By Celestia, eight seasons?!

We might have holographic ponies by then!

Wow, very good. Original as far as I cam tell. I'm waiting for more. Keep up the good work.

this is a awesome fanfic

This has intrigued me Keep up the good work, you've earned a thumbs up

Sounds awesome, I'll fav for now and read it later

Dag, you guys are quick! Thanks for all the thumbs!

This shall be tracked.

Kinda deserves to go onto the top of the site

I hope this 8 seasons thingie willactually happen..... Id rather see 8 seasons of Friendship is Magic over a new MLP series which may go back to the SUPPOSEDLY bad quality of gens 1 to 3.5 (I cant know as I didnt watch those ones)

>>461968461968

This is too much fun! And to think it just kinda fell out of my head today. You guys are the best. I'll be sure to continue it

you all deserve all of my all of it!

>>461975461975 Just keep on writing brony! It's what we do

Interesting.

Only eight seasons? That's it? There is bound to be at least 15 . . . and then a reboot.

Hmmm I will read and track this (because I brok my ankle and I need some fics to occupy me)

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Inb4 Brony international guard reference.

I like the idea of a crusade thing going on, that was a very lucrative time for history in the wold of fiction and whatnot (see: Templars) but the only reason I did not like those times was the stupid amount of people that refused to even lie about their religious nature to survive. Or am I missing the point?

Aherm, idiotic ranting aside I shall read this.

8 seasons must be a thing for writers setting their fics in the future.

>>462003462003

Reaction 15 much?

As for the fic, love it. Or, love the idea of it.

I shall read immediately!

You sir have gotten my attention, I like what I see in this story and can't wait for more! approves

Give me another chapter.

RIGHT NOW

FLURRSHY COMMANDS YOU!!

If thats ok with you that is...

I'm not sure whether to be happy about being able to go to Equestria or to be sad about basically getting banished from Earth by haters.

Eh, I'll go with happy.

>>462096462096 I've been looking for that .gif for a while now. Thank you. As for the story, interesting.

I love it! only the best stories make me shudder, so much is yet to be done and can be done with such a great plot and start to what I Think will be a fabulous story.

I've seen a lot of fics on this site and if this one doesn't make it to the top then we might have a problem. If you need any advice or help just contact any fellow brony.

*modestly sips at a can of root beer*

"The air inside ionized and the distinctive smell of ozone filled the building."

Hurk?!? *spews soda* PPPPPPPPPPPHHTTTTTT!!!

*cough* *cough* OZONE?!? O₃ is a poisonous gas!!

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That all said I LOVE THIS!! Great ideas do come in the spur of the moment! Originality is the best policy!

>Post new story

>Say it's a side project until your other story is done, and will continue if it's popular

>New story has over 5x the amount of likes as your other story in an hour

lawl

I am intrigued by this concept, and shall be watching this.

EDIT: and featured to boot =P

Well, look at that.

I just happened to be glancing down the front page and noticed something mentioning my fic, Shipping and Handling.

To be perfectly fair, I didn't make up the Portal to Equestria thing, everything I used concerning EQD in chapter 10 is pre-existing "Equestria Daily lore" invented by Seth and Cereal.

Here's Cereal Velocity's actual video from "Equestrian Innovation's Portal to Equestria Project".

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lvTRKmjVUWY

Presumably, the portal from that clip got working well enough to send Seth to Equestria before shutting down again.

>>461975461975 So, are they leaving because they are hated, or is there a real life, violent backlash that forces bronies into hiding? Other than being confused by that, great fiction!

So "Conversion Bureau" meets "Stargate" meets the EqD-Staff? Not oooverly original but I like it. [+1 thumb]

Only thing that makes me wonder: If there is a Anti-Brony-Movement, I'd make sure they never ever, ever, ever, ever find the GATE. Some dead-mans-hand device that destroys the ring, burns out the drives that had the program and the space-time coordinates for equestria and then fillsthe sub-basements with cement. Just to be sure, you know.

