An ancient Darkness is rising, Three fillies gain mysterious weapons, and Equestria will not be the same after the last battle has been fought.
This is a colab between Blazer 300 and me
No offense, but your punctuation SUCKS. I can be your editor. I mean, it's REALLY bugging me. Anyway, really good story. I HAVE SENSED SHENANNIGANS
I thought I had perfect punctuation, oh, if you want to you can correct our grammar as well
that is if you want to and if you do I'll have to PM you the Gdocs link
No yelling please.
>>457404457404 there won't be yelling (at least from me)
and I'll PM you the link now
Equis... now where have I heard that before?
>>457415457415 hope to see you there!
>>457415457415 Blazer promised no yelling from him
Blarg? Red vs Blue refference?
here, have a cookie
Just so you know: the dark figure here is Itachi Uchiha.
It was supposed to spell "Luminaire" damn. Anyways we're not only throwing Kingdom Hearts references, We're having Chrono Trigger references (Hence the Luminaire attack) so if you like ponies, Kingdom Hearts and Chrono Trigger you MUST read this fic.
“Then it’s settled, you will be Herbtail, you will be Frostfall, you will be Herbtail, you will be Fleetrain and you will be Moonfire, you guys like it?”
The scene in front of the ponies changed to a large, technologically advanced room room with two beings that looked like Marcus.
“As I was saying, who are you? and what are you doing here?”
“The-They are monsters! they killed everypony!”
1. You repeated that one line.
2. Repeated again. (vroom vroom!)
3. Extra Question mark (?).
4. Forgot to capitalise the T.
That is all for now, other nazis may join in and find more mistakes... who knows?
didn't see those in the doc
they're there because of Parasprites are in my computer!
EDIT: taken care of
>>486852486852 I am sated. Beware for I still lurk... like a Pinkie...
>>486881486881 I'm kind of a Grammar Nazi myself and am hurt that those escaped my vigilance, but rest assured, they will be harder to find in the chapters to come
This looks promising indeed. But from the art, I can imagine but to think Kingdom Hearts.
>>512073512073 there are Keyblades in here
so... yeah, it's a crossover for KH
Yesh me likes...