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Marshal Twilight


A smut-peddling armchair general with a love for writing and ponies.

Comments ( 52 )

You... I... I thought that the TrenderMac ship was a joke... :twilightoops:

*le clicks*

4866800

It was....

He made it real :ajsmug:

Senpai Marshall is breaking new ground.

I uh... Uh... Well, that was... Interesting...

Yessss, first TrenderMac fic! With a side of Applejack.

Okay? I just read this. Well written. :moustache:

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Ah, you thought the galleon a legend, Princess?

That's the thing about legends. On some level... theey be true.

Hoist the sails, me hearties, we're leavin' port to plunder some fine booty indeed! :rainbowdetermined2:

Haaaauuueeehhhhhhhhhwwwwhaaaaaaaa for the record, did not rate

4867690

Thank you for mirroring my reaction.

Cryssy #11 · Aug 18th, 2014 · · 1 ·

The Achevement part:rainbowlaugh: I nearly fell off the couch

I wonder though...

Has anyone made a clopfic where Big Mac actually has a tiny dick, as a cruel twist of irony?
:pinkiegasp:

... And I thought the pun would make the ship Mac'n'Cheese appear first... Anyway, well written and original pairing.... Hm... Trio? Well done

4866813

That's my gimmick and I'm sticking to it.

4866913

That's a way of putting it.

4866953

I had to resist the urge to dance around yelling "FIRST!"


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4867292

Thanks!

4868019

Yeah... That was a last-second inspiration. :twilightblush:

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Probably. Couldn't point you to one though, unfortunately.

4868283 I think there was one where the issues of human-to-cartoon-pony scaling and possible positions made it small by human standard, to the disappointment of the girl.

Another triumph of a clopfic! I'd start following you, if I wasn't already.

Hahaaa! I really really really enjoyed this. I don't think I've ever read a Trenderhoof story before, but I loved it! :heart:

I agree with applejack I did not see that coming either. Except I totally figured that would happen.I know this, I have seen this... I have done this... Good story all the same completely caught my interest.

Darker Shadows will be watching:trixieshiftright:

MORE GAY CLOP FICS, DAMMIT!

There are never enough. It makes for sad kitty.

-Chessie

I laughed at the end upon seeing that achievement.

You know the one thing I didn't like about Trendy in the show? He was all ... square-ish. :twilightoops:

Anyway, still pretty good stuff.

This is something I'd like to do in RL ^_^ Was great to fantasize about it.

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Tell me about it. Seems to be some sort of chronic disease that only affects Season 4 stallions...

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Well then, glad to be of service.

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Thank you, good sir. :moustache:

4875964 that's the weird thing, even flim and flam have "square pony disease" back from season 2! :applejackconfused:

At any rate, i'm glad i'm not the only one who noticed. :twilightblush:

I want to know Rarity's reaction when she learns that Trenderhoof is gay!!!

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Bisexual, he's still attracted to both, he just wants Big Mac right now.

Wha da .....fuck....

:derpyderp1: Really thought that Mac n Cheese would appear first! Great story, btw. I approve. :pinkiehappy:

4879884 chik-chik

That better not be an offence to this nice mans story!






jk

4883584 man, i don't mean dislike this story, it like better story.
i don't know he like stallion.

4883911 in case you didn't notice the little dot in the corner

that got messier than i expected. and i'm not talking about the story. well done Marshall Twilight. (and yes i came here from EQAD)

more please more stallions more cocks more everything and more clop!

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achievement relocked. Used pun in achievement xD umad?

You know, for a clopfic that features a S4 character I don't care for, and the trope of Mac being a one-line joke... This was still pretty enjoyable. I like how you kept Mac being masculine, but also affectionate and considerate. I don't really have anything bad to say about this story.

One thing though:
>trenderhoof eating out applejack
>with his tongue
>that just caught macs cum
Sure hope aj is on the pill!

You like Big Mac, don't you, Trenderhoof?

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

This reminds me of a dude at my school who says he likes me (I'm a male and so is he, but I'm not gay or bisexual ) (at least I think I'm not bisexual) but he dose it in a bit in a way like if he was joking but he has been keeping this up for the past couple weeks and this afternoon he asked me for a hug in front of other people o.o I don't know if he is joking or he is being serious. Should I ask him if he is joking or not and if he's not should I just tell him that I am not intrsted in him? I don't want to hurt his feelings but I also don't want him to get the wrong idea.

This is well-written clop. There's not much of a plot (okay, there's one hell of a 'plot') story but that's quite alright.

I approve of Trendermac as a ship. He annoyed me some in the show but the thought of a big ol' farm stallion plowing a hipster pony is, well, just UNF (with a capital U). And while I'm pretty solidly a colt cuddler, having AJ involved didn't really detract from anything.

I'd like to picture this story continuing on for Trenderhoof to find that Big Mac is secretly an intelligent, quiet philosopher (hinted at vaguely in Pinkie Apple Pie). And that Trenderhoof gets his plot plowed on every square acre of Sweet Apple Acres, of course. ;)

help!!! O_O this fic is so hit is melting my eyes!! >////////<!

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You should confront him. Leading him on may just make things worse. And if he was joking tell him some guy on the Internet told you to do this.

(Insert that ending picture here)
What a HUGE surprise:trollestia::trollestia:

The achievement part was awesome I almost fell out of my bed :rainbowlaugh:

The part at the end lol

....
*scrolls up to the top*
*clicks the read it later icon*
*clicks the favorites icon*
*clicks the others icon*
*clicks 10/10 read it again bookshelf*
......well.....that was a BIG surprise

Imagine her surprise when it turns out that Trenderhoof actually likes stallions

Kinda ruining the surprise... :/

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