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HellRyden

Joined March 2012
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Well, I'm one of the few bronies that hail from Singapore. Still, I'm here to put my writing skills to the test, so leave feedback if you  enjoyed one of my stories! Peace out! ^^

Stories (4)

  • The Elements of Gaming
    The Mane 6 get mailed an Xbox 360 from Princess Celestia for beta testing. Shenanigans ensue.

    120,551 words · 9,417 views · 599 likes · 21 dislikes
  • The Order of Koaxia
    Six incredibly powerful beings arrive in Equestria, heralding an age of doom yet to arrive.
    138,772 words · 2,271 views · 163 likes · 9 dislikes
  • Equestrian Joe
    A man, trapped in Equestria by accident, searches for a way home, but soon finds himself caught up in a shadowy plot more dire than he could possibly imagine.
    89,047 words · 1,246 views · 144 likes · 12 dislikes
  • Call of Cutie: Blank Ops
    A ponification of CoD: BO - let the warfare commence.
    4,785 words · 744 views · 17 likes · 18 dislikes

Blog Posts (56)


On behalf of the Canterlot University of Electrical Engineering, Princess Celestia sends her star pupil a mysterious contraption she wants her to take for "beta testing".

A mysterious, new invention dubbed the "Xbox 360".

Shenanigans and hilarity will ensue.

Link to TVTropes page: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/TheElementsOfGaming

Link to story on EqD: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/story-elements-of-gaming.html

First Published
15th Apr 2012
Last Modified
13th Dec 2013

Comments ( 410 )

#1 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

Didn't expect to find this series here, one more to add to my favorites list.

#2 · Chapter 2 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

What about Warhammer 40,000, Fallout 3 and New Vegas, Morrowind, Oblivion, Skyrim, Brutal Legends, and Brothers in Arms: Hell's Highway.

#3 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

Its here I stopped at gears but

#4 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

Why no Nintendo games?

#5 · Chapter 4 · 105w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

Twilight's perfect game. :twilightsmile:

#6 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

Yes! :pinkiehappy:

#7 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

One of the classics, now in easily accessible form. Awesome

BR
#8 · Chapter 1 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

:yay:

#9 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

halo: reach:yay:

Ezn
#10 · Chapter 2 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

I remember reading some of this ages ago. I also remember enjoying it, but you could use a proofreading pass.

Biggest issue I can see is dialogue punctuation.

“Reaaaaaaaaal smooth, Spike.” drawled Twilight, her voice literally oozing with sarcasm at every single word.

That full stop after "Spike" should be a comma.

“Geahs of War?” Said Applejack

"Said" should be "said".

Remember: if you follow dialogue with some variation of "said Character", then they're both part of the same sentence, so the dialogue should never end on a full stop (but you can use a question mark or exclamation mark; just don't capitalise "said").

I wrote a whole bunch about this here.

Think I'll read the rest of this story now. It's a fun idea. Thanks for writing it.

#11 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

Hey, I read the Halo Reach one a while ago, but I didn't know this was a series. This is awesome and its got my favorite. It was a really great read and I'm excited to read more. Is this the original author?

#12 · Chapter 1 · 105w, 4d ago · · 1 ·

Dame it i want spike to have been the bad ass halo reach player. Anyways still bad ass story you got. I expect great things young one. :moustache:

#13 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

what about call of duty: black ops zomies?

#14 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

>>456189

Nintendo only have ther games on ther own stations. Not other companies.

#15 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

OMG, IS HERE!!!

I love this story!! To my favorites!!

#16 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

YES,BUCKING YES!

#17 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

>>456328

I'm aware of that. But they should be explored at some point.

#18 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

*Looks at chapters*

I don't recognise any of this. The only one I have played here is Tetris.

#19 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

Fun story. Glad it's here. Especially liked the Rock Band chapter.

#20 · Chapter 2 · 105w, 4d ago · · 1 ·

this was epic!!!

on a unrelated not, cup cakes anypony?:pinkiecrazy:

#21 · Chapter 1 · 105w, 4d ago · 3 · ·

...Fluttershy? Were you that Inheritor that whooped my ass yesterday?