A "Goodbye and thanks for all the apples" would have been classy as well.

>>461986461986

LOL in the face of Snape, how could I?

>>462003462003

Wow, you hit it on the nose there dude. That is the underlying message I guess, don't let go of what is really important and good. To me, that's what this community is all about.

>>462016462016

yeah, 8 seasons does seem to be kind of a thing...I rolled with it

>>462114462114

I'm with yah. I've thought more about what I wrote, I have to do this sometimes for I write good ideas way faster than I think them, and I would agree that it would be a bittersweet departure. You know you are going to a better place but it sucks to leave everything you know behind.

>>462136462136

Will do.

This is an amazing turn out guys. I didn't think this would get so much attention, seeing as how 'bronies go to equestria' is quite the popular strand to go on. I was half expecting "cliched plot is cliched" but got all of this instead. It gives me this warm glowey feeling inside...I like it

Won't deny the fact that this is by far one of the most interesting works I've read. You're doing some grand work.

Good luck on the story, my friend.

I came expecting a half-baked idea.  Congratulations, it's fully baked.  I expect to see more on my desk this time next week.

>>462181462181

really?! that's cool, I saw it in your fic first, then again I'm new to the herd, been a brony for only 4 weeks now, so there is a lot of fandom lore and jokes that I don't know yet. Thanks for the info, will credit were it's due

>>462205462205

yeah, the facts are muddy, this totally fell out of my head in like three hours so there's bound to be holes in it. There was a violent backlash in which several people were hurt, not killed. I think I will elaborate on that in the next chapter though

>>462174462174

IKR?

>>462226462226

it's funny you mention that, I thought about that too, but then I thought; no there might be stragglers. They would want to get as many bronies to the other side as wanted to go. also, ominous foreshadowing?

>>462265462265 Foreshadowing?... OHGOD! What if an anti-brony group goes into Equestrian to....to....DESTROY IT?

Not sure if trolling or not. I can only assume it is, since it's the only way I can find this humorous.

>>462294462294

Who's trolling? me or somepony else?

Human fanfics are always the best I think! Good work!

That is all.  You have earned it.

>>462163462163

hmmmm, didn't think of that...I think I meant O2? idk, chemistry is not one of my strong suits...must research this...

>>462409462409 O2 Is the regular oxygen molecule, which is what we use in respiration. O3, or ozone, is only toxic in large amounts.

I hope that helped!

>>462409462409

No you are right, lightning does form ozone gas. I believe that he misunderstood your use of the word "filled". Obviously it did not fill the whole room, just the smell of it. Besides, small amount for a short time the ponies will be fine.

>>462409462409

Clearly, neither are the specifics and nuances of the English language. Eh.

Anyways, color me intrigued. If you can up your writing abilities, and keep this going for a long while, consider yourself damned to the tenth circle of hell; that is, my faves list and a review with some criticism.

Good luck~

This is amazing! what if this actually happened in the future?

>>462229462229

I don't think its all that surprising for it to get this much attention.

I think one of the things that let it stand out is the uniqueness of the story.

First you got a massive number of bronies, usually a BiE story has only one brony.

Second you have considered the ramifications of the exodus to it's full extent. It can only get more interesting.

Third BNG was a great one shot. and it brought forth a very attractive idea, what would it be like if a ton of bronies just kinda appeared in equestria one day? These bronies have been ponyfied so there is a difference and honestly I really am lookin forward to this. if you are unconvinced then refer to my previous comment above.

We would've gotten farther than 8 seasons!

Man, screw earth! ive always hated how everyone expects you to be the exact same as them, in Equestria i could be who i really am and not fear haters!

>>462315462315

You, for the content in the story. I'm not sure if I'm supposed to take all the over the top elements seriously or not, because it comes off as a bunch of wangst to me.

>>462520462520

Like they say "Your worst day in Equestria is still better than your best day on Earth"

Hey! Remember to keep a chance to go through this portal for good ol' BronyRanger,  Y'HEAR?

