• Member Since 19th Oct, 2011
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Theorangefox


We grow 'em big!

Comments ( 9 )

Can't wait 'til the next story you come up with!

So many ponies... Octavia, Vinyl, Coco... Ah, Coco... would like to see somepony give her plot a "Pommel"ing... :raritywink:

lelz, pinkie ponuts.

Seems there is still some editor/pre-reader notes on the end there, may wanna fix that...
Anyway, good story, great premise, but maybe could do with having their relationship established more firmly in the first part.
Other than those points, i'd rate this a solid 7/10

*looks at the end*

... How the hell did THOSE stay there? 0_o

it's like you have been in the live streams of Knifeh

4944749 lets just say that there will be a song with many colabs about pony doughnuts

Hey, i only wanted to kill myself a whole fucking lot during this dear god.

= me

After reading this, I realized it was more than just a well-detailed sex story. It was a tale of love and passionate love-making shared between two ponies who have hot, intimate feelings for one another. It also made me painfully erect, filling me with a raging desire for Pinkie Pie and her delicious rear! I actually forgot to eat or drink while reading this and finished the story while licking my lips, horny as fuck! It was simply the best fanfic I've read in a long, long time! 10/10! 100/10 stars! I freaking loved it!

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