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Lava churns and dull roars echo in the boiling depths of Norfair. However, in the deepest caves, intergalactic bounty hunter Samus Aran and her lifelong archenemy, Ridley, are locked in a ferocious fight to the death. Losing, Ridley is nearly killed in a rockslide caused by the hunter as she escapes. However, something strange, something miraculous happens to him. Barely, just barely, he manages to escape and muster enough energy to escape his lair, and eventually Zebes.

However, in the vacuum of space, while traveling to his flagship, he's suddenly hit by a burst of light. Now he's in a place full of green meadows and equines of different colors. Unfortunately, they soon learn of his nature and intentions. Can they cope under the dictation of the draconic behemoth? Or will our hero step up and face down the beast once more.

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I know this is a bit short, and might not be as well written as MLW. But, hey, Dimondium has lent me some help on that recently.

However, if you're not a big fan, or if you've never played Metroid at all, you probably won't know who Ridley is, and I can assure you that he will be explained as the story progresses :raritywink:


So, please enjoy :twilightsmile:

>Ridley

>Friendly

This is a complete monster that takes the alignment "chaotic evil" up to eleven. He fucks people up not just because he can, but because he loves to inflict pain and just ruin shit altogether.

However, I think the ponies will be fine. If things get too bad, Celestia can just shoot the sun at him or something. Unstoppable he ain't.

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This is also a giant dragon/pterodactyl-alien that has an army of assloads of crab-like aliens.

He caused small-scale genocide (If you've ever read the manga), so I'm pretty sure things might get a bit out of hand, because, I still have to keep close to both the timelines of My Little Pony and Metroid. And, I also have to keep his persona: A cruel, cold, sick, sick son-of-a-bitch.

This will probably bump up in darkness. But it's one chapter, there's no telling of where this could go. Yet


EDIT: Also, look at this: Ridley's faking his niceness, yes, I know that he would probably just completely rip Fluttershy in two. But, for now, this is how it's going to work.

And supbrony, I might use that later :raritywink:

....

I hope that came out right...

This looks awesome.
I hope he eats scootaloo and says she tastes just like chicken.:scootangel:

Have them keep treating him like trixie too. It will hopefully increase urge to make friends.

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Thanks :twilightsmile:, who knows, perhaps we could work on a collaboration one day :raritywink:

MLW: My Little Warzone


I have another fic I'm working on (On a temporary hiatus until I can build up some inspiration) titled My Little Warzone: Betrayal Part 1. If you click on my username, it should be on the list of stories.

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He'll just find a way to cheat death (Ridley has been through worse).

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>Mutated by Phazon

>Killed and made into a cyborg

>Infected by the X

>Killed a whole plethora of other times


Yeah, I think you might be right :rainbowlaugh:

This is now the Ridley I know and love!
I'm reporting this fanfic to slowbeef!

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A cruel, tyrannical monster making friends with ponies? Nah...but perhaps somepony will join him as an assistant...and by assistant, I mean minion :rainbowlaugh:

453416 yet he ALWAYS finds a way to come back.....

Pretty good but I never think of Ridley having any sort of civilization to speak to things I always thought of him with a personality like "You cross my sight and you die."

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yes. Metroid. Ridley.

I know about it because of Super Smash Bros.

Tracked.

metroid prime is my favorite videogame

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Don't worry, my friend, the metroids will come soon enough :pinkiecrazy:

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It's up there! But in my opinion, it's not one of my favorites.


No Metroid game can meet up to the standards of quality except for one game and one game only: Super Metroid :pinkiehappy:

My n-name is Flutters- DEATH! MURDER! MUURDER!!
That's what I expected.

I think Ridley needs a Siesta in the heart of the sun... or a therapist. Anyone know if all of the Mane 6 are available for the next ohhh... 3 years?

And I have one complaint... Ridley is technically not a space pirate. Space Pirate, in the metroid games, denotes an actual race. Ridley is their leader, but not a space pirate specifically. He is a Star Dragon, or a Zebesian Dragon, if you prefer. Lord of the Space Pirates perhaps, even king or leader, but not a space pirate himself.

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I see this wasn't responded to on the said chapter, regardless, this is my response:

Are you really that ignorant to see that this is one chapter out of a planned fifteen? Do you know that Ridley has more of a "Attack first, ask questions later" sort of logic? He's as intelligent as he is brutal, and he's as cunning as he is cruel, but they don't know that, he hasn't displayed said abilities yet. Also, I understand the mistakes I make, but I'd rather be told story elements from someone that actually even knows what Ridley looks like, let alone what he does.

So, while I have asked for your help in the past, can you just stay out of my hair while I write this and let someone else, preferably a Metroid fan like myself, work with the personality traits of characters?

Well, I'd say this is a decent improvement. :ajsmug:

Keep at it! :twilightsmile:

well, I am now truly disgusted by Ridley. Someone impale him on a spike, then cook him.

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I don't want to spoil the story, but, like I said, Space Pirates are going to be involved. So, it may be implemented as a biological weapon that escapes and somehow finds its way in the Canterlot Palace.

I'll put him in there, I hate making friends and followers upset, so don't worry :twilightsmile:

The new tittle seems odd, for starters: He is not in Ponyville 24/7. So it would look silly in some parts.

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I was trying to weave in some kind of reference, but no battle (Yet) and no Samus has kind of limited me to use them. But I somehow managed to sneak in the Nightmare Forest :derpytongue2:

Speaking of which, anypony reading this get the Chronicle reference when Ridley called himself an "Apex Predator?"

I'm sorry that this is the shortest chapter yet. But there are a couple of reasons why:

-Writing kinda takes a lot of my time away, and trying to double task between that and interacting with friends and family, it's one or the other. And I am barely able to manage both equally.

-I'm tired all the time, a mix of less sleep than usual and a low metabolism seems to be the blame.

-I write and play on the computer all the time, and it's starting to give me Carpal Tunnel Syndrome (CTS), I want to take frequent breaks so I don't develop Arthritis at only 14...

Unfortunately, that means it's gonna be a while before the invasion of Equestria that I hope some of you have been waiting for, but please understand that I try my best...

phazonized unicorns... oh shi-...

oh dang. those ponies are going to be royally screwed if samus doesn't show up soon. but great job; keep up the good work!

...and then i realize the previous comment is over 5 weeks old. i hope this story didnt get cancelled :/

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It didn't, I just have a million things on my mind right now, and it's hard coming up with new material.

Don't worry, a new chapter will come in time. :twilightsmile:

can you kill shinging armour or princess cadence please?

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Eh...If I can rack my thoughts together to create a tale of the infamous Metroid boss while being able to actually do it, I may make it a very, very, VERY slim chance of happening.

I don't like killing off important characters, I learned that from someone. And I have a pre-S3 clause so Trixie doesn't count.

Ridley would look kinda stupid with a little gold crown on his head. Wonder if someone has drawn that.

Noone eh ridley well your about to get a visit from an old friend soon the name's Aran Samus Aran

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Heh...As long as I don't create a literary conflict like last time.:twilightsheepish:

Though, I have a full plate, and this story is the salad, the one thing I like to eat last. Mainly because of my success with other stories.

I'm not dead, folks!

Just a bit busy with some work with schooling and stuff.

I love how you had Ridley eat Twilights mom

When will the next chapter come out. Just wondering.

ADD DRAK SAMUS PLEASE WE NEED ANOTHER SAMUS

Nice story seems dead though a shame

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