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Comet Burst


The man without a plan.

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*UC: 0096*

This was supposed to be an era of peace and prosperity, not one of war. Ponies of the United Century were to never know the horrors of what their ancestors endured to create this world for them. Now they stand at the brink, staring into the endless abyss with their hoof outstretched, ready to take the plunge.

But I am close. The answer to the riddle of the UC is within my grasp.

And it all starts with you.

My greatest creation: the Gundam.


Rated Teen for language.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 24 )

so, which Gundam series r u basing this off of?

Comment posted by KMCA deleted Sep 20th, 2014

5029264 gundam unicorn silly :twilightblush:

For a fanfiction claiming to be a crossover with Gundam, there's not much in common with actual Gundam aside from a few terms like "Gundam" and "Newtype" and "Zaku".

Where's my 18-meter tall machines of destruction piloted by a surly teen or someone looking to reform the world? Where's the space magic? Where's the blonde rival who may or may not be wearing a mask?

All I see right now is, like, cyborg bioweapons or something? There seems to be quite a gap between "mobile suits" and "ponies with cybernetics shooting lasers at each other".

5032415 what, we cant have ponies with frickin laser beams attached to their heads? in any event, this seems to be a state much like what was seen in SD Gundam Force, where the MS units were not Mobile Suits at all, rather man sized robots

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SD Gundam Force

Like I said, nothing like actual Gundam.

5069146 from everything ive read on the subject, yes, SD Gundam Force counts...

Ohhh a pony made living 'Gundam' I want to read more of this. Keep up the good work!. :twilightsmile:

5095492 im afraid so, Gundam Force was made by Sunrise Studios, the same animation company that produced the other Gundam lines. its set in what could be termed an AU to the UC timeline, only instead of human Newtypes piloting Gundams, the robotic Gundam Force themselves r the Newtypes. so yes, im afraid they count...my logic cannot be countered

5096280 unfortunately, the logic holds, though ur opinin has been noted...and discarded as being irrelevant...Unicorn? do as u will with this one...

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Baby shows for babies don't count. Even Gundam AGE and Gundam SEED have more to do with Gundam than SD Force.

Hmm...it's not bad. But I'll have to read more chapter (if there any more coming out) in order to give my full honest opinion about this crossover fanfic. Other then that, you're doing an good job and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. :twilightsheepish:

Oh, and one more thing...just for the hell of it, this story needs some awesome gundam ost! :pinkiehappy::yay:

I am looking forward on reading more of this fic. I was wandering if there was going to have parallel Celestia = Federation vs Luna = zeon or is it completely deferent?

..... I swear this better not end up being just another fan fic that praises Zeon. Too much of that going around.

Is it foolish to hope for more?

You could have done it to where the gundams and their pilots from Gundam Unicorn and Gundam Narrative (unicorn, banshee, and phenex) activate ntd at the same time near each other and get sent to Equestria with no way back.

I like this story please come back to it sometime

Interesting introduction to the story. Definitely makes me want to continue reading.

Whoa.... Just.... Whoa. This is indeed an awesome story! Keep it up!

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