• Member Since 30th Dec, 2011
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CheeseTails


I write things.

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Tom never was the one for vacations, but after the deceiving words of the cruel unicorn, Rarity, he decides he deserves a break. But as he continues his lament, he realizes that miracles do happen...

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My mind is full of :twilightoops: right now, I don't get this at all...

Haha, Tom and Bloomberg!

Oh, and poor Tom.

I decided today that I would go onto FIMfiction, and pick the very first story in their browsing menu. It was indeed, this very fic. My expectations somewhere beneath low and nonexistant.

SO I thought this was pretty friggin fantastic. Have an approving Big Mac!




:eeyup:

This... is the best damn thing to come across this site in ages. Good god this needs to be featured.

Easily the funniest fic I've read.:rainbowlaugh:

Aah! The title puns! They hurt! :fluttershbad:

The fic admittedly made me grin like an idiot.

Keep up the humor, mate!

HAH! I'm gonna give you a thumbs up just to be cruel! :trollestia:

I've considered writing a story where Tom is the new Element of Loyalty. After all, a boulder will always be there for you.

Cheesus gives his seal of approval:moustache:

One of the most moving tales of of love and dedication I've ever had the pleasure of reading.

at least his rocky personality didn't get in the way for his stoned cruise :rainbowdetermined2:

The ending made me LOL. Poor Tom, he was just so excited that he forgot about that tiny little detail called the ocean. XD
Also, terrible title puns are terrible =P

Da heck.
People actually like this sort of crap? Color me surprised.
My mind is absolutely filled with horseapples right now.

Don't worry! Rocks don't need to breath so he'll be ok! Maybe... :applejackconfused:

Throughout the story i was just like :rainbowhuh:
Then I lol'd.:rainbowlaugh:

Especially at the part where Tom ranted how the author had to cram some nonsential words to make it 1000 words. So true...

I approve of this... story. Yes, I do. You know who else approves?

i.imgur.com/jdhbg.gif

YOU CAN'T ARGUE WITH THE BATMAN!

''What pathetic attempt to get the words up to 1000 words because FIMFiction would not let the writer publish with any less than 1000 words! Cheese is the best food that exists! Trixie is the best pony!''


I LOST IT RIGHT THERE. :rainbowlaugh:

it took me a bit for me to get the title, but i loled:rainbowlaugh:

This is actually the second time I'm reading this and I'm still loling just as hard as I did the first time. :pinkiecrazy:

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