Have you ever wondered what Spike actually thought?
LOL. That's all there is to be said.
I got half way through it before I left for chores but the language might make you up the language...where'd he get a tongue like that anyways?
Damn... Spike's a playa. I approve. Moar.
this is EPIC!
Mas Por Favor
5 mustaches out of 5
This is great. Really looking forward to more!
Yeah, it's true...Spike a player...so what else is new....I like that bit of Spike and Rainbow Dash...even though it was only friend ship wise, but friends can become more, ya know...maybe she should buck him Shit...I be down for that. Damn, Spike got a mouth on him....we would be awesome friends then. Keep writing more of this, it's badass.
what the hell is wrong with you????????
At first I was.
Then I was this is horrible.
Then, I was at Pinkie.
Finally, I was at the end.
shpoople, thank you for reaching into my mind and pulling out the way I want Spike to act and writing a story about it. Please continue!
Just gotta say, I love your Pinkie Pie creepyness in the story. Can't wait to see how you develope that!
Soo much SWAG
WANT IT NEED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's Freeman's Mind, Spike Edition! Also, Pinkie a her creepiest.
>>775686775686 I think someone's learned a few new words from "Dragon Quest."
By the way, are you sure this is incomplete? Or are we going to see Twilight give the "naughty words" lecture of the decade?
You've done well!
Actually I was intending this to be a one chapter thing, but seeing how well it's doing so far I might make more. I forgot to switch it to complete...
Buck. This is awesome I so f**ken see rainbow and spike cool that way and the whole Rarity thing priceless.
Yeah hes kind of like that.
Because we all know Spike is like this.
I see that this is a tad controversial...
This pleases me...
Oh Shpoople... You crazy bro
Thats why Mares don't date Colts, they date stallions like me.
XD lol j/k
But on a serious note....this story is fucking AWESOME!
Cant wait to read mext chapter
ah my sides are killing me man this is freaking funny
Mr. Shpoople, please don't cease making these...
Hahahahahaha, the 'bucking' scene was hilarious!
That crazy mare just got me a date with a fine piece of ass!
I call Featured CALLED IT!
This story! Fuck yea boys this is fucking brilliant. Hah RainBro that is amazing.
Also DAMN PINKIE YOU SCARY!
Yeah, Spike, you go tap dat ass! Loved it, man, loved it.
This is a boss fic, but I think cunt is a pretty strong word for the kid.
Love the SWAG moment though, and I imagine he probably would think like that. Only one emoticon describes how I feel about this fic:
lol pinkie pie
aaaaaaaaaaaaaand i need moar!
Spike is screwed over in quite a few ways here isn't he? It would be interesting to see where you'll take it from here, even if it was a one-shot. This is one of those rare fanfics that I find myself reading over and over again, so yet again, amazing job.
god-DAMN, I absolutely loved this. That little dragon got swag!
Dude I just made a account for this story .. Please do make more I had tears for laughing so hard
what the fuck did i just read. man this is probably the funniest goddamn thing iv read in a while, i am legit crying from laughing, this..this is just ...fucking magical.
you already won the internet in a previous comment, and the universe might be a bit exsessive...so from me you get an entire alien civilization. have fun with that
but first. WRITE MOAR OF THIS SHIT!!!
LOL! this is pure golden plated awesomeness!
i look forward to the next chapter
>>775937775937 The Dragon Quest explanation is great and the half that I was able to read before I went off to mow the lawn showed the mind of a child and a child's use of cusses. I still argue that the rating should be bumped up to mature...We don't want the soccer moms to try and take this site down now....do we?
>>778674778674 No this teen. It takes serious gore or actual "naughty bits" as Turk (from Scrubs) would say to hit a mature rating. This is honestly on the really light side of the teen rating.
Anyways for the author.
I laughed so hard, and Rainbow and Spike having a secret bro style relationship was the greatest idea ever. You need to write more because it would be a shame to let all that swag go to waste Plus I want to see what Pinkie Pie does, how Twilight reacts, and the date with Rarity. It will be epic!
"I said 'nothing.' Well, I said something, but it was the..." Yeah, she ain't believin' this.
"Really? Huh, I almost thought you said..."
"Maybe you need more sleep. You've been up quite late the past few days." You gullible bitch...
why not have spike romance both of them and
What the? Pinkie is starting to creep me out now...
Is this a troll fic,CAUSE I FEEL TROLLED!!!!!??????
She's suppose to.
My goal has been successively reached.
You good sir are GOD!!!!!!!
God damnit this shit's hillarious. Keep up the great work! Also I vote that Spike gets every pony in the mane 6. Because he has so much swag.
You should do whatever you think will make a better story. Although, personally, I like it better when Spike and Rainbow are bros.
Awesomeness my good sir
"Thank you, Jesus!" Wut?
Freaking amazing, both as a one shot or extended story. Definitly hoping for the "Spike bangs Rarity" ending.
