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Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem

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Trixie makes a sudden realization in the middle of a romantic evening.


UPDATE
So, uh, turns out somepony did a reading of this. Much ultimate surprise! Very shock!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vlDmKht0X_0
Thank you so much Winged. T. Spears

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I like it!

So sweet and emotional. These are my heartstrings, and you tug at them incessantly.

Trixie's life is not one where happiness and fortune just come of its own. She's struggled for her success, and she's well aware that all of it can be taken from her in one fell swoop, as has happened to her before. So yes, she would be concerned when things are a little too nice, because the other shoe might be about to drop. Perhaps even wondering if she deserves this happiness that an ordinary pony would take for granted.

A lovely read. Now if you'll pardon me, I've got some sand in my eye... need to get it out...

:rainbowkiss: kissy kissy whenever somebody makes a romance story I take the opportunity and challenge to read it all again Kissy Kissy :rainbowkiss::trollestia:

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What he said. :pinkiehappy: Poor little ponies. So fragile. :fluttercry:

Yeeeesh :rainbowkiss:

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Kissy kissy? I'm afraid I don't quite understand?

4876588 you'll never understand:pinkiecrazy:

4876588 you'll never understand you'll never understand you'll never understand you'll never understand you'll never understand you'll never understand :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Short and very sweet. Nice work. :twilightsmile:

you're not the only one with insomnia. bed-time is a thing i dread. it's maddening not knowing if you'll actually be able to get some sleep or not.

feels all around. great story:heart:

4911830 We should have, like, a club for insomniac writers. It might give me something better to do at 2AM than weave my halloween costume together by the light of Youtube when none of the (100+) stories I follow have updated.

What can I say other than that was just adorable!

This is the fourth story of yours I've read, and it's the fourth story I love!

As always it's simply beautiful. There are no other words, just beautiful. You are an artist with words.

Nicely done. :twilightsmile:

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...Dat's adorable.

Beautiful story. Where'd you get the adorable fanart?

6255723 It's 0r0s He's a furry artist

I read this quite a while back and just re-read it now....it is just as beautiful now as it was then! Thank you, dear Lady. This was a very sweet story.

And shame on me for not saying so earlier. You are terrific!

Very sweet story. I really liked this one.

I've been reading through your Twixie stories (don't know if you have other ones) and I've found that (what I've read) they were all written suuuuper early in the morning. Do you just never try to fix your sleep schedule?

Randomness aside, another beautiful story. Well made and concise, the Rarity way. Good job mate.

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I WISH I could fix it.

I have a series of Twixie Fiction that starts with BloodBoil and kinda jumps around to random cutesy stuff

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Damn, that was cute. :D

Awwww sweet and cute, I had a heart attack.
Ahhhhhhhhhh

Oh, that was very cute!:twilightsmile:

Maybe Trixie has deja vu? :trixieshiftright: In some universes, Trixie is dying of cold, somewhere she is a beggar magician. Maybe she could have stayed at the stone quarry. Or she could just forget Ponyville and wander around Equestria further.

Ironically, she became Starlight's friend, the one who was playing with timelines( not in this fanfiction, but in the series).

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