Prolouge
It was a slow, quiet evening at the Poniville Health and Care center... around an hour after midnight, and not much was going on at the moment. Nurse Redheart was just finishing up an appointment with a patient of hers at the front desk.
“Well... after a couple of tests and careful calculations, I’m happy to say that… you’re not pregnant, Miss Hooves.”
“Alright!” the grey mare shouted; but then she looked confused, “Wait a minute… I’m not? But that means I accidentally woke my daughter up in the middle of the night for nothing!”
"Yeah..." groaned Dinky who was there with her for support, "thanks again for that by the way."
“I'm sorry that your... um, motherly instinct was wrong," said Redheart, "I’m not saying that you having another foal is bad though; but word of advice… maybe you should think before you act, or at least find out if the stallion who knocked you up will support you in the end. I’m just saying.”
“That’s what I told her,” said Dinky, “She always tell me to restrain myself from temptation. But ooooooh no; when stallions try to seduce her, it’s a completely different story.”
“But they do ask nicely.”
Redheart face-hoofed herself and shook her head while she tried to make Derpy realize, “Just understand, Miss Derpy; you obviously raised a responsible young mare and I’m sure she loves you very much, so… just do what she does. Okay?”
Derpy just smiled and saluted to her, “Will do, Nurse.”
“Come on, Mom,” said Dinky as she led her mother out, “'YAWN' Maybe we can get your mind off of things with some Muffins before we go back to bed.”
“Ooh, sounds like a great idea!”
Afterwards, Nurse Redheart calmly walked into the business office where she slumped down on a chair feeling bored. Another nurse, Nurse Sweetheart was there as well.
“What a night, wouldn't you say?” asked Sweetheart.
“I’ll say,” Redheart responded, “Nothing usually happens this time of night. I’m not saying that I wish ponies would hurt themselves or anything else so they can come here at night, but… sometimes I wish I can get something to help give me a boost to finish out the night, you know.”
Suddenly, the doctor named Nursery Rhyme burst into the office in a frenzy, “Girl girls girls; I’m sorry to interrupt your break, but this is no time to rest!”
“What’s going on, Miss Rhyme?” said Redheart as she hopped on her hooves, “What’s got you so much in a tizzy? And weren't you about to turn in for the night?”
“I was, but I'm afraid that we have a huge, complicated emergency situation on our hooves! I’m afraid… it’s finally happening.”
Normally that kind of statement wouldn’t make any sense without more of an explanation; but for Redheart and Sweetheart, they knew what that meant.
“Holy horseshoes,” Sweetheart shouted, “it is time for that already?! I figured that we still had a couple more months! This dosen't sound good.”
“Nurse Sweetheart,” commanded Redheart, “alert the supervisor staff; we’re going to need as many hooves as we can on this one! Heh, guess I opened my mouth too soon.”
A few moments at the entrance of the center, a stretch bed busted through the doors with some medical ponies steering it; and laying on it fully pregnant and about to burst, was Apple Bloom! She was laying there flat on her back and holding onto her stomach that housed her newborn; and she was howling in pain from the labor.
“Make way, ponies; make way! We have a major pregnancy on our hands; the biggest one yet!”
Also, running right beside her, making sure she was alright was her new lover, Spike.
“Apple Bloom, hang in there! Just keep breathing in and out; in and out!”
“WHUT THE HELL DO YA THINK AH’M DOIN’?!!!” Apple Bloom shouted at him suddenly.
Spike was suddenly quiet at her outburst and then hesitantly said, “I-I-I was just e-encouraging you.”
As they went on, Apple Bloom’s friends, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo came in from behind and asked one of the nearby employees, “Which way did they take A.B?!”
As soon as the employee pointed in the direction, Apple Bloom’s friends instantly ran off in a hurry. The employee suddenly saw Apple Bloom’s big brother, Big Macintosh calmly walk in as he saw Sweetie and Scootaloo run off.
“Your sister’s friends?” the employee asked the red stallion.
“Yep.”
The ponies rushing Apple Bloom were nearing their destination when Apple was whining again from her pain feeling her baby coming close, “It’s comin’; Ah can feel it comin’! Why… wh-why did Ah let you do this to me?!”
“Me?!” Spike strongly suggested, “You’re the one who threw yourself on me! You were making it really hard for me to resist!”
“You’re just makin’ up excuses, Spike; and now because of you, Ah’m about to have a real-live baby pop out of me!”
“But I…”
“That’s… just her hormones talking,” said one of the medical ponies, “She doesn’t truly mean it.”
“Yes Ah do!”
“She really doesn’t.”
They finally got to the emergency room and carried Apple Bloom inside. However, Nurse Redheart halted Spike before he went in himself, “What; can’t I go in?”
“We have to make sure that she’s okay first. After all, this is the first time we helped deliver a birth to a possible hybrid.”
“What;” Spike panicked, “Do you guys even know what you’re doing?!”
“To be honest… we don’t.”
“Are you kidding me!?”
“I’m just kidding, but we have been preparing for this very moment; and now we’re going to put that preparing to work.”
Spike became more worried than he already was knowing what Apple Bloom was going through. All he wanted was her to survive the birthing process.
“Hey, don’t worry,” said Redheart as she patted Spike on his back, “she’ll be fine. Just stay out here and we’ll let you in once it’s safe enough.”
Spike just stood there completely still staring at the doors that Redheart went through constantly. A few seconds later, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo caught up to him and asked him, “Is… A.B… alright?”
They both suddenly saw Spike crying feeling sorry for himself, “I… I-I-I don’t know. If something does happen to Apple Bloom… it will be all my fault.”
