I am a writer. I am a story teller. I am a brony.
What if Twilight and Celestia weren't just mentor and student? What if they were something more? Sorry to disappoint you but its not that kind of story so get your mind out of the gutter. What if the life you've know was a lie? What would you do? This is a tale about love, family, and forgiveness, with some slice of life and adventure and eventually one pissed off alicorn.
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Well i think i get golden leaf (it's the golden oaks library XD)
I want to thank you TheFanGuy for reading the story. It is the first long fimfic I've tried. I hope you enjoy the rest of the ride.
Wow, no comments on this! It's amazing, please update soon!!!
When Is trixie coming?
I wasn't going for that but I see where you made the guess. The names are inspired by two of the most tragic and bumbling villains in Shakespeare, is that a better hint. Also, I'm sorry that I didn't see this comment earlier.
i just picked up this story. its not bad. got to say though your story feels a bit rushed. you do not properly describe characters.
5244347 I understand that feeling. I felt it read kind of rushed too, and I'm the author. I was concerned about pacing and didn't want to bog ponies down in to much detail. I'm working on some other pieces and will take you're comments to mind as I hammer them out. Thanks for the read.
Are you posting the next chapter soon?
Great story, glad I followed.
Sorry you lost me when Twilight easily accepted she was Celestia's daughter.
5700114 I understand. But, with the exception of the revelation that she isn't Celestia's daughter, she has in this universe always been Celestia's daughter, therefore is willing to accept it because the only memories she has if of her life as Tia's daughter.
Magic Dual was playing on my TV when I started reading this chapter...