>>462409462409

The bubbles in soda are carbon dioxide, (CO2)

Just to clear that confusion up.

You know that this is a fiction because by the year 2020 everyone on earth will be a Brony/Pegasister making it so no one would try to get rid of Bronyism in the first place, and their will never be a final season of ponies the ponies are far to good for that.

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Asian Father is waiting for update. Do not disappoint, or you get chopstick up ass.

I have the oddest feeling that you’ll be writing more, it might have been the top five spot, have a mustache

>>462547462547

HAHAHAHAHA That's a good one. No, there's no trolling here. Unless, I'm the one getting trolled by all the views...this is just crazy! I never thought anyone would like my writing this much, I mean, sure I've been writing for a while...but honestly I'm not as good as a LOT of the other writers on here. This is actually really humbling. So, in light of all this support I will have to continue this story. I have several Ideas for it and I want to keep it light hearted and fun, maybe with some drama thrown in now and then.

I'm really new to the whole fanfic thing, I've been working on a fantasy epic, of my own making, for almost eight years, and a Scifi satire for a year or two.

Seriously, this has got to be the best community on the whole internet.

Should I read this,..?

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Man... always wanted to go to Equestria,  i feel bad for the bronies who couldnt get there though If there is a transdimensional portal that apparently leads to Equestria, i shall courageously yell SAAXXTOOOONN.... HAAAAAAAAAALEEEEEEEEEE!!!! and charge through the portal. Anypony else have this feeling (Leeroy Jenkins or Hale is fine

>>462803462803

I'm honestly leaning towards you trolling by this point, if your over eagerness is any indication.

ALMOST AT TOP!

It was totally the Narnia reference that did it. That was genious.

>>462485462485>>462487462487

Thank you, I looked it up and yes, we are right. Ozone can indeed be deadly but it's gotta have a pretty high concentration. The smell is very distinctive and doesn't require a high concentration for it to be noticed.

>>462493462493

Looking forward to the critique! I love critiques, as long as they are constructive (obviously) I don't mind if someone doesn't like something I do, on the inverse, I appreciate it when people take the time to say why they like something. This whole experience is a big boost to my confidence. More confidence means faster writing and better stories. And that translates to more fun for everyone involved.

My god I came back to check on the thumbs and this is great.

The concept of this story pleases me

I noticed a few grammar errors, but none that are large enough to point out. we aren't professionals here or anything! can wait to see where this goes!

Have some Spike swag >

yay

Haven't read this yet, (added to read later), but technically it is a human in Equestria story. While I don't like the designation because it seems misleading to me, it seems the fandom has decided that if a human is turned into a pony and brought to Equestria it is indeed a human in Equestria story.

But really, you don't need the tag, the story is pretty clear.

>>462860462860

Please, for the love of God, Montresor.... No more "confidence" bullshit. Confidence is all well and good, but sacrificing story quality and editing for the sake of speed is an inexcuseable offense, in my opinion. Plus, confidence does not necessarily indicate ability. Just breath deep, and take it slow, kiddo.

Please, don't let all the attention go to your head. Just because you've gained a large amount of attention does not mean that you are 20% cooler than the rest of your brethren. I do like the concept behind this story, but that does not mean your execution is as great as it can be.

I know I sound like a jackass, and I don't care, but I'd prefer it if you'd keep what I've said in mind. Humility is a virtue, and all that.

Anyways, keep on writing~

>>462995462995

Your concern makes me smile sir. I'll keep that in mind

Also, I found a few typos. I am now starting on the second chapter, because the Idea has been swimming around in my head for a couple hours now, time to put it on paper. Cyall later!

I track if only to have a fic that may actually update damnit I got like 57 fics not a single update thats not read

FUCK you haters

>>462810462810 love that movie

>>463038463038

*shrugs* Partially I'm just doing my job, but I hate to see new writers get their egos stroked too much. Anyway, I think that if you can stay original, not rush things, and find yourself a decent proofreader or two, you'll do quite well for yourself here.

