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    This parody goes through the series, sending up the plots and situations of each episode. As a precaution, it is in a script format, but seeing as the general scenes will match the episodes we're all familiar with, I do not think this will prove to be a problem. As well as the more overtly comedic elements, more dramatic backstory and character development of my own creation will be incorporated. I hope you enjoy it, and comments and feedback are always welcome!

    First Published
    20th Nov 2011
    Last Modified
    12th Jan 2013

    Comments ( 305 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·
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    this is a really cute idea! Jeez it mustve taken FOREVER to do! anything someone works that on should be recognized ! great job! :pinkiehappy:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I just realized... almost as soon as Rainbow Dash saw Twilight, R.D. gave her a blow job.

    *cricket*cricket*cricket*

    G'night everyone!  Try the veal!

    (I also absolutely LOVED how you handled Fluttershy.  EEeeeeeeeeeeevil Fluttershy.)

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hilarious!:rainbowlaugh:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Applejack was hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #6 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 3d ago · · ·
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    and my poor baby dragon is tired from all that rampant, soul-crushing negativity and needs his sleep.

    Yes, while the metaphor is quite amusing, I assure you, my diabetes finds it less so. I’m getting too old for this job. Nonetheless, I am required to state that now, it is my great honor to introduce to you the ruler of our land-

    So much lulz :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 79w, 12h ago · · ·
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      You can murder me if you want to, but I really dislike this kind of humor. Good job on parodying, though. I just... went serious through the whole thing. The internet is already filled with this kind of stuff, and it lacks some innocent humor such as "The Contest" (the only example I could find).

      Fluttershy's into animal cruelty? Even though I didn't like it, I gotta say, you are a very creative writer. Keep on doing this, I'm sure the other ones will like it. I still find myself forced to rate you, AT LEAST, 3 stars and a half.

      Who am I to criticize others' stories anyway? You checked out mine yet? I can't make them good, no matter what I do. :raritycry:

    Don't shoot me, I'm only the comic writer. :scootangel:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 6d ago · · ·
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    poor spike :moustache:

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 78w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Hello all! Figured I'd provide an update to anyone who might read this.

    I've finally gotten over the illness mentioned in the complete version of episode 1, and have finally caught a break from a rather excessive amount of homework and tests that all seemed to crop up at the exact same time, so I've been hard at work on episode 2. I hope to have it posted by Thanksgiving; it really depends on how this upcoming weekend goes, writing-wise.

    I also have this to say regarding episode 2: for those who found the tonal shift between the Celestia/Luna scenes and the Mane 6 material too jarring, you'll be pleased to know I've come to agree with you. When I first started this project, I set out to incorporate more serious elements of my own mythology simply because I did so when I wrote a parody of Final Fantasy V a few years ago, and it was incredibly successful, so I wanted to replicate that element. However, the more serious mythology came about much more organically in that parody, and Friendship is Parodied should absolutely exist as its own entity. Here, I've found myself much more drawn to the interactions between the characters, and the humor derived from these interactions, just like I'm drawn to in the actual show. I won't go so far as to call the Celestia and Luna material a mistake, but I will call it misguided.

    So what does this mean? Certainly not that I'll be abandoning the plots I've set up. I'm far too obsessed with continuity to do anything of the sort. However, I am trying to fold much of the more serious material that may have been parsed out over the season into episode 2, simply to have it out of the way. This has, naturally, led to a lengthier writing process than expected. I just wanted to check in and say I haven't abandoned the project at all.

    I won't necessarily be abandoning the mythology, either. Certainly, the Elements of Disharmony will have to reappear if this thing ever makes it to "The Return of Harmony." I'll just be downplaying it in favor of the comedy. Which is what I want to write, and you guys seem to want to read. And hey, if I can change the minds of some of you who find the comedy too dark, that would be quite an accomplishment for me as well :pinkiehappy:

    #10 · Chapter 0 · 78w, 1h ago · · ·
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    What can I say? I'm a feedback whore. This time, I just went ahead and denoted the update as (Part 1). Considering how substantial the content already is, it seemed fair! :derpyderp2:

    #11 · Chapter 0 · 78w, 34m ago · · ·
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    Aww,there wasn't much spike abuse in this chapter.:fluttershysad:

    #12 · Chapter 0 · 78w, 27m ago · · ·
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    But to save Equestria from certain doom, look for the pony whose powers awaken at the sonic rainboom.

