Mimic, a special changeling that has successfully escaped from the mind-control his queen had over him, has realised that the changeling race is doomed unless peace is made with the ponies. But he is all alone, no other changelings support him, so he has to make this journey alone.
Inspired by The Changing Heart
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thats all?
dont get me wrong, i like the history, even if it is a bit of cliche now a days, but it seems way too rushed, and uneventfull, for a history about a changeling looking to build bridges, thats my opinion.
4867573 There's more of the story that I'm working. Note the "Incomplete" tag.
Some more story and character development will come shortly, possibly. I try to avoid cliches, personally.
The first chapter was a sort of time challenge I set myself. Not going to do it again. Sorry for rushing it. I probably will go into depth soon enough.
good for a first chapter/prologue. and glad you are going to make the attempt of avoiding too many cliches
cause we all know there are bumps in every road. just pray for the evil curse that is writers block stays away
keep up the good work!