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What happens when the cupcakes keep selling? Somepony has to meet demands and it may as well be Pinkie. Follow the descent into madness as Ponyville continues to harbor this twisted darkness. Who can stand against it? Twilight? The princesses? Only time can tell as we follow Pinkie to the pits of hell.
I had the first 19 chapters done already and posted on fanfiction.net
I considered trying to get this on EQD but their thing said 'no more cupcake stories' 
then someone suggested this site so i'm putting it up. I think i like fanfiction.net better though. I can't figure out how to do stuff on this site >.<
Please, enjoy.
I have it up on another site, fanfiction.net and it's got, i think eleven or twelve people who have subscribed to the story/favorited it. It's got several thousands hits on that site too and it's only been up for about two weeks, so it's doing fairly well. I just wanted more people to see it so i put it here.
But, yeah I know what youre talkin about with the anti-cupcakes sentiment everypony seems to have.
you know, if you dont like these you dont have to read em. It just make you an idiot for reading em.
Also, whats wrong with feeling happy about others' pain? Reality is an abstract construct based entirely in the feeble layer of our concious mind. Reality is as you percieve it. The feeling of power gained through warping the reality of both yourself and others is difficult to come by otherwise, nigh on impossible. Every function of the body and even the laws of physics can be overruled if your concious mind ignores it. Take for example those who feel no pain or walk on flaming coals. Their mind is trained, whether naturally or manually, to ignore these feelings and thus is unaffected by them. Bees are, aerodynamically speaking, too big to fly as compared to their wingspan. They have no way of knowing this and thus continue to fly
As for the 'mindless torture porn' look deeply and you will see none of this is mindless. It seems that way on the outside but nothing I do is mindless. There are ever plans being laid, fortresses erected, walls smashed. Limits are purely mental and I intend to manipulate them to the best of my abilities. As for 'porn' i actually felt uncomfortable including that here as it dtracted from the story. Clopfic gets its own stories.
"Man was stripped to the core and all that remained was madness"
-Stephen King, Cell
"Human aggresion is instinctual.Humans have not evolved any ritualized aggresion-inhibiting mechanisims to ensure the survival of the species. For this reason, man is considered a very dangerous animal."
-Konrad Lorenz
I dont pretend to be anything. But no I'm not a psychopath, or at least, not acting like one. I just happen to be smarter than most (though i do know plenty of people smarter than me, but theyre a little ridiculous, like the next Stephen hawkings kind of people, I'm your regular old mad scientist smart) and I happen to think a lot. Those are merely observations I've made over the years. If you take the time to test them, you'll see that they're all quite true. Start out with something non-threatening, such as hunger or thirst and work your way up. Eventually you can ignore nearly all bodily needs, it isn't necessarily enjoyable but training your body and mind like that has its uses: patience, perserverence, etc. All desirable qualities to an extent. Some just abuse this knowledge, such as the mane six in the various grimdarks
Though i will admit that when talking to detractors, both potential and otherwise, I tend to remove my usualy good natured self from my words, so in essence I suppose this could be a slight glimpse at my Id.
"Where's the fun in making sense?"
-Discord, MLP Fim Season 2 Episode 1
>>Krushnazag Written well, but my roommate (after reading the whole part about rainbow dash) punches the wall yells why and stormed off you left me with a hole in my wall.
oh 
well, my apologies. Do you mean the whole.... did something to her body part? Or the thing at the end of chapter 20?
To be honest it's the manipulating bodies thing that actual made me want to write the story. I had the idea for Twilight's change (that was used in the story) and I wrote the story around it. Needless to say none of the other changes were as good as the Twilight one... in my opinion at least.
Why do you have to kill or ruin all I love!
I must fight back!
>>453291 I am said roommate and Yarrick did a terrible job retelling the story. I personally like Dash the best and when Yarrick made me read "Cupcakes", I wanted to stab him with the business end of a ball point pen. Now that there is a sequel that is decently written, I punched a hole in the wall and yelled "Why?!" is the memory of that story.
*Hangs head low and eyes the shotgun in the corner of the room.*
I personally wasn't affected by cupcakes like a lot of bronies seem to be. idk i like the grimdarks. But i read Sweet Apple Massacre and now i can see where they're coming from with that.
But hey, I'm not destroying EVERYTHING, the forest got replanted. And Pinkie fixed up the -modified- corpses But, I'm trying to make it more than an effortless slaughter, look at what Fluttershy got away with. Applejack did pretty well too... until Pinkamena actually did something.