Two things. One, Angel and Spike need to throw down. Two, what the actual fuck is up with Pinkie? She's not even Cupcakes psycho, she's like a fucking time bomb.
ok, keep the thing focused on spikes dirty language and his interactions with the other secondary characters. just like how its been going. and i think he should....win rarity, but then fall for dash. but then goes for snips or snails after being raped by pinkie pie
this is some good shit man keep it up but make it a nice suprise for the romance partif you can my drift.... im tired of spike and rarity ships go for rainbow dash
Imma say, I agree with Airstream about Spike and Angel fighting, and I think Spike should go after Rarity, his bro-lationship with Dash is just too awesome to change with romance.
Seriously...What the fuck is Pinkies problem....Does she have a crush on spike and is doing so reverse psychology shit...or is she just the fucking insane....
Yandere Pinkie Pie......So scary.....yet soooooo sexy.
I'd say go with Spike getting with Rarity. Him and Rainbow seem like too good bros to be in a relationship.
Definitely looking forward to future chapters! This shit is fucking GOLD.
i would prefer him to go for rainbow.
i fucking love ma shipping
and besides is way too over used
It would be great if this turned into a Sparity fic . But what I'm really interested in is pyscho Pinkie
Do rarity and rainbow but in epic twist do spikextwilight plz even if one shot do it you will win epicness
Spike and Rarity one because Sparity is my ship and two cause you already set Rainbow Dash up as a lesbian and it's working a really nice angle. (\ brohoof
Having Rainbow crushing on someone or lusting after them and Spike helping out would be a nice way for him to pay her back.
>>782703782703 I'm working on it damn it! Why must every fic lately seem to have a comment mentioning that, and remind me I should be writing and not slacking.
Okay... This is officially awesome enough to pop it like a pro, just saying!
>>782764782764 He comes from a dragon background, a much more humanised place, where the words swag and fuck actually exist.
Spike and Rarity. He's too close a bro with rainbow dash to start the romance stuff.
Spike and Rarity because their the closest thing to cannon and because rainbow and spike have that cool broship going on.
Why do I love this pinkie more?
Spike and Rainbow would be EPIC
I vote Spike x Rainbow
1) because it's a pretty unique ship
2) because the way you have them written it seems like they would be the most likely to get along, where as Rarity... wouldn't appreciate his inner crudeness
the two devils
this fic is incredible
i'd say let Spike discover his swag powers and have the mane six all after him in all their crazy goodness Pinkie and her rape train , fluttershy and a jelly angel attacking him to get her back , Twilight become psycho obsessive with him because shes afraid she will lose him , Rainbow because awesomeness , Applejack? (dunno cause he smells of apples?) and Rarity because canon-ish
but whatever you choose this fic is gonna be awesome
>>782833782833 Sounds like a good plot with a lotta plot. Have Celestia visit sometime, see what she's like.
I've got that nice feeling In my balls again!
Meaning I have some really good ideas for the next chapter.
I'm getting exited for the next chapter myself.
What does pop it like a pro mean?
I feel like that's a compliment, but im not sure...
>>784952784952 Lol trust me it's a compliment of kings!
Oh god... I just thought what the CMC might be like in this fic...
You sir are one pretty good Troll!
You actually managed to stir some indignation in me.
no te gusta mi historia?
>>786078786078 Nice Spanish! Too bad I know exactly what you said! Well you're absolutely right. At first I was all too stiff and serious about it but then I noticed that it wasn't meant to be serious so I decided to congratulate you on your ability to influence people on such a level:
>>786078786078 I'm kinda like your opposite you know! However I influence the people around me to take things in my stories seriously and I make them daaaaw and cry with sympathy for my characters. I control their feelings just like you can
Good story so far...
I'd rather see how the conflict between Spike and Pinkie develops
>>784259784259 Totally agree Spike's swag level is just too high not to get all six. It all makes sense if you think about it Spike's swag level will easily catch Rarity, his swag will mystify Rainbow, it's already driven Pinkie into nuclear level crazy , he has to use the power of swag to save Fluttershy from the evil known as angel, and with Twilight and Applejack there is just noway they will ever be able to resist Spike's ways. It's all about the dragon king of swag spreading the love.
Spread this story.
SPREAD IT LIKE A HUMOROUS PLAGUE!!
Ahhh....got to love Rainbow, Snips and Snails and bucking SPIKE! Also, it should be malehood, not manhood....there are no humans in this world, ya know....seriously bro, keep this up. Still wanting for Spike and Rainbow to buck!
This shit is great!
LOL that was epic lol! this is the funniest story that i have ever read it is AMAZING!!! keep it up!!
Spike. Watch your fucking language, you shithead.
>>794094794094 Rainbow uses man now and then.
>>794072794072 YES SIR
Redbull gives you swag, not wings. Shpoople says so.
Oh, and try go light on the word "retard." Trust me, nothing pisses people off faster.
"And don't you dare insult my swag suit again"
Spike is no little kid, he is the epitome of swag and manliness!
"You know what a trust fall?" I will find away to use this line and set up!
Awesome stuff man, really. You do need to capitalize three "I'm"s in the story though that you missed.
One thing I noticed is it's "Cheerilee", not whatever you wrote down. Regardless, this was another awesome chapter. Kudos
So much $wag
One word, and only one word can be used to describe this as a whole. Swag
for a second there, i thought rainbow was gonna get it on with spike
...just, no words for how awesome this is...
Best possible thing bro. Mountains of not gay at all brohoofs coming your way.