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slightlyshade


Hugger of ponies and writer of words.

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An older Rainbow Dash recalls her short lived attempts at writing, her experiences with a most vexing writing group, and how she dealt with a curiously obsessive Twilight Sparkle: the pony that signed her up for the writing class in the first place.

In a story on stories, and the trials that lie behind writing them, Rainbow reflects on her larger struggle of creativity and purpose, and in the process gets to contend with the art, if it can be called such, of critique.

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what? I don't get the end!

4883356 Me neither...

Is it an extract of the novel? Is it just Scoots reading a letter from Dash? What?

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The story, minus the last three paragraphs, is a letter that she just read.

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As far as I can tell, the entire thing is a letter to Scootaloo that she is reading, yes.

This story... is actually pretty damn good!

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Well, I'm certainly glad you think so. Any 'it doesn't suck' award is a great compliment to me. :D

Thanks!

The principal had a skeleton in his closet: you! Except you're not a skeleton. You're a homosexual zombie. Dragon." He walked away, not seeing the undead acid tears welling up inside the empty, burning eyes of his once-father as the summer sun beat down on the town square; the market square of Little Dragon Village. The end.'

Delightful. You sure he wasn't a pirate as well?

'There are no "just" stories, especially not on a moral level,' quipped the stocky mare with the glasses. I knew she was going to try to be clever the moment I first laid eyes on her.

Every story is some idea given expression so they wouldn't wither away. The stories are almost like children :twilightsmile:

When I had first started writing it was just a cool new thing to try. It's exciting to try new things and it just makes you feel awesome inside when you feel yourself succeed at something you didn't know you could do. But then, especially after seeing Twilight's reaction to my first few pieces of Daring Do fanfiction, I've gotten to a troublesome crossroads: I could recognise good writing; great writing, but I couldn't create it.

I think this here and onward is a very personal, emotional stuff.

She slowly pressed her hoof on my chest and again sought my eyes. 'Please don't give up, Rainbow,' she said, her voice close to breaking.

You too don't give up, dear writer. And dear reader, if it is applicable.

'The punctuation was sporadic and inconsistent,' added skeleton-guy, not even looking up.

'You know what?' I said quite suddenly, 'I'm sick of this!'

I've seen a few artists who are like that :twilightsmile:


A very raw story which is directly communes what's it about: a love for creating. I've enjoyed it immensely

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