Love is in the air!
Princess Twilight Sparkle has decided to marry Flash Sentry, her handsome and dashing coltfriend.
What could possibly ruin this day?
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I can't figure out whether the blizzard of downrates is from people who disapprove of poisoning Flash, or merely his existence in your fic. It's probably the latter.
The dialog just doesn't sync up with the character speaking making hard to believe that this situation is occurring.
That was a masterpiece
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Would it be easier to read if I clearly indicate who's speaking after each line of dialogue?
I'm willing to bet that 3/4 of the dislikers didn't even read this. I don't even know what to think after this either. It was good? I'm not sure. It portrayed a message, and I got that, but I'm not sure how to feel here. It's BBBFF, not BBBF by the way.
Were you on anything when you wrote this?
I like the story line, and it's quite charming, but I do not agree with your choice of making Flash a complete asshat. Other than that, it's an interesting story. Thumbs up for creativity.
4808792 Start a new paragraph each time somepony speaks, also look at how the voice actors that portray the character, what would the character say.
I insta down voted cause flash sentry, but then got around to reading it and liked it. A few tweaks here and here and it would be wonderful.
I'm gonna be completely honest here and say that the downvotes are probably because of the fact that this story is just flat out poorly written, and not because of the Flash Sentry tag alone.
The characters are one-dimensional, not even half developed aside from some direct statements about their character. Hell, in a few instances they're just out of character entirely with little to no real explanation. The story is technically poor, the pacing is awful, and the plot is just "Flash Sentry is a total tool, so fuck him".
Also, you top it off with this in the author's note:
Why? Why do I need to read another story to know what really happened when you didn't even bother to let readers know that they have to read another story of yours to understand the conclusion?
This story just doesn't look like any real effort was put into it.
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The point was to slop up a story with no effort.
Took 20 minutes to write :D
4813613 Hahaha ok, then that makes a lot more sense.
4807312 I just didn't vote
4831817 not really
4831843 Little detail. I AM THE IMPERIAL EMPEROR, and thereby exempt from the law, cause I make them.
4831866 personally, I just didn't really like it, but was nice enough to not press thumbs down. But since you want me to be cruel, I'll give you one.
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I'm noticing a pattern.
I write a trollfic. I get more downvotes than upvotes. . Hmmmm....
HAHAHAHAHAHA
I haven't laughed that hard in over a week.
Have a Pinkie.
That was the dumbest, most retarded thing I've ever read. I love it!
What drew me to read this was the "What could go wrong" part. Best story ever. Take the Pinkie Badge. You deserve it.
4833142 When I first saw this story, the pic of Twi and Trash kissing I downvoted it, but then I read it and not only did I give it an upvote, I gave it a fave. Anything where Flash dies, especially in the way he did, will get an automatic upvote. I find it hilarious that it was Apple Bloom who killed him and that Tia found it hilarious.