Rarity desperately needs "a little something" for her super secret project. Pinkie Pie really needs to stock up on Gummies bizarre food. They both need these things from the Everfree forest, so they decide to go together. However something goes horribly wrong... They both realise that they have switched bodies, and so a hilarious adventure ensues as they try to live each others lives whilst trying to find a way to reverse what happened in the forest...
this is a good idea you have here, have a moustache!
Thanks. Have an angelic chicken!
I think that should be 'oh celestia'
I believe you mean RARISPY!
Meh. Raripie is easier.
Too cardboard. Don't like it. But won't downvote, because I already expressed my displeasure here.
Re solid punch:
I'm sad that you dislike it, but I'm very thankful for your opinion. After all, not everyone can like it, right?
Just a bit of constructive criticism, but I think the timberwolf situation was resolved a bit too quickly, I think it was a bit of an unnecessary scene
Now we know where the box came from. Oh, Zecora.
I'm not going to question this stuff... Have a chicken bruh
I thought that the Raripie screaming part, was one of the funnest things I have ever read! Great job!
Interesting start, I must say.
Raripie took a deep breath. A planning meeting would be fine, nothing can go wrong, right?
You tend to da that a lot. I don't think it means what you think it means, Rarity.
Then ships were born
It won't go wrong, but everything ends up disasterous cliché. I love it!
Not sure why it bug me but why are the chapters cut intnto such tinytiny amounts
A bit bland. But Zecora causing a body switch actually did happen in the show. Fun to look at old fics and see what they got right.
Necesitaremos nombres en clave para nosotros mismos, porque de otro modo los lectores no sabrán quiénes somos!"
"Pinkie Pie, ¿qué lectores?"
"Oh, ya sabes, la gente que está leyendo esto".
"¿Leer qué?"
"¡Puedo ser Pinkity, porque soy Pinkie Pie siendo Rarity, y tú puedes ser Raripie, porque tu Rarity es Pinkie Pie!
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