Vinyl Scratch finds herself depending on Octavia when she wakes up hungover and in a bad situation.
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I really like this so far... GET DRUNK AN WRITE S'MORE
This was actually pretty awesome.
Sorry again about before.
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I'm going to hit submit in the morning actually. I think views are better during the daylight hours.
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This story isn't submitted?
More wat.
4897507
Even my most terrible half assed stories have more likes than this.
Sweeeet...five likes.
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Well that's good then!
Hmm, that suggests that Vinyl is used to the zombie apocalypses...
Or maybe she just sees worse things when she's drunk...
Grammer, I like it it's pretty good anyway.
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Could you maybe point out examples so that I can learn what to fix?
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In proper grammar uppercase letters are at the start of a sentence not all over a non existent word.
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That was intentional.
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Is there anything else you think I should change?
Interesting. Would like to see more of this.
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I'll be writing more of it tomorrow. Tonight I am working more on the pizza story
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I like pizza.
4899343 yes
4899413 yes give me time to look into its all
This is cool.
"I was hoping you could tell me that, Vinyl dear."
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I asked a few other individuals. In the case of informal writing, such as this, stylistic instances of improper grammar are ok. A good, if not a little extreme, example would be How Th'irth Wint Rong By Hapless Joey @ Homeskool.GUV by Gregory Maguire, the author best known for writing Wicked. Using stylistic instances of improper grammar in short stories is a way to emphasis a point.
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I'm planning on having Octavia look at Vinyl like she was crazy. it will turn out she just suggested that because of a zombie marathon she watched recently and they will go on for a while thinking of that as a joke. Surely their neighbors have just gone crazy. I also intend to set up the setting a little bit more next chapter, lay out a map of the surrounding area sort of deal
4899798 I just fucking shot my self
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What?
4900060 couldn't help my self I was sent a " Sparta remix of a video of guy killing himself.
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Ok...
4900098 his name is budd Dwyer