Oh, and if your ego gets too inflated, give me a call. I love hearing the "pbblblblbllblblblbllblblt" sound that comes from a popped ego. XD

Good luck on Chapter Two~

On an unrelated note, I find that the song "Drowning" by Hootie and the Blowfish sum up society's behaviour in this fic. If you don't know the song then look it up.

Oh my. I'm sensing that something will definitely go wrong. You don't just leave behind a nice portal like that. Someone's bound to find that and then all Hell will break loose. (Literally or figuratively, your pick.) I'm looking forward to this. Knowing how humans work, they're bound to screw this up somehow. I just hope the universe doesn't collapse with it.

more

ONLY 8 seasons? But in any case, the real message...

*clears throat*

IN THE NAME OF HIS UNHOLINESS, CTHULHU...

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...THIS SHALL CONTINUE, OR THY PLANET SHALL BE DEVOURED. CTHULHU FHTAGN.

Reading because STARGATE!

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I have some problems with your tense changes. For example:

"it was the pony site left on the net. It isn't active anymore"

Also, I think you missed the word "only" there

>>462757462757

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you can have all my moustaches!

>>461986461986 try end of all ponies. i took me AGES to read. its a good.... 3000 pages? on a real book page sort.

>>463132463132

Fix'd! Thank you for your eagle eyes.

>>463124463124

That is an awesome Cthulhu pic btw

Look who made it to the top :D

:|

MOAR.

In honor of their royal majesties the Princesses of the Sun and Moon Celestia and Luna, it gives me great honor to present to you a Lunarian Golden thumbs up. Good job, and we look forward to seeing more.

The beginning is a bit corny, but it's an interesting premise, I'll keep an eye on it.

>>461891461891 I think that was started as a hopeful guess with My Little Dashie. *crosses hooves*

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>>461891461891 Don't. You. EVER. Say. Bad. Things. Like. That. EVER.

This was incredible! Great work!

Sooooooooo...

Where's the portal located?

Ya know, specific country, state, county, and what was the cypher?

.........

I WANT TO GO TO EQUESTRIA!!!!

*runs into a wall, breaking a hole*

LEEEROOOOYY... WWWINGKINNNSSSSS

>>463377463377 Author said it, not me.

This Thread is now being monitored by MTF-Echo 1

There will be no 4th wall breaches here.

>>463398463398 OH! You're not DOUBTING an eight season! It's depressing because it didn't get more! I totally didn't catch that!!

BY THE HOLY MIGHT OF PONY CHUCK NORRIS, YOU SHALL CONTINUE THIS FINE STORY, OR RECEIVE THE SADDEST FACE EVAH!!!

Hmm...

*strokes non-existent-but-hopefully-soon-beard*

I'll be keeping an eye on this.  Reminds me a bit of the Conversion Bureau.

This fic has gotten me wondering,, what will happen once FIM dies out.

I know once it does, the bronyness will still continue for a year or two, but eventually we will all come to the realization  that we have lost something great, and we cant get it back.

Can you tell me where to go... Please???

>>463452463452

We move on, or we immortalize it; such the fate of certain 80s franchises like The A-Team or Knight Rider.

>>463501463501 But what would we move on too,  we couldn't just abandon our fellow bronies. Even if we did immortalize it, eventually we will gradually forget about it, and it would die out like all other things have in this world.

>>463550463550

Ooh, your depressing. How long do you think it will take if we still celebrate Star Wars 35 years later?

>>463569463569  yes, yes I am... But you do have such a good point there, even though the brony community is probably much smaller than the Star Wars community,although I do think that it would take a lot for our  bright torch to burn out.

Aww buck, I hear about this now?!  I was writing something like this!  It was outlined, character blocked, for once I was writing a story bible!

I'll write it anyways, I'd like to see how they compare.

P.S. I will be very scared if they line up too well.

this pleases Krushnazag mortal. Continue....... also, is this a hint?