Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.
This story is a sequel to For The One You Love
There's nothing like the birth of a new foal to give a little joy (and a little chaos) to your lives. Little Apple Fritter has done just that, working his way into everpony's heart with just an adorable yawn and a giggle. Everypony thinks he's the best thing since oats: his parents, his grandparents (on both sides), his mother's friends, his father's family, his mother's ex-fiancé...
Wait. What?
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..I am personally surprised that Discord didn't replace Skyblaze's dick with a cucumber. To be fair, it would be an improvement.
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He's got... other things in mind.
Discord is having a field day.
Mistake?
Otherwise, I'm excited because sequal!
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Fix'd. Thanks!
Little Fritter - why can't *I* come up with such creative names
Oh, Macintosh, you done goofed.
At least AJ will probably have figured it out.
I have to say that the foals opinion of Skyblaze is spot on. To even think of mistreating one of the element bearers. Not to mention the close friend of Discord, Twilight Sparkle and Celestia strikes me as monumentally stupid. It's sad to think that an extended vacation on the moon is one of the better outcomes.
What a twist!
Everything about this... (and the prequel)
Is just...
OH GOD YES!!!
*Grins* Very fun.
YESSSSSSSS!!!!!
Aww, Apple Fwitter!
Squee! How adorable!
Isn't there already an adult Apple Fritter?
http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Apple_Fritter
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that would explain why the name sounded right… I've always been terrible with names...4840116
Well, for a list of already taken apple names, just listen to the first episode.
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No no no, that's Apple Fritter, but the foal is Apple Fritter Carnage Vanquishing Cloudhammer von Hapsburg Bonaparte.
4840188
That's quite the name you came up with there.
...
4840127
Ditto.
Good chapter and story so far, and I shall be following this story closely.
~ Super-Brony12
Wow, I didn't know Mac had it in him! So, Apple Fritter is a Pegasus Colt, most likely larger than a typical Pegasus foal due to his Earth pony heritage, and both 'Shy's parents are over the moon for the little guy. Oh, and Sky is being a jerk as usual. (Loved that scene where Herald and Lightning show up unannounced. ♫Cl-ass-ic!♪)
...Oh no.....
Oh NO.
Sky's going to claim that Fritter is HIS child, isn't he.
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Or that, because [insert pegasus custom here] he needs to be raised by properly warlike pegasi, etc.
This chapter pleases me greatly.
Fritter will be the mightiest of pastries!
*Grins* This should be great fun. I don't totally get BonBon's expression thought... 0.o
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Bon Bon (and everyone else) came to see the baby and had brought gifts. Mac knew Fluttershy was tired but she wouldn't refuse so he was slightly irked about that.
OK so the only thing i dont like about this story is that you dont know what ponies look like,
what does Fritter look like?
who is the Pegasus talking to snails?
please fix this
4915174 I suspect Fritter looks something like Applebloom, but a colt with wings. And I'm pretty sure the pegasus talking to snails is Sky.
you know your child has a bright future when he already has twins fighting over him
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I'm not entirely sure. This is about all we have canonically, so I just said their lines out loud until it sounded passable. It's probably Generic European; maybe German with a hint of Russian.
Thanks!
Lol, poor traumatized Rainbow.
Dawww....
~ Super-Brony12
*Laughs and applauds* Bravo, very adorable.
Awwwww!
4880741 He's probably gonna kidnap him.
OOOOOOOOO! PINKIE GONNA SNAP SOME NECKS!
5377982 KILL!
KILL! 
KILL! 
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That was way too short an update for the wait time. Dangit.
EXTERMINATE! EXTERMINATE! EXTERMINATE!
~ Super-Brony12
When the animals started reacting all I could think of was this:
Way to fire the opening shot Angel!
I want to believe this is Tank
Eheheh. Skyblaze isn't so high and mighty when he doesn't have home field advantage, it seems.
I'm going to hazard a guess that Pinkie's taking Fritter to safety at Sweet Apple Acres.
I look forward to see what happens next.
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Something like that.
Yes.
I didn't specify, but only because I didn't want to imply that Rainbow had left him and wasn't taking good care of him. it totally was, though; he's a loyal little fellow
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Nothing like being out of your element.
Close. The safety part's right, though.
5388646 Dammit, Someone beat me to the Ace Ventura Joke.
I do hope we get the answer to the paternity question at some point!
You have an error in the story description that really changes the meaning. By writing the feminine fiancée rather than the masculine fiancé, you make it sound like Fluttershy was once engaged to a mare, which suggests a different storyline.
Aw yeah, go Pinkie!
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I have been on this earth nearly a quarter of a century and I have never realized that that word had a gender to it.
Fix'd.