:yay:

#22 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

Ahaha, It's here! :pinkiehappy: :heart:

#23 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

*FAVS*

Good show sir, good show.

#24 · Chapter 4 · 105w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

t..the link.... and that player... mind = blown

#25 · Chapter 5 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

BEST.

CHAPTER.

YET.

This is THE best book I've ever read.

PERIOD.

#26 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

Man i remember reading this along time ago, cool to see it up here.

#27 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

This is beyond awesome. Being an avid gamer and having played at least over half of the games mentioned, I say you did a great job with conveying the Mane 6's reactions. Also :pinkiecrazy: and :flutterrage: are best ponies.

#28 · Chapter 2 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

dude, make another halo, except that they face the flood.

by the way...CUPCAKES!!!:pinkiecrazy:

#29 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

EMBRACE THE DARKNESS FLUTTERSHY :flutterrage:

#30 · Chapter 5 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

so......AAWWWSOOOOMEEEE!:rainbowkiss:

#31 · Chapter 5 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

so......AAWWWSOOOOMEEEE!:rainbowkiss:

#32 · Chapter 5 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

so......AAWWWSOOOOMEEEE!:rainbowkiss:

#33 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

Half-Life 2:pinkiehappy: Please?:ajsmug:

#34 · Chapter 3 · 105w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

Tiberium wars was such a good addition to the C&C series...  I really enjoyed that game.  :twilightsmile:  

Though it's a shame Tiberium Twilight had to go and ruin the whole thing...:twilightangry2:

#35 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

>>456283 Yep, it's the original author here, but one of the writers of the team left due to a heavy workload and schedule, so our production is sort of on hiatus right now. I've recently gotten inspiration for an Asura's Wrath chapter, so let's just hope I'll be able to write it without my co-author's help, heh.

#36 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

>>457972More nintendo games please?:duck:

#37 · Chapter 1 · 105w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

So... the girly-girls play better than the others...

What?

#38 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

I kinda want to see some CoD and Bf3, along with the impossible game. The rage would make it so funny!

#39 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

Skyrim

Minecraft

Amnesia: The Dark Descent

Call of Duty: Modern Warfare 2 (multiplayer)

Left 4 Dead 2

World of Tanks

Portal 2 (multiplayer)

Happywheels

RISK: Factions

GTA: IV

Solitaire

That is all.

#40 · Chapter 5 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

:twilightoops:pinkie pie is just, what the F***, HOW CAN SHE F***ING DO THAT? F***

#41 · Chapter 5 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·
#42 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 4d ago · · ·

>>458090 I would write Nintendo games if I had a Nintendo console haha. Sadly, I don't :(

#43 · Chapter 1 · 105w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

" “Sweet mother o’ mercy...” gawked Applejack, "

LOL Starcraft 2 reference.

#44 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 3d ago · · ·

>>458791

This, minus Solitaire.

JR
#45 · Chapter 2 · 105w, 3d ago · · ·

Oh gee i wonder where the crowbar came from?:ajbemused:  Anywho another great and funny chapter! I need to hurry up and get back to reading it HAHA!

#46 · Chapter 4 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

Hopy Shiquita :twilightoops:

Twilight plays Tetris like a boss.

#47 · Chapter 9 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

Glad to see this series is now on FIM. That way it'll be easier to track this story.

And now for requests, I have one game that will soooooo fit in this series.

Mario Party. This will test Friendship and could tear it apart easily.

If you need help on this game, check out some videos on Youtube. That could be useful since you apparently don't have any Nintendo Console games, correct?

JR
#48 · Chapter 5 · 105w, 2d ago · · ·

Pinkie murdering through the fire and flames on expert mode? Not big surprise.

#49 · Chapter 6 · 105w, 1d ago · · ·

This cahpter had awesome sauce drizzled all over it!

#50 · Chapter 5 · 104w, 5d ago · · ·

JET!!!!!!!!!!!! I FUCKING LOVE YOU MAN NO homo

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