If it's any comfort, Pinkie won't be getting away unscathed at the end of the story. No, the Pinkie fans will also dislike me for posting this story. BTW, am i the only one who noticed that to punish me for a cupcakes sequel you have pinkie using a Twilight gatling gun?
honestly, no matter what people are saying, i like the fact that theyre commenting on the story. Just says theyre paying attention :3
besides, you guys aren't badmouthing it, at least not openly, and he's really just putting up little image things that i find quite entertaining. You're both more than welcome to say whatever you want, I'm fine with it... so long as you don't call me or my story stupid or a rip-off, then we've got a problem. but for now, post away 
also, sorry if some of my earlier comments came off as angry, they weren't meant to but it seems to me like they might have. 
I can see how this goes along with the story but u should consider posting it as a one shot with all the parts about rainbow and twilight missing taken out it would be a rather cute little sparity story on its own
especialy since a fair number of people stay away from cupcake based stories such a shame to see something like this get overlooked by the more shipping based bronies cause of it
I see what youre saying. The Spike and Rarity thing was supposed to be a short thing but it caught on with me and it began to grow. Me and Pinkie mostly allowed it to to ease up on the grimdark of the story for people who would read it but might stop because of some of the grimdark.... almost a comic relief sort of thing. Plus it sets up some stuff later that became woven in as the whole story grew.
I'll consider doing that though. Thanks for the idea /]*
you get used to it but isnt it wierd at first? My mom was talking and i swear she said somepony. I nearly peed myself. then i was reading something completely mlp free and i swear it said anypony, i had to read it like eight times before i realized it didnt say that
ahhh, youre at that scene. Well, I have another story planned, check out my profile on fanfiction.net for full details, that's a Spike and Rarity clop. I've never even attempted to write a clopfic before though so I'm not sure how it would turn out, but as for that scene, lets just say Rarity is very, very, very, very kinky. And Spike is oh so willing 
Besides, this story is like a whole new world in my brain, i actually hear Pinkie telling me what to write for her parts, it would be like peeping if i wrote this scene. Though I may do it for the seperate Spike/Rarity story that was suggested earlier.
>>453884 and indeed you should you seem to be quite skilled at making their relationship flow and seem natrual and as for writing clop goes look over Spike's Special Favor, The Tails of Spike's Harem, and Twilight's Treatment (only chapter 5 on this one really) how to write a sensual and piece instead of a activate the porno tounge piece as it were if you feel unsure how to really go about it but u seem to be able to pull off a natrual feeling relationship well enough i doubt you'd have to much issue
Ya i read a lot of sparity stuff (not gone lie the only reason i started reading this)
P.S. anyone who reads this comment and then goes and looks those up gets to come to pony hell with me yay :)
thanks for the advice, really. I know I can write fairly well and I think I was doin a good job of their relationship. Problem is I'm akward around that... type of situation. Now, I have possibly the dirtiest mind I know but when it comes t being serious about it.... it gets weird for me. I've managed to overcome most of my flaws but this one remains, the worst of them all
I'll look them over and I'll see about... indulging you with that Spike and Rarity chapter. I'll redo parts of the chapters they have to make them fit a little better without the grimdark parts. it may take a bit because of homework and the story itself, but by next weekend there should be the Sparity thing up to at least where my story is right now
three words... PINKIE PIE TIME!
TWENTY PERCENT MORE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Then I said "oatmeal? are you crazy?"
You gotta shaaaaaaare
All you gotta do is take a cup of flower
Put you in trances
or a teeny tiny feather
then i was like *gasp* but who can beat that?
cupcakes, dont be too hasty, cupcakes cupcakes CUPCAKES!!!
PARTY CANNON!!!!!
These ponies don't wanna party, these ponies wanna PAAARTAY!
hop skip and a jump
I threw this party just for you 
*grabs Dalek* *pulls out hammer and nails*
sooooooo....... 
it's good? 
Yes, writing it has done that to me a few times. I think it's in one of the author notes, but i ws talkin to one of the people who've been reading it ever since i first posted it on fanfiction.net and they told me to tell Pinkie they said hi. I thought, what the hay? Why not?
I looked into the corner and thought 'hey pinkie, Timefather says hi'. 
I swear i heard giggling and something touched my neck 
>>471405 dude, ive heard Pinkie in my head talking abou this story (ocaissionally joined by Pinkamena) since like chapter four. I can understand excitement.... she's still here but she leaves the story to me I dont like it, she is supposed to write the dang thing 
>>476083 I smiled as I read this, not sure why, I think it may be the song that came on when I read it. So, tell me. What exactly are the problems with it? 
I'd like to be able to fix em. Just minor discrepancies layered on each other or is there something I need to fix?
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