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It’s been almost 8 months since Apple Bloom experienced her first heat period and mated with Spike. It was the most wonderful moment that she ever experienced, and the same goes for Spike; but at what price? Some time passed by after that, and it was confirmed that Apple Bloom became pregnant with her and Spike’s offspring. It was quite a surprise to many knowing that a pony was impregnated by a dragon. If it was possible, what would baby the look like? Would it be more pony than dragon; more dragon than pony; or would it be something in-between? Well, no one knew exactly of what it would be, but Apple Bloom and Spike were about to experience the most important moment of their lives… if they could survive through the process first.
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Well, it starts.
!
Little sad the rate went down but I guess it's for the best. 'Sex' tag would be still nice though. There's always foreplay
Can't wait to image what the foal will look like
!
@AngelShy24...
Just a friendly point-out, Big Mac's proper full-name is Big McIntosh, exactly like the Real Life apple cultivar; rather than Big MacIntosh, like the computer brand.
Pretty nice.
This was worth the wait.
What is the prequel to this?
4784719
I actually meant to put that in my description.
"Blooming Heat."
4782875 there are Art work of the kid just look at the sorse
This will be interesting
4784774 yeah, I know. But, something new would be better. And hopefully different from the kids he has with, Rarity.
8 months? It takes 11 for a mare to give brith to her foal.
4784746 Why not link it in the description? Like, really? Serms lerk er smert ider.
4785459
It's probably a mature-rated story so no linking allowed.
Also, prologue is spelled wrong.
4785830 ...You know what a sequel is, right? Now, what does -pre stand for? Figure it out.
4785837
What exactly does that explanation have to do with my comment?
It's site rules that you cannot link NSFW content from SFW pages. The prequel is rated mature, but this is not. Therefore, the prequel cannot be linked from this page. If this story was rated mature, it could be.
4785850 You said I spelled prologue wrong. I did not spell prologue.
4785275 good point
4785868
Note the double space between what I said to you and the prologue bit.
I was speaking to the author then, about the chapter title.
4785902 ...You should have made that more clear.
4784746
Do I need to read Blooming Heat first?
4786048
In my opinion... yes; but not necessarily.
4786124
That is a relief for me. Thank you.
You wrote a sequel? I was wondering why this premise sounded so familiar.
You know, if you click on "edit story" and put the code 51977 in the box that says so, the prequel will actually be tagged, and it will make everything easier to your readers.
4785393 I was about to say the same thing lol.
Write faster you magnificent bastard!
4786830
I'll do my best, but I'm not exactly known to be a fast typewritter.
4786961 Just make to update at least 1 time in 2 weeks with a big chapter ;)
I asm very excited to see what happens next, all I ask for is quality chapters over quantity of chapters, at least one per month would be nice.
4786961
Most quality literary writing follows a simple yet time-tested writing axiom:
Don't Rush. Don't Delay.
Don't Rush... Take the time you need to put out a written work that you the Author are at least "80% satisfied" with (note "quotations"). Do not feel forced to put out something just because of a "deadline" or because your reader audience is clamoring for "moar!" Likewise, Real Life has a tendency to get in the way of literary writing (especially fan-fiction writing). Take the [time + effort] to put out something that you can say, "I am (at least mostly) satisfied with what I put out."
Don't Delay... The very important counter-balance to Don't Rush. While you should not force yourself to push something out, nor should you (& the reader audience) suffer from continual delays, procrastination, push backs, &/or put offs. It is far too easy to fall prey to the soft-cushioned trap of Slothfulness, or the honeyed poison of an excuse of not being "100% satisfied" with your work. The bones of far too many potentially great fan-fictions lie bleached and forgotten upon the Incomplete Wastelands and the On Hiatus Deserts.
On the outside:
On the inside: 1-media-cdn.foolz.us/ffuuka/board/vp/image/1400/20/1400204618388.jpg
Perhaps link the story in the side of the page or at least as a hyperlink...?
I don't know how, but you can site this as a sequel to blooming heat. If you do, I think people who have blooming heat favorited will get a notification about this story.
It's finally HERE!!!!!!
OH BABY! (pun intended) It's here!
4784746
Will he/she be a hybrid?
4794700
Most definately.
4794991
Awesome!
yo bro.
tag your sequels.
4795572
If I believe it correctly, there are rules now that basically outlaw links to explicit content, and I think that also includes stories as well.
Based on the new rules, the author could not link Blooming Heat to this, even though we know that this is a sequel to the first, because the first is a clopfic. And there have been a lot of complaints about the amount of clopfics and how easily that they can be accessed, and that the people that complain about them claim that they got them "by accident" (For the record, I call bullshit: If you don't want to see porn, there are ways to hide the content, like de-clicking the view mature button. It makes you seem like a huge asshole when you complain about something that you have full control whether you see it or not.)
4797099
I call those people "morons that should not be in the gene pool."
4787984 I second this feeling.
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nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrree
pls
I'm thinking a pony but covered in scales and has Dragon eyes
4808414
Take note that being part-something in equestria seems to be taken literally. Griffins: Half Eagle, Half Lion. Minotaur: Half Man, Half Bull. So on. Depending on what type of dragon spike is, the baby could have dragon wings considering the interactions between magical creatures DNA. im throwing my bets on the kid being Half Earth Pony, and Half Wyvern. or Wyrm, depending on your interpretation. but most definitely one of the two considering how hard MLP leans to the Western interpretation of Drakes and their ilk.
4810134 that sounds reasonable.
4787919 Oh don't worry..
He'll fuck it up...
4797099 Actually, if the reader is not a user, clicking a link to a Mature story will bring it up without trouble.