Good into I can't wait to see what happins.

I did not see that coming.

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

WOW!

>>505643505643

you mean awsome

>>530436530436

Yep

>>531544531544

I knew it

Plz update

First I really like this story can't wait till update. this has to be one of the best fics I've ever read. Keep up the good work bro

First finally the update has arrived just so you know this was the first fic and my my most favorite fic aswell great job

Hmm, intriguing. I must venture forth at once!

Yeah, somethings going to happen.

Huh, well that was a surprise.

Well things just got more interesting.

First

Once again great story

good job

.....I'm confused and happy

Confused because wtf is every ponies problem with blue

Happy becauseupdate is finally here

Good work I give this story 10/10

Ok weird chapter

First and yes finally an update

What do you mean again?

Yes new update

First

.....noob tempts fate...shit happens. the usual....but Its interesting...one question though....Why is the last name not capitalized?

>>753653753653 Oh hey...I wanted to talk to you...I was wondering what you'd be like, considering every story that I go to, you are on.

And yeah...something is going to happen.

I just realized....you haven't described what the main character looks like...The only thing we know so far is that her coat is orange....

>>784906784906 They certainly did...Hmn....The way this character describes orange, makes me think of a light tangerine color not unlike AJ's coat, but darker and slightly more rosy.

...hmn....well...that was more detailed....What is the main characters hair color/s though?

Hmn...Something isn't right...The idea transitions are off kilter, and there isn't quite a believable reaction coming from the mane 6, and you start out with an underdeveloped character, redeveloping skills and memories, without proper reactions to accompany said skills. This doesn't feel right. And while I like the ideas in this story, I think that the writing skills that accompany said Ideas, are not also not developed enough for me to enjoy properly.

I'm apologize if you feel hurt from this critique, but it is my honest opinion.

ISA