    Oooh!  Ooooh!  I know!  Pinkie Pie should have been in Celestia's School for Gifted Ponies!

    #13 · Chapter 0 · 77w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I absolutely love your use of Applejack and Rarity. Keep this amazing banter going.

    #14 · Chapter 0 · 77w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Powers awaken at the Sonic Rainboom? All of the Mane Six went through that! Who knows? Maybe Pinkie's gonna be the Element of Magic:rainbowlaugh:

    So according to your history, the Sun and Moon rose up naturally, but a curse made by a zebra made Celestia have to do it instead? AWESOME! That is SO going into my head canons! Can't wait to see more on their personalities.

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 77w, 3d ago · · ·
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    awesome indeed!:pinkiehappy:

    #16 · Chapter 0 · 77w, 7h ago · · ·
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    What a cliffhanger, literally. WE ORDER THOU IN THE ROYAL CAPERLOCK VOICE TO FINISH THIS LITERARY PIECE!!!

    #17 · Chapter 0 · 77w, 42m ago · · ·
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    LOL:rainbowlaugh:!!!

    Also, there are a couple mistakes in the lyrics of Pinkie's Giggle at the Ghostly song:pinkiegasp:, it goes:

    But Grammy Pie said that wasn't the way to deal with fears at all

    but yours says

    But Grammy Pie said that wasn't a way to deal with fears at all

    and, correct:

    you'll see that they can't hurt you, just laugh and make them disappear

    yours says

    you'll see that they can't hurt you, just laugh to make them disappear

    (I know, I know, nitpicking) Love it though!

    #18 · Chapter 0 · 77w, 37m ago · · ·
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    Aw... I was sort of expecting the tree to burst into flame after eating Pinkie, rather than her going all Kenny.

    Still, loved the Fluttershy one. :pinkiecrazy:

    #19 · Chapter 0 · 77w, 27m ago · · ·
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    Dang, I pressed my ear to the speaker on Pinkie Pie's song, trying desperately to get every word perfect. But some of them are really really hard. Ah well, best not to linger on such things. (And hey, if they'd release a season one set, we'd all have official subtitles and that would be that. But there aren't enough of us for such a set to sell, of course.:flutterrage:)

    As for Pinkie Pie being Kenny, all I can say is this: while I love love love the Derpy Russian Roulette gag, the plot line has more going on beneath the surface than just base comedy. This will soon become "Pinkie's episode," in a way.

    Also, in case it wasn't clear, I really dislike episode two of the show. It's so forced. Friendship is Witchcraft may have been smart to start later in the series, although I much prefer my parodies to be comprehensive.

    #20 · Chapter 0 · 77w, 4m ago · · ·
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    i read the first part so far.

    at first i was like :rainbowlaugh:

    but then i was like :rainbowlaugh:

    after that i was like :rainbowlaugh:

    and then i was like :rainbowlaugh:

    and then i was like :moustache:

    cant wait to read the rest!

    #21 · Chapter 0 · 77w, 1m ago · · ·
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    Aaaw. Why don't they like butterscotch?:pinkiesad2: I love butterscotch. Nice story by the way. It's hilarious in a good way:pinkiehappy:

    #22 · Chapter 0 · 76w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>42079

    I have it on my iPhone, and it plays really loud, so it was easy for me to get Pinkie's words just right :twilightsmile:

    #23 · Chapter 0 · 76w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Strange, random, violent, I love it!

    So Pinkie is just like Kenny, dying in one episode and being reborn the next? Awesome! Wait, he died in the movie for real... Oh well! Fluttershy and that Manticore, AHAHAHA!:rainbowlaugh:

    Now, my answer to everything would be chainsaws.

    #24 · Chapter 0 · 76w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>42193 Really? My answer to everything is C4.

