While Apple Bloom works on her potions with Zecora, Twilight Sparkle drops by. The perfect afternoon! The potion dream team, and Zecora even starts telling stories. But with her, a story is never just a story.
Zecora is called to her homeland with Applejack and Applebloom. The zebra isn't happy to be there and the apple siblings are trying to figure why she's unhappy and why they're there.
4838570 I know what to do, but I still get the occasional random idea to write things so I like to do them while I'm thinking about it. But that will probably be next to get finished before I go onto something else.
Well, this is a very sweet story. Two close friends and how it all started. I am glad that you you took the time to write this story, thank you and Good luck.
Also, thank you so much for posting this story. At this point, I'm having trouble with rhymes because Zecora is involved in my story and I wanted to try her out a bit. (Anyone that's not Applejack or her family or Spike are hard for me.) And there's so many rules about how to write Pinkie.
This is the first time I've read a Zecora and Applebloom relationship piece. I loved it! I can't imagine writing an entire story in rhyme, but you pulled it off fabulously. It was a treat to read. Keep on writing, you're doing a great job!
4884875 Most likely because that is the way they are accustomed to speaking. This would make no sense whatsoever if it were written without rhyme and still labeled as Zecora.
4884875 I think Applejack would think in her accent but not write. Zecora would, as it's a manner of speaking. An accent is a matter of voice getting confused from myself, but i think it makes sense?
Any story of closeness between the two is wonderful.
It's not every day that we get to see a fic about these two.
My brain wants to explode it's that rhyme doe so much rhyming and non rhyming sorry gota go my heads gona explode I smell smoke that no joke
This. It's...it's just so beautiful!
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Glad you liked it.
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Nap
Still haven't figurer out what to do with Apple Family Adventures: A big Surprise?
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I know what to do, but I still get the occasional random idea to write things so I like to do them while I'm thinking about it. But that will probably be next to get finished before I go onto something else.
Well, this is a very sweet story.
Two close friends and how it all started.
I am glad that you you took the time to write this story, thank you and Good luck.
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Okey!
Also, thank you so much for posting this story. At this point, I'm having trouble with rhymes because Zecora is involved in my story and I wanted to try her out a bit. (Anyone that's not Applejack or her family or Spike are hard for me.) And there's so many rules about how to write Pinkie.
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The fact that's there are even rules for Pinkie who has no rules seems silly lol
This is the first time I've read a Zecora and Applebloom relationship piece. I loved it! I can't imagine writing an entire story in rhyme, but you pulled it off fabulously. It was a treat to read. Keep on writing, you're doing a great job!
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Thanks very much, glad you enjoyed it.
Zecora wouldn't write in rhyme, nor would she think that way.
Do you think Applejack thinks and writes with a hick accent?
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Most likely because that is the way they are accustomed to speaking. This would make no sense whatsoever if it were written without rhyme and still labeled as Zecora.
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Easy enough way around that; have her telling the story to someone else.
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True, but this is something I doubt she would exactly tell someone, so thats why its written in a way as if she were.
May I do a dramatic reading of this sometime in the future?
4884875 I think Applejack would think in her accent but not write. Zecora would, as it's a manner of speaking. An accent is a matter of voice
getting confused from myself, but i think it makes sense?
Cuuuuuuuuute