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    The Box of Blue and Mister Hooves by TechnoPony

    Comedy Adventure

    The Legends abound of that Pony in The Blue Box, known throughout the world as The Doctor or Doctor Whooves. Children's books have been written, plays have been made, all based off these legends.

    If it's true all Legends are based in Truth, where is this fabled Time-Traveler? Where did he dissapear to after his time on this world after being away for so long?

    These questions are answered when a mysterious Blue Box falls out of the sky into the middle of Ponyville, right in front of a straw-blonde gray pegasus.

    That is where our story begins... well, maybe a bit before that.

    Maybe this Doctor isn't the same Doctor as this universe knew, maybe he is.  

    (This may seem a bit confusing, but it'll make sense, hopefully, once it gets going.)

    First Published
    12th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    20th Sep 2012

    Comments ( 7 )

    TechnoPony
    #1 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This may seem a bit confusing, what with the beginning quote (don't have to worry about that, actually, It's gone and you never even knew it was there. XD) and then the Doctor acting weird about being a pony, but it's literally temporal shenanigans.

    I can't say EXACTLY what's going on, but if you are insightful, you'll figure it out.

    (Post 1/2)

    TechnoPony
    #2 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Alright... So... another reason why this may seem a bit confusing is that I started writing it a long time ago, when I was doing a different writing style. I don't really want to go back and change it to the current writing style (because it's actually okay, and not that bad.), because it would take a long time, even longer than I want because I want to get this chapter published and this story submitted so you all can enjoy it.

    So, maybe after a few weeks of being up, I'll change it (most likely not.).

    Anyways, this will most likely be my last post for now...

    Enjoy!

    (Post 2/2)

    TechnoPony
    #3 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Huzzah! I have finished the first chapter!

    How many points (Followers/views) do I recieve?!

    Chainedharmonics
    #4 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 3d ago · · ·
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    It's ok.  Not great, but not bad either.  A bit short though.  You get a like from me

    Dr. Doctor
    #5 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Added to read later!

    TechnoPony
    #6 · Chapter 1 · 35w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1263117

    Short... I just can't seem to please anyone.

    Anyways, thanks for the like. The next chapter should be at least a little better when it comes to quality and style. This chapter was a WIP from the middle of last year, and I wanted to get it out soon, so I didn't redo the opening.

    Anyways, Next chapter should be up in a week or two, depending on time and if I get a pre-reader.

    TechnoPony
    #7 · Chapter 0 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Sorry for the lack of action in this chapter! I have been debating with myself to make this into parts or not, but I decided to do it because I'm going to start working on another story. So, all my stories (including this and the new one) will now be part-time activities for me. Because school has also started. :rainbowlaugh:

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