo is an orphan, we all know this, but when her mother starts to give her gifts, things heat up.
Twilight knows who Scootaloo's mother is, but will her actions make the fledgling relationship between a a mother, who is just began extending a hoof, and a daughter, who thinks she's better off without her mother.
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Sooo much ooc going on.
No, we don't know this. It's just fanon. There's no evidence in canon.
4903694 I know Scootaloo being an orphan isn't cannon. I just wrote what I like, and those stories appealed to me.
4903661 what is ooc? If it's head cannon then you're right. Also scootaloo being Fluttershy's daughter isn't my headcannon, I just like that aspect the fandom made for her.
4904655
But your story description makes it sound like you're stating that this is an established fact.
Also, "cannon" and "canon" don't mean the same thing.
P.S. "OOC" stands for "Out of Character".
4905579 fair enough. I guess I did ask for that.
Also cannon canon, same difference. You know what I'm talking about, I know what I'm talking about.
I really liked this story, yes it was pradictable atleast for me who the mother was, and I feel pinkie was a little mean when she punished Twilight for breaking 2 pinkie promises. But the story still made up for it by showing Scoots emotional desend from happy to depressed anger, I just have 1 question why did Fluttershy abandon Scoots if you could answer that please
4932653 actually I can't, not becouse I don't know the answer, but it would be spoiled for the next story I'm planning. The one where I go into fluttershys past and explain Scootaloos origins. I just need a few more details and a bit of time to get started.
Also, I feel like twilight got what she deserved, but that just might be me enjoying touturing ponies a little too much, I don't know.
4940749 ok I understand both you get carried away when you toture ponies it just happens
and cant wait for the story now
Got someone to edit for you or should I drop ya a PM? I noticed a few mistakes.
4953591 I had a few people at one time, but they all disappeared.
4954865 I'll look over it after work then.
4956580 sweet, I can get you the gdoc if you're interested.
Good story right up until you had the part with Pinkie and the baseball bat assaulting Twilight. I'm sorry but I am going to have to down vote on the grounds that even Pinkie can not assault royalty (even a friend) without there being consequences for her actions.
5266148 Cool, do as you wish.
Pansy-ass.
Even translator is broken, not that my brain.
Awful...everything is awful.
Lol this fic is surprisingly funny I mean it all turned out okay in the end but the torture on Twilight
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What the fuck, Pinkie?! I now really dislike a character I didn't really like before. I sounds stupid, but I'm stupid, so it works out.
Good story but you ruined it with the Pinkie thing and how ooc Twilight was.