*WRITTEN FOR THE EQUESTRIA DAILY OUTSIDE INSIGHT WRITING CONTEST*
Hello
You may know me or ou may not...but I know all of you.
Everyone of you are connected to me. I have watched you grow just as I have watched all of Equestria grow. Every moment of history, every struggle and every happy moment. I was there.
And now I wish to tell you what I have seen.
You may call me...The Tree of Harmony
Not bad. Interesting read.
4826199 thanks it was just something I came up with one night and thought it would be cool to do
Very nice take on the timeline of Equestria (personally I see it play out in a different order, but that doesn't diminish my appreciation). There were a few typos that, while not misspelled, are incorrect in the context in which they are used. I give it a 8.5 out of 10. Good luck to you.
4844306 well I tried to play off what I could gather from the show about the past. It had to start with The Hearths Warming events and end with the thousand year stretch. Going off of things that I heard in to show...Tirek knew Discord so that would mean either his events came after Discord's or he knew him from some other place....based of show and fan animations Sombra's events came before and maybe led up to Nightmare Moon. The only thing that threw me a cure was when to include Celestia and Luna, which maybe should have been first...and Starswirl at least had to live until Tirek's events happened so that's where I got my timeline from. Also I know there are some contextual errors that I need to fix, but it's hard to type things out with iPhone's stupid auto correct system replacing words all the time. But thanks for the feedback!
Wow I cannot wait for the next part
5728570 it is in the works...it's really really long unless I decide to make it into 3 volumes
Is this story going to continue in other volumes?
7359607 i'm eventually going to get around to volume 2 despite the, more or else terrible reviews of this one
7362338 there was only one bad review and that review was barely anything.
7368443 fair enough point.
fuck it it'll hopefully be out within the next 2 weeks
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It looks like the tree of Harmony has its own name tag you can use