Have you ever wondered what Spike actually thought?
LOL. That's all there is to be said.
I got half way through it before I left for chores but the language might make you up the language...where'd he get a tongue like that anyways?
Damn... Spike's a playa. I approve. Moar.
this is EPIC!
Mas Por Favor
5 mustaches out of 5
This is great. Really looking forward to more!
Yeah, it's true...Spike a player...so what else is new....I like that bit of Spike and Rainbow Dash...even though it was only friend ship wise, but friends can become more, ya know...maybe she should buck him Shit...I be down for that. Damn, Spike got a mouth on him....we would be awesome friends then. Keep writing more of this, it's badass.
what the hell is wrong with you????????
At first I was.
Then I was this is horrible.
Then, I was at Pinkie.
Finally, I was at the end.
shpoople, thank you for reaching into my mind and pulling out the way I want Spike to act and writing a story about it. Please continue!
Just gotta say, I love your Pinkie Pie creepyness in the story. Can't wait to see how you develope that!
Soo much SWAG
WANT IT NEED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's Freeman's Mind, Spike Edition! Also, Pinkie a her creepiest.
>>775686775686 I think someone's learned a few new words from "Dragon Quest."
By the way, are you sure this is incomplete? Or are we going to see Twilight give the "naughty words" lecture of the decade?
You've done well!
Actually I was intending this to be a one chapter thing, but seeing how well it's doing so far I might make more. I forgot to switch it to complete...
Buck. This is awesome I so f**ken see rainbow and spike cool that way and the whole Rarity thing priceless.
Yeah hes kind of like that.
Because we all know Spike is like this.
I see that this is a tad controversial...
This pleases me...
Oh Shpoople... You crazy bro
Thats why Mares don't date Colts, they date stallions like me.
XD lol j/k
But on a serious note....this story is fucking AWESOME!
Cant wait to read mext chapter
ah my sides are killing me man this is freaking funny
Mr. Shpoople, please don't cease making these...
Hahahahahaha, the 'bucking' scene was hilarious!
That crazy mare just got me a date with a fine piece of ass!
I call Featured CALLED IT!
This story! Fuck yea boys this is fucking brilliant. Hah RainBro that is amazing.
Also DAMN PINKIE YOU SCARY!
Yeah, Spike, you go tap dat ass! Loved it, man, loved it.
This is a boss fic, but I think cunt is a pretty strong word for the kid.
Love the SWAG moment though, and I imagine he probably would think like that. Only one emoticon describes how I feel about this fic:
lol pinkie pie
aaaaaaaaaaaaaand i need moar!
Spike is screwed over in quite a few ways here isn't he? It would be interesting to see where you'll take it from here, even if it was a one-shot. This is one of those rare fanfics that I find myself reading over and over again, so yet again, amazing job.
god-DAMN, I absolutely loved this. That little dragon got swag!
Dude I just made a account for this story .. Please do make more I had tears for laughing so hard
what the fuck did i just read. man this is probably the funniest goddamn thing iv read in a while, i am legit crying from laughing, this..this is just ...fucking magical.
you already won the internet in a previous comment, and the universe might be a bit exsessive...so from me you get an entire alien civilization. have fun with that
but first. WRITE MOAR OF THIS SHIT!!!
LOL! this is pure golden plated awesomeness!
i look forward to the next chapter
>>775937775937 The Dragon Quest explanation is great and the half that I was able to read before I went off to mow the lawn showed the mind of a child and a child's use of cusses. I still argue that the rating should be bumped up to mature...We don't want the soccer moms to try and take this site down now....do we?
>>778674778674 No this teen. It takes serious gore or actual "naughty bits" as Turk (from Scrubs) would say to hit a mature rating. This is honestly on the really light side of the teen rating.
Anyways for the author.
I laughed so hard, and Rainbow and Spike having a secret bro style relationship was the greatest idea ever. You need to write more because it would be a shame to let all that swag go to waste Plus I want to see what Pinkie Pie does, how Twilight reacts, and the date with Rarity. It will be epic!
"I said 'nothing.' Well, I said something, but it was the..." Yeah, she ain't believin' this.
"Really? Huh, I almost thought you said..."
"Maybe you need more sleep. You've been up quite late the past few days." You gullible bitch...
why not have spike romance both of them and
What the? Pinkie is starting to creep me out now...
Is this a troll fic,CAUSE I FEEL TROLLED!!!!!??????
She's suppose to.
My goal has been successively reached.
You good sir are GOD!!!!!!!
God damnit this shit's hillarious. Keep up the great work! Also I vote that Spike gets every pony in the mane 6. Because he has so much swag.