    #25 · Chapter 0 · 76w, 6d ago · · ·
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    For the love of God, continue this.

    #26 · Chapter 0 · 76w, 6d ago · · ·
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    *grin*

    This one is a little too close to the original. But I like the never-ending Pinkie!

    #27 · Chapter 0 · 76w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy. Now my least favorite character :pinkiesad2:

    #28 · Chapter 0 · 76w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>42488

    And my answer for everything is WOMBATS :pinkiecrazy:

    #29 · Chapter 0 · 75w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :facehoof:

    #30 · Chapter 0 · 75w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Finals :facehoof:

    #31 · Chapter 0 · 75w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>53738 :facehoof: the fact that you havent posted more chapters makes 20% more sense now:facehoof: or rather, 100% more.

    #32 · Chapter 0 · 75w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>56765 Thanks for the understanding. I'd like to say the nightmare will be over on Friday... but it won't. Ideally, expect more parody on Wednesday the 14th. Certainly no sooner.

    Just to reassure everyone, I certainly have not abandoned this project. It's just that, much as I may like to, I simply do not have the time to dedicate to a My Little Pony parody right now. There's more material written than has been posted, but nothing substantial enough to be posted. In the meantime, we all have a Spike episode to enjoy on Saturday...

    ...so, ya know, there's that, at least. :moustache:

    #33 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Short update, but I'm amazed I was able to squeeze this much out during finals. Banter is fun, and I've enjoyed writing it, but the meaty part of the story is just ahead!

    #34 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Also, I miss when updated stories were sent to the front of fimfiction, rather than being on their own page. I hope this can still get noticed.

    #35 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 5d ago · · ·
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    no steven magnet? son i am disappointment. but it was pretty good despite that

    #36 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well, rule of funny is probly going to bitchslap me for saying this but I don't see Twilight and the rest being able to use the elements in this fic.

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 74w, 4d ago · · ·
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    umm... right.:unsuresweetie: no offense but this didn't say the right greetings to me... i mean, applejack saying... whatever she said :applejackunsure:, rainbow dash completely hating twilight :rainbowhuh:, rarity going completely insane :duck:, fluttershy making animals uh... different...:fluttershysad: and pinkie pie... being normal as she is at the beginning of the show!:pinkiehappy: sorry but... i think you overdid this a bit, no offense! but nice on making it seem the same as the show. Sorta... But the pinkie pie bit was still good though!:pinkiesmile:

    #38 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Let's see, the Elements of Harmony...

    Honesty: Could still work, AJ was still pretty honest :ajsmug:

    Kindness: Fluttershy was real kind, albeit having to chop off an arm for this feat :flutterrage:

    Laughter: Pinkie Pie was EATEN before she could even finish her song! Still, she made Steven Magnet laugh... :pinkiehappy:

    Generosity: Skipped Steven Magnet entirely... :raritycry:

    Loyalty: No Shadowbolts, no loyalty. :rainbowhuh:

    Magic: No comment :facehoof:

    I'm saying at least three of the elements would work fine, maybe four. I don't know how you're going to wrap this up...

    #39 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 4d ago · · ·
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    steven. magnet. party on. :moustache: :facehoof:

    this is STILL awesome!! how i've missed it.. :pinkiecrazy:

    #40 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>64519

    I'll contend that, on the whole, Rainbow Dash's characterization was a misfire on my part. Unbridled contempt can yield comedy, and has worked for me in the past, but it simply has no place in this context. The end of episode two is being used to rectify this somewhat, including the Shadow Bolts scene, which, rather than attempting to play for laughs, I'm playing even more dramatic than the show in an effort to flesh out Rainbow's character.

    Essentially, for whatever reason, Rainbow Dash is just REALLY hard to parody. The same problem can be seen in Friendship is Witchcraft, if you're a fan of that series. I consider Rainbow Dash my most problematic pony, and want to acknowledge my effort to fix it, to at least some degree.

    I'm sorry to hear you don't like the rest, though. My sense of humor doesn't gel with Equestria for some readers, it seems. Nonetheless, thank you for taking the time to read it and comment!

    #41 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>64686

    Plot holes wider than fanon!Dash's.

    #42 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 4d ago · · ·
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    no offense but Friendship is Witchcraft is a horrible abridge to model yourself after. Camaraderie is Supernatural is much better in the fact that it actually gets the spirit of the series while doing its own thing.

    Also please think about re-wrighting this as the script version is just not doing it for me try wrighting actual scenes and show us the world.

    #43 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 3d ago · · ·
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    ah no wonder i liked it so much. it's got that similar twang as FiW

    keep up the good work :ajsmug:

    #44 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 1d ago · · ·
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    That was beautiful. I almost cried, and I NEVER cry at fan fiction! :pinkiesad2:

    #45 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry: That was just... so sweet.

    I like your take on RD's loyalty test. The show made her jump to her conclusion too fast, therefore making it seem a little rushed. You, however, make it quite nicely. Such a nice way to say it.

    The plot twist, though, was the one that really caught me by surprise. Honestly, I never expected it! Pinkie's life story... teared up at it, I must say. Your take on Pinkie's cutie mark story was nice, if I do say so myself. It's just so... depressing yet heartwarming. :pinkiesmile:

    On the other hoof, now we know how she used the infinite lives Gameshark code!

    #46 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Damn this is awesome NEED MOAR! :D 5/5!:duck:

    #47 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Take it. Take it all.

    #48 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>71764

    Haha. I assume that's good?

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 74w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Everypony's personalities deconstructed, and Pinkie is still best pony! I enjoy it so far! (Also, I actually liked the Celestia/Luna bits. You actually managed to turn the whole "Trollestia" thing into a legitimate character, and not just a lame one-off joke! I hope you don't change it too much. :twilightsmile:)

    #50 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 22h ago · · ·
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    that was unexpected :fluttercry: but still, quite masterful writing you have here. :pinkiecrazy: keep it up!!

    #51 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 17h ago · · ·
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    :yay:

    #52 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 7h ago · · ·
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    You described Fluttershy as "burying her head in her hands" once. I think you meant hooves.

    Nitpicking aside, this was... amazing? Yeah, I think that's the right word. I think I like this Rainbow Dash better than the one in the show.

    #53 · Chapter 0 · 74w, 3h ago · · ·
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    Nice chapter I'm liking how you're expanding on things here.

    Also because nobody else made this joke.

    Doc: GREAT SCOTT!

    Marty: I know this is heavy!

    Yes, yes fire away I know I have it coming.

    #54 · Chapter 0 · 73w, 6d ago · · ·
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    this is was very unexpected considering the rest of the story has been completely focused on comedy

    #55 · Chapter 0 · 73w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Yeah... the problem with parodying Rainbow Dash is that she's already her own parody.  She's already convinced that she's 20% cooler than anything else around.

    #56 · Chapter 0 · 73w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Talk about mood whiplash!

    Well-written, and very creative explanation for your alternaPinkie.

    Good job!

    #57 · Chapter 2 · 73w, 4d ago · · ·
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    THIS IS AMAZINGLY FUNNY U BETTER DO THE OPENING TO SEASON 2 :duck:

    PLEEEAAASSEEEEE :fluttercry: :raritycry: :raritydespair: :applecry:

    #58 · Chapter 2 · 73w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I...cannot wait to see how you do the "Jealous Girlfriend Episode" ("Griffon the Brush Off"), especially since Rainbow's closet is virtually indestructable and Applejack is SO conservative. Kudos to you, my good man!

    #59 · Chapter 0 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiegasp: This story you write...how compelling. I love your version of Pinkie Pie's beginnings and did not expect the dying gag to actually have some meaning other than be...a gag.

    Your upload speed is one to be applauded as well. Bravo.

    I'm rooting for ya', tiger. :yay:

    #60 · Chapter 2 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    So I take it you're going to work around the other episodes now? I would love to see more of the great characterizations you've imprinted in my mind work without the threat of Nightmare Moon work upon them.

    I am such a fan of Pinkie Pie in your work, even though she didn't do much in this piece of genius. :fluttershysad:

    #61 · Chapter 2 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    BRILLIANT! as the Guinness commercials would say. (how long ago was that?? i feel old... :pinkiecrazy:) i really hope you write more awesome things so i can read them and get a good chuckle (and occasionally a hearty guffaw) out of them :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::facehoof:

    #62 · Chapter 2 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Thanks for all the amazing feedback, everyone! I'm really happy to see all the positive reaction to episode 2! Keep any comments you have, good or bad, coming. Feedback, and the idea that other people are enjoying your work, is what makes this whole writing thing worth it!

    And, since multiple people seemed curious, what's next for the parody is really quite simple: I've already got ideas brewing in my head for "The Ticket Master." There are plenty more episodes ahead, and plenty more stories to tell, both of the purely farcical and more serious varieties. I'm hoping to have more material quite soon!

    #63 · Chapter 2 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This is actually better than the real episode, actually! The show sort of just... jumped to the conclusion for RD and the Element of Magic. You managed to change it, and weave it into something much more spectacular than that! I'll keep waiting for the new chapters. Hope they're up to par with this one.:pinkiesmile:

    #64 · Chapter 1 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    .....I hope Spike and the dragons end up slaughtering all the ponies. ALL the ponies. Other than that, I'm loving this fic! :pinkiecrazy: :eeyup:

    #65 · Chapter 2 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I hope Spike keeps up the "snarky slave" thing.:moustache:

    #66 · Chapter 2 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Haha, poor Rarity. Those six are really lucky her named rhymed with something related to generosity...:rainbowlaugh:

    #67 · Chapter 0 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    6/5

    That was so sad :fluttercry:

    #68 · Chapter 2 · 73w, 3d ago · · ·
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    All right, so, here's the bad part about posting the episode in "parts" like I did. Eventually, the goal was always to collapse them all into one chapter, as I did with episode 1. Unfortunately, that will take away a large number of the comments. I won't outright delete the old chapters yet, as I still refer to comments for feedback and the like, but I just wanted to explain why a bunch of comments are about to disappear.

    #69 · Chapter 2 · 72w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh man, I loved the most where Twilight said this part:

    Twilight: Applejack, who never hesitates to share her conservative opinions, whether solicited or not, represents the spirit of Honesty!

    And the other spirits given to the Mane Six. You're the best COMEDIAN EVER!!!:rainbowkiss:

    #70 · Chapter 1 · 72w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This was amazing. It reminded me that one abridged series, "Camaraderie is Supernatural".

    #71 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 5d ago · · ·
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    "Twilight (leaping to her feet): No one EVER uses Safe Mode!" Like on a computer? I doubt that safe mode would exist if noone uses it. :derpytongue2:

    #72 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 5d ago · · ·
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    "And Granny Smith could replace those saggy old... well, you get the idea." gross :unsuresweetie:

    #73 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>89700 No one uses trielectro-fluxrehumidifiers either, but they still exist.

    #74 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>89700

    BAH, SAFEMODE! (It does exist; if your computer's battery dies or it shuts down unexpectedly, a black screen will come up offering to start it regularly or on safe mode, at least, that's the way it works on PCs. Nobody ever uses safe mode, however, because it makes your icons and mouse gigantic and it stops you from doing pretty much, well, anything.)

    Gotta love the Grand Gallivanting Galla.

    #75 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 5d ago · · ·
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    (after only part one)

    since in this parody your makin it so rarity likes spike i wonder how youll do her part :pinkiehappy:

    #76 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Why do I have the feeling that dragging Twilight to SAA wasn't his first choice of activities...:moustache:

    #77 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: at the grand gallivanting gala. lol great stuff. i freaking LOVE your writing style, especially twilight's computer mind and dash's 'im not a lesbian' comments. :pinkiecrazy: lol freakin awesome, man. keep it up

    #78 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>89930 I know what safemode is (especially after being forced to use it for a week) and there is a reason you can't do much on safemode.

    #79 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I just read chapter 1... wow... that was long.

    but dude, that was FANTASTIC like, really. I love your writing style, and the way you tied your own ideas into the actual story was really, really interesting to see. I'm tracking, I understand how these take forever to write, but i'll be looking forward to your next update!

    #80 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>91246

    Glad to hear you like it so far! Let me know what you think of episode 2 and beyond; I always love feedback.

    #81 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Twilight's a bit hypocritical, don't you think? :ajsmug:

    Keep up the laughs!

    #82 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Well, at least you make some references to past episodes. That's what make this good, and your adult-themed jokes are HILARIOUS!:rainbowlaugh:

    #83 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>92373

    Continuity and self-referential humor will be far more important in the parody than they are in the actual show. Anything from past episodes is fair game for subsequent entries. As a reader/viewer/fan, I love the feeling of being rewarded for paying close attention to whatever the object of my fandom happens to be, and I hope to impart that feeling to my own readers, at least in some small way.

    As an unrelated side note, I submitted the parody to Equestria Daily, but it's been a week now with no response. I don't think they accepted it :fluttershysad:

    Oh well, you guys are the true fans anyway!

    #84 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 22h ago · · ·
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    im glad you didnt go and call michael bay 'michael neigh'

    #85 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 22h ago · · ·
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    Pfffffffffffffffff!!! I loved the everybody tangent. I agree with Rainbow, it's pretty species neutral. Same with everyone. I never saw the point of everpony....oh well.

    This is classic! XD

    #86 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>98262

    There's a strange phenomenon to the parody, where Hollywood, movies, tv shows, literature, general pop culture, etc. all explicitly exist. However, whether they're "pony-fied" or not is something I've left pretty vague. And besides, I don't think I need to add any more horse-based puns to this universe. Having to type Fillydelphia was enough for me! Haha.

    >>98290

    Glad you liked it! Also, since I forgot to leave this as the initial comment like I intended to:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4c6J8HoYswU&t=9m53s

    The whole rant was inspired by my surprise when I rewatched the episode.

    #87 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 14h ago · · ·
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    Oh please, have mercy! My intestines are practically bursting with laughter! Their reasons, as always, make much more sense than the show. Somehow I get the feeling that you're deliberately trying to outdo the show!:pinkiegasp: Brilliant!:pinkiehappy:

    #88 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 11h ago · · ·
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    :moustache:

    #89 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 8h ago · · ·
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    The amount of laughter caused by Rarities monologue... It could fuel the world.

    #90 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4h ago · · ·
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    Hehehe.... Horn Hole. I died when I read that.

    #91 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy saying: "For science." Reminded me of Portal. Unrelated to the story. Which is hilarious, by the way. :rainbowlaugh:

    #92 · Chapter 2 · 71w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I'm loving the story so far... BUT WHATS SO BAD ABOUT BUTTERSCOTCH, I personally enjoy it. Anyhow, keep up the good work.

    #93 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Ehh, not too thrilled with this chapter. I knew the restaurant scene would be problematic, and I've kind of been putting off writing it. (As well, I'm probably the only person who will find the waiter funny.)

    Nonetheless, I'm glad to have introduced the idea of dragon permits, which will be a recurring problem for Spike. And I've got some good ideas for upcoming scenes. I just wanted to upload this now to hopefully give myself a clean slate for writing tomorrow.

    #94 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>105150

    Not so. I laughed heartily.

    #95 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>105150 again, not so. i enjoyed the waiter. and i also enjoyed this chapter. it doesnt have as many pop culture references or lesbian jokes or evil conservative jokes, but its still incredibly awesome. specially the mayor. just completely random, actin all suspicious and whatnot. and now that i mention it, why would the waiter confess to murder in front of the mayor? cant she have him arrested? :pinkiecrazy:

    #96 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>105194 It's an elaborate conspiracy involving two barrels, Twilight, a dead Twilight, and two tickets.

    #97 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>105403 thats very elaborate and complex.

    #98 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well, I sort of don't want to spoil the fun, but the mayor had already walked away by the time the waiter started his diatribe. I made sure to layer that in there.

    Don't shoot the messenger... :fluttercry:

    #99 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 3d ago · · ·
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    wow new chapter already? also i love the idea of the pinkie board:rainbowlaugh:

    #100 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Oy! Cheap shot